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Five months for producing a fart like this? Are you kidding us?
That's highly subjective. About the only think I'd commend is that at least you stated that its just your opinion.IMO, you shouldn't start a story at the beginning of the cheating courtships. The glances, the touches. All that shit happens mostly in the heads of the two people contemplating cheating. Make it an early on choice whether or not to pursue, get the "first time" out of the way fast, and then we can follow the developing relationship.
This is why the Pinkcake stories (Acting Lessons, being a DIK), Seeds of Chaos, Sierra Lee's games, and hell, even the much-maligned Summertime Saga remain superior XXX-game experiences.
From what I've played so far, the story is moving at a perfect pace. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I think your game is MILES ahead of anything else on here, all of the characters feel real, Jessica's thought process and decision making is more or less reasonable, especially compared to almost every game on this site, the art is top quality.BeastMaster59 hm, but wouldn't it be satisfying when things happen one day? I mean, I understand the frustration, trust me. I was reading a lewd comics the other day, and things are moving at a really steady pace there, which I enjoy. But the pages are released so damn slow. But if I have to chose between that and the usual stuff, I get that any day. Quick porn is everywhere. Type a random site in the address bar and the chance is you're going to find some fast porn.
lucifer1988 check the previous pages.
I have no problem at all with a slow reasonable story that gets hotter and hotter as its move on with slow burn.BeastMaster59 hm, but wouldn't it be satisfying when things happen one day? I mean, I understand the frustration, trust me. I was reading a lewd comics the other day, and things are moving at a really steady pace there, which I enjoy. But the pages are released so damn slow. But if I have to chose between that and the usual stuff, I get that any day. Quick porn is everywhere. Type a random site in the address bar and the chance is you're going to find some fast porn.
lucifer1988 check the previous pages.
you just want more lesbian scene bec you like it that all hun.That's highly subjective. About the only think I'd commend is that at least you stated that its just your opinion.
Starting in the middle of a faithful relationship about to break down in the coming arc is a common dramatic tactic, and for good reason. It creates layers of emotion and allows us to peer into the inner complexities of a character. It heightens the impression of sex as something more than a biological act to get out of the way. I can understand a preference for games that "get the first time out of the way" immediately (especially for those players looking for quick gratification), but those games are asking different questions of its characters and have different narrative uses for the sexual payouts. Some of your examples don't even do it that well. "Seeds of Chaos" for example, is writing itself in emotional circles that get blander with each rotation. Dr. Pinkcake is good, but he and stoper are not writing the same kinds of stories, and not with the same narrative intentions. If you prefer Dr. Pinkcake's storytelling to stoper's, then fine. But your attempt at invalidating stoper's style is shortsighted and immature.
As for this update, I like it. Sure, I'm all about the intimacy between two women, but I do love how Jessica's life is more layered and contains more than just a sexual neuroses. I can appreciate being made to wait for what I want, provided the journey is worth it. Our Red String, for example, barely even hints at its lesbian potential, but I'm there for the ride anyway. Stoper is trying something worthwhile in the adult gaming space, and I can appreciate both the attempt and the results.