"Meet Amanda- My First AVN Character! Feedback Welcome!"

[Letsnotmention]

Hey everyone! After receiving some amazing feedback on my previous post, I worked on refining my character, Weira. Took your advice on her expressions and added a playful personality. Planning to develop an AVN soon, and I’d love to hear your thoughts on her look and story ideas!

 

[Alternation62]

She looks cute, kind of a 50's air to her. What's her story?

 

[Letsnotmention]

She looks cute, kind of a 50's air to her. What's her story?

Well, for starters she is a married woman in her early 40's and got two children.

 

[Alternation62]

Well, for starters she is a married woman in her early 40's and got two children.

That explains the sundress. Is this going to be an NTR story?

 

[Letsnotmention]

That explains the sundress. Is this going to be an NTR story?

My initial story arch is not NTR, may be sharing that too only if the user decides. If majority of the players recommend NTR, we might include in the future, but definitely not at the beginning.

This'll be story where each character will have a lot of depth.

 

[Alternation62]

My initial story arch is not NTR, may be sharing that too only if the user decides. If majority of the players recommend NTR, we might include in the future, but definitely not at the beginning.

This'll be story where each character will have a lot of depth.

Personally, I HATE netorare so I'm glad to hear that. I like the little diamond undergarments. Is there a story behind that?

 

[Letsnotmention]

Personally, I HATE netorare so I'm glad to hear that. I like the little diamond undergarments. Is there a story behind that?

Looks awesome right? I'm definitely planning on using it, it is not gonna be used in the first episode though. I'm glad that you don't like netorare, same feeling buddy.

 

[ouch2020]

Looks cute, with some expressiveness, a bit more original that most, though I would also say she looks French.

 

[sslovoe]

like to see
you have to build other charcter if want make game
point of story
path story
is there be incest
young boy for wife
old man


what her kid look and old

what she work teacher nurse housewife

wht house apartment or two floor
rich or poor

 

[sslovoe]

i never see game make that type of wife

lot game is make attractive sexy or young
you not make her model
you make her nice neighbor wife next door
very cute
you can make how she nice friendly with neighbor
and they take advantage her nice
with creat face you give lot detail her character
but make her little bigger boob or little wide wist

 

[Letsnotmention]

i never see game make that type of wife
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lot game is make attractive sexy or young
you not make her model
you make her nice neighbor wife next door
very cute
you can make how she nice friendly with neighbor
and they take advantage her nice
with creat face you give lot detail her character
but make her little bigger boob or little wide wist

That

that is a good suggestion, I’ll work on her body!

Im thinking of making her skin more realistic and give her some unique features. I will make her boobs a little bigger, but at the same time I want to keep this VN as realistic as possible, both in the story and in the models.

So, no unbelievably huge penis and boobs.

I will soon introduce the other characters, and I’ll give a small peak of the plot.

 

[Letsnotmention]

Updated breast size for Amanda

age appropriate, kept it as close to natural size and not so firm.

 

[Nulldev]

Girl is very nice!
BUT

NOOOOO! DON'T
"My initial story arch is not NTR, may be sharing that too only if the user decides. If majority of the players recommend NTR, we might include in the future, but definitely not at the beginning."

YOU NEED TO DECIDE NOW AND COMMUNICATE YOUR DECISION!
We saw too many nice game die already because the Dev flip-floped between story elements and fans were furious, all the drama, left the dev broken. Your story, you write it.

That girl is too pretty to die in development hell.

 

[Letsnotmention]

Girl is very nice!
BUT

NOOOOO! DON'T
"My initial story arch is not NTR, may be sharing that too only if the user decides. If majority of the players recommend NTR, we might include in the future, but definitely not at the beginning."

YOU NEED TO DECIDE NOW AND COMMUNICATE YOUR DECISION!
We saw too many nice game die already because the Dev flip-floped between story elements and fans were furious, all the drama, left the dev broken. Your story, you write it.

That girl is too pretty to die in development hell.

haha I feel you buddy, I assure you my story don't have NTR in it. I personally don't like Cucking the MC at all.

 

[Letsnotmention]

Help me decide a hairstyle for Amanda, I'm aiming for a blonde conservative, calm, loving landlady in her early 40's with two children.

Hair 01:


Hair 02:

 

[Nulldev]

Start with 1. and after a big drama/change in the game, she goes to the hairdresser, to reinvent herself?

 

[Letsnotmention]

Start with 1. and after a big drama/change in the game, she goes to the hairdresser, to reinvent herself?

I too have something like that in my mind, there's definitely some transformation planned.

 

[allura404]

I really loved Amanda. She looks so unique and like a real milf.

Help me decide a hairstyle for Amanda, I'm aiming for a blonde conservative, calm, loving landlady in her early 40's with two children.

Hair 01:
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Hair 02:

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I guess I'd say 2 for this.

Would you consider a shapely bush for her? It definitely wouldn't be bad.

I'm in favor of you making her a little thicker. I think a little more breast and hip/butt enlargement wouldn't be bad. Daz moms look good with big breasts and hips. Ofc I'm not talking about her being a bimbo. I found Amanda a bit thin.

Do you have a public discord server? I don't want to miss out, it looks promising.

 

[ouch2020]

I really loved Amanda. She looks so unique and like a real milf.


I guess I'd say 2 for this.

Would you consider a shapely bush for her? It definitely wouldn't be bad.

I'm in favor of you making her a little thicker. I think a little more breast and hip/butt enlargement wouldn't be bad. Daz moms look good with big breasts and hips. Ofc I'm not talking about her being a bimbo. I found Amanda a bit thin.

Do you have a public discord server? I don't want to miss out, it looks promising.

Well, just to mess around, here you have a vote against.
Too many characters in games and VN, especially if 40s, that are easier and faster to jump above than to go around :-D due to the Zeppelins above and below (but with a waist thinner than a 20 years old), after a bit, is stale.
For me, she is good also exactly because resemble many women in their 40s who keep in shape, but the "keeping in shape" means they are close to Amanda, not to series of balloons assembled - this would also make your work a bit more original.

 

[allura404]

Well, just to mess around, here you have a vote against.
Too many characters in games and VN, especially if 40s, that are easier and faster to jump above than to go around :-D due to the Zeppelins above and below (but with a waist thinner than a 20 years old), after a bit, is stale.
For me, she is good also exactly because resemble many women in their 40s who keep in shape, but the "keeping in shape" means they are close to Amanda, not to series of balloons assembled - this would also make your work a bit more original.

Amanda's skin looks quite detailed and juicy. Dev says he will continue to adjustments with her skin. Daz milfs with detailed skin already look quite juicy (many milfs here have very smooth and artificial skin). I also think they reach an even more amazing level with their adjusted breast and hip size. I think Linda and Lauren would be a good example in this regard. Also, with noticeably big breasts and hips, it would be easier to make teasing scenes that would attract the player's attention other than sexual scenes. This is a situation that works well for slow burn games.

There is no clear true for these situations. It's normal to have differences of opinion. It may be best for the dev to make the game in the way they enjoy it the most.