VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.3] [Eva Kiss]

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Gicoo

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Why would it be an outrage if Jeremy fucked Ivy before Ian? He was into her first and earlier. He also fucked Louise earlier and Axel fucked Lena and Cherry first, while Wade fucked Cindy first. Ian is not the only dick in town with a monopol on every girl.

The main issue is that Ivy content dragged on too long with too little substance. I don't mind a slow burn and Ivy not falling for Ian in like chapter 3. Other girls like Holly or Cindy also took their time and it was well done. I would rewrite Ivys birthday in chapter 10 so that Ian can also be controlled and choose which girl he can end the night. Including Ivy as a birthday present. Also, Lena only being able to end up with Ivy there and dismissing every other guy sucks as well.
 
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The issue with Louise is not the character itself, but how both MCs disregard her and hardly see her more than just a fuckdoll. Lena always pushes her away because Louise got too clingy, and Ian is pretty smug about her from the get-go. Louise has a bit of the Robert treatment in how she isn't taking seriously, is usually presented in a bad light and ends up in unlucky situations.
 
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Nifferman said:
Different weight class buddy. Ian is a FW or a WW whereas Jeremy is a MW or a LHW. And Jeremy is always cool with Ian fucking around, he even gives him a high-five if Ian had a 3some with Louise and Lena.
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Ah that's true. But Jeremy being cool with Ian fucking around with other girls might not apply to the girl he wants to get, people are not always consistent .

But like others have said the upcoming shoot is a good opportunity for Ivy/Jeremy.
 
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Asmodean2 said:
Ah that's true. But Jeremy being cool with Ian fucking around with other girls might not apply to the girl he wants to get, people are not always consistent .
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Jeremy is. You can "steal" Alison from him and he takes in very good sports and sees it as a friendly competition. If Ian fucks Ivy before him, he won't be mad at him, and just congratulates him for doing gods work. If he sees Ian succeed, he considers it an inspiration to emulate him, he isn't salty and doubting Ians success and questioning if he cheated or something. Jeremy is just too simpleminded to held a grudge.
 
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Most women are just thin-skinned about even the slightest bit of commentary that many guys would just consider pretty milque-toast kidding around with each other.

If a woman enters a male dominated space, she can either:
A.) Be a <female anatomy c-word> and demand they adjust to her expectations, thus ruining the space, because guys can't just relax and be themselves,
B.) Adjust to the expectations and just learn to exchange witty comments as well.

The most harassment women get, is from other women, so the worst platforms are places like pinterest and such. It's crazy, if you think about it.
 
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notstaged

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MixQQ said:
Both MC are boring. Dev can't even create a proper MMF/DP for Lena not to mention gangbang scenes.
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"Female protagonist haven't been stuffed with dicks like a Christmas turkey therefore both of POVs characterizations fails."

:rolleyes:

Xupuzulla said:
nerds of this thread hate her
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EK seems to hate her, that's for sure, can't even write anything nice about the character without comparing her to the others, which is just mean.

Python: 
    if v12_ian_lena_breakup or v12_ian_lena_over or ian_lena_couple or ian_lena_dating:
        "Louise was nowhere near as hot and stunning as Lena, but she was still pretty. More than enough to get me turned on."
    elif ian_cherry_sex or ian_alison_sex or ian_cindy_sex or ian_lena_sex:
        "Louise wasn't the most stunning girl I'd been with, but she was still pretty... More than enough to get me turned on."
    else:
        "Maybe she wasn't as hot as Ivy or as stunning as Lena, but she was still a pretty girl... More than enough to get me turned on."
 
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notstaged said:
"Female protagonist haven't been stuffed with dicks like a Christmas turkey therefore both of POVs characterizations fails."

:rolleyes:



EK seems to hate her, that's for sure, can't even write anything nice about the character without comparing her to the others, which is just mean.

Python: 
    if v12_ian_lena_breakup or v12_ian_lena_over or ian_lena_couple or ian_lena_dating:
        "Louise was nowhere near as hot and stunning as Lena, but she was still pretty. More than enough to get me turned on."
    elif ian_cherry_sex or ian_alison_sex or ian_cindy_sex or ian_lena_sex:
        "Louise wasn't the most stunning girl I'd been with, but she was still pretty... More than enough to get me turned on."
    else:
        "Maybe she wasn't as hot as Ivy or as stunning as Lena, but she was still a pretty girl... More than enough to get me turned on."
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Comparing her to Ivy,the bitch who refuses to suck dick is just obscene from EK:censored:
 
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notstaged said:
Python: 
    if v12_ian_lena_breakup or v12_ian_lena_over or ian_lena_couple or ian_lena_dating:
        "Louise was nowhere near as hot and stunning as Lena, but she was still pretty. More than enough to get me turned on."
    elif ian_cherry_sex or ian_alison_sex or ian_cindy_sex or ian_lena_sex:
        "Louise wasn't the most stunning girl I'd been with, but she was still pretty... More than enough to get me turned on."
    else:
        "Maybe she wasn't as hot as Ivy or as stunning as Lena, but she was still a pretty girl... More than enough to get me turned on."
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Damn.
She's female Robert.
 
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Do we think there will be an epilogue for chapter 13? If not, based on the gallery, chapter 13 will have the least amount of scenes since chapter 9.
 
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