Ren'Py Abandoned Gravity Files [v1.1 Full] [CritBlix]

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Overview:
This is a Parody game of the animated series show.
Which you, Go deep on the mysteries of the town, meet girls and discover what's beneath it?​

Thread Updated: 2020-11-25
Release Date: 2020-11-19
Developer: CritBlix

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Censored: No
Version: 1.1 Full
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Holyyy]

Amazing art. I hope this gets regular updates.

 

[Count_Viraxis]

.....
"Watch" *click*

 

[derguy]

looks fine

 

[lostsoul11111113]

nice hahaaahhahaahahah

 

[jowishg]

Nice to see more parodies

 

[NoBrainTrust]

Without any polished previews i mark that as a "milk a successfull show for your own patreon greed"-thing

 

[Holyyy]

Oh good the English is pretty bad. Maybe get a native speaker to look over it next time.

 

[erg1986]

It's just 1 minute preview with 0 content.

Text speed options doesn't seem to work and the default is too slow.

 

[darkxsinon]

It has potential but so far the game is only a prologue not to mention the fact it seems to have some bugs in the language settings all in all il wait till you bring us something playable before I decide my final verdict.

 

[Sinxflavio2]

It's... Promising

 

[Dipper Pines]

This game is speaking my language!

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[ZanaSenpai]

Who's the protag?

 

[FatalJ]

looks very good, can't wait for more.

 

[zeraligator]

After a few sentences it becomes clear that the translator is not a native speaker. A lot of sentences don't sound quite as nice as they probably do in Spanish(?), they are simply statements that make use of basic english to get the message across. It's a lot better than an MTL but it doesn't really convey what (could be) some very good/creative writing. I think just using/looking up some synonims might help to spice up the translated writing.
Also a few lines after the 'remember to change the language' message it reads 'It explodes' which doesn't seem to refer to anything.

 

[StratoSquir]

let me guess "all characters are over the age of 18"?
jokes asides the art look great

 

[zeraligator]

let me guess "all characters are over the age of 18"?
jokes asides the art look great

Nope, over 21.
And I agree.

 

[Annonx]

Gravity Falls + Good art

The hype is real

 

[Deleted member 407466]

I like the art, but the writing feels almost like a machine translation.