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I repeat, you got a lot wrong.
Pointing out flaws is fine, pointing out what you perceive as a flaw but is perfectly fine looks pretentious.
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Pointing out flaws is fine, pointing out what you perceive as a flaw but is perfectly fine looks pretentious.
Since you won't let it go, allow a former English teacher to review your work.
So, some you are right about, some you aren't right about. Why not join the Patreon or submit this to the Discord where it will actually do some good, and not hidden on a pirate site?
Not in this context. You don't need a comma.
Not in the context. "say" is perfectly valid in this sentence.
Yes, there should be a comma, but, remember, using the name of the almighty requires a capital letter.
Nope, these are two separate sentences. Imagine a pause after she says "so".
Yup, you are right.
It does look like an error, yes.
Again, correct.
I'm not sure what your problem is with this one. She is repeating the code phrase.
Since it is a question, this would actually require an interrobang, which can be represented like "!?" or "‽".
The ellipses at the start indicate there was a pause or an uncomfortable silence before she started to speak.
Yup, correct.
Correct on both.
Actually this should be "Together, with your help, we'll be unstoppable.".
Wrong on "Officially,", correct on "leave."
The use of "For" is fine here.
Yup, correct.
Correct.
Correct.
No, this one is fine.
Corrrect.
Nope, this one is fine.
In this context, no, you don't need the quotation marks.
This is a common error people make while speaking. While you are grammatically correct, it is something I can imagine a person saying in this context.
Nope, that is fine.
Correct.
Correct.
Not in this context.
Correct.
The comma is fine.
Correct.
As discussed before, the ellipses at the start indicates a pause or an uncomfortable silence before the character speaks.
This one is fine. While there are six beers, a six-pack is a singular item. Beers would be fine if they were individal cans.
So, some you are right about, some you aren't right about. Why not join the Patreon or submit this to the Discord where it will actually do some good, and not hidden on a pirate site?
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I'll admit, that's a new one. Don't think I've ever seen someone get spell checked (grammar checked?) on this site. Personally as far as I'm concerned so long as it's legible who cares, it's infinitely better when compared to some of the Japanese translations on this site so I really don't understand. Especially if it's only minor errors spread out throughout the game. I'd like to see any of these people write a story from start to finish without any need for edits once they're done.
Normally I wouldn't do that, but this guy will not let it go.
Thank God he's not playing my game.
I just wanted to compliment you on the awesome Game title xD not gonna play it but it must be really hard marketing an actual roomates game in a world where everyone thinks its a code for incest 
Game's done, thread updated!
Episode of Cat is no longer a stand-alone thing, but it's included in the main game.
Now to wait for the line of people bitching about the conditions of unlocking the Legend ending or arguing about where commas go.
Episode of Cat is no longer a stand-alone thing, but it's included in the main game.
Now to wait for the line of people bitching about the conditions of unlocking the Legend ending or arguing about where commas go.
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Congrats on finishing your game. I've greatly enjoyed it. Team Jessica
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Congrats!
How to unlock Legend ending though? /s
How to unlock Legend ending though? /s
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I played the shit out of all the endings, some of them are funny as fuck (especially the "orgy"? one on the Emily route
). If the sequel is anything close to this one, it's gonna fucking rock!. Congrats Hanako for finishing your game, and good luck with the next one.
). If the sequel is anything close to this one, it's gonna fucking rock!. Congrats Hanako for finishing your game, and good luck with the next one.thank you so much HanakoXVN i`ve really enjoyed actual roommates, can`t wait to see what adventures we get upto in actual roommates 2
much love
and again thank you
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Sad because it's over but happy because now the dev can focus on Neon Heart or whatever else they wanna do
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I'm both happy and sad; happy for you to have completed the game but sad that it has actually ended. I'm looking forward to any future projects.