VN HTML 13 Basic Blunders to Cuckening [v0.15A] [Liturgy]

[biggestboyo]

If you're going to make this game pay only remove it from the site. Scamming customers to pay for a unfinished game that may or may not ever finish is not going to sit well here. There are a small handfull of devs here that has a reputation of completing multiple games within a fair period, while many many many devs milk the living hell out of their patrons on a single game because they plan on retiring after a single game.

Now as for the game itself, the ai art is good. The writing also looks like its done by ai and is cringy. The texts between the mc and the women are horrible, who calls their bf or friend bro?

 

[Liturgy]

...but it's just ridiculous funding a passion project for months or years, to the tune of 5-10 bucks a month, and spending what you'd spend more on a short game than what you would on a triple A title.

You might be too young or new to this, but ten years ago, commissioning a good cuckold story—especially one with Latino or Black elements—was expensive. And that was just for text. If you were a broke teen, you had to rely on generous forum users.

That was my experience, anyway. Netorare stories are much more common now, but I don't think they'll become mainstream anytime soon.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Perfect example of why despite fierce pushbacks in tag discussions (it's come up several times) there should be a bbc tag. This has nothing to do with MC sleeping with indian chicks for example - it's very much its own lane, with own conventions, all unique to that fetish area. Little to do with cheating/cucking/swinging lots do with with skin color obsession.

You might be too young or new to this, but ten years ago, commissioning a good cuckold story—especially one with Latino or Black elements—was expensive. And that was just for text. If you were a broke teen, you had to rely on generous forum users.

That was my experience, anyway. Netorare stories are much more common now, but I don't think they'll become mainstream anytime soon.

Huh who needed to commission stories? Years ago there were reddits packed full of this stuff made by hobbists, now it's just a patreon-advertising wasteland. Of course I'm thinking more in the hotwifetextmessages lane, less in the racial-focus cuckold story so that may be true.

 

[shinner12]

paywalled AI art games lmfao

we have reached new lows

 

[toklap2312]

It would be wise next time, if you wanna go cuck ntr and it is a BBC, don't use black guys as your thumbnail.
For example, 8 regular game pictures of your game 1/8 should be BBC related but like the last one.


That is just the reality if you want to make this game grow. People hate ntr, but they hate ntr-bbc more especially if they make the villain handsome. Ntr and ntr-bbc has some dedicated followers but if you want to bring neutrals which is the majority of the porn game enjoyers, you better hide BBC related pictures.

Before they can even complain, they have to try the game first. Now the review will shift to actual review not on first impression. Which will be usually good since they have fapped and happier meaning they are most likely to give positive reviews.

Some games like life after victory, it is a BBC cuck game but they make the BBC a choice. Like goblin path, bbc path, shouta path, even the game itself only has 1 path the bbc. So the anger towards bbc is deflected by the illusion of choice.

 

[malcolmalbie]

It's always fun to look into a game and find upcoming content.

They ganged up on piper, fucked her skull from every angle. I watched everything away from the kitchen. Hoping none of them can see me.

Piper and Blossom talked about gooning so much and there they were gooning on her without mercy

Piper was too small. They were far too big and too many for her.

Jesus! So fucking tight man. You like a pocket pussy, baby piper, we gonna carry your of here and fuck you any damn minute we want.

They all laughed. THose who weren't fucking any part of Piper were waiting for their turn, to fold and play with Piper's body like playdough too.

They were fucking ruthless. Like, why treat her like this, She's human too. She's my sister goddammit.

They fucked her like an animal...no, like a fucking piece of plastic.

 

[w00d00]

Perfect example of why despite fierce pushbacks in tag discussions (it's come up several times) there should be a bbc tag. This has nothing to do with MC sleeping with indian chicks for example - it's very much its own lane, with own conventions, all unique to that fetish area. Little to do with cheating/cucking/swinging lots do with with skin color obsession.

It would be wise next time, if you wanna go cuck ntr and it is a BBC, don't use black guys as your thumbnail.
For example, 8 regular game pictures of your game 1/8 should be BBC related but like the last one.


That is just the reality if you want to make this game grow. People hate ntr, but they hate ntr-bbc more especially if they make the villain handsome. Ntr and ntr-bbc has some dedicated followers but if you want to bring neutrals which is the majority of the porn game enjoyers, you better hide BBC related pictures.

Before they can even complain, they have to try the game first. Now the review will shift to actual review not on first impression. Which will be usually good since they have fapped and happier meaning they are most likely to give positive reviews.

Some games like life after victory, it is a BBC cuck game but they make the BBC a choice. Like goblin path, bbc path, shouta path, even the game itself only has 1 path the bbc. So the anger towards bbc is deflected by the illusion of choice.

Everyone is complaining that the dev is a tone deaf scammer, not about his tags or the content of the game

 

[Steve Carter]

Everyone is complaining that the dev is a tone deaf scammer, not about his tags or the content of the game

Is NTR avoidable?

Yes. All you have to do is play the public version.

 

[aaaaaaaaa]

nice rip off of incases art

 

[HazedSS7]

Can't wait to see the dev add an exclusive purchasable battlepass to this game, or maybe some more exclusive paid DLC for additional Patreon tiers.

You can really see where the passion of the dev is when it comes to making games, who wants to enjoy the joy of telling stories and creating worlds when there is money to be made! Good luck in your future career as an executive at EA.

 

[misterday]

stuck at phone, anyone?

 

[kyotheman101]

love that the creator of this terrible game gets triggered so hard, you made terrible game using AI, if you going use AI you need have writing talent clearly you do not. I hope people continue keep shitting on this, i wouldn't pay for this crap. Game looks dime a dozen because of AI art. I agree with reviews this just shitty shovelware trying to be a "game"

 

[Icarus Media]

So is this game any good?

 

[cfr_tpl]

So is this game any good?

Can you tell me which checkpoint and LoRa you use

 

[Icarus Media]

 

[biggestboyo]

Fully complete the game and if the art and story is good, i'll consider purchasing the FULL game, until then im sitting this one out as majority of the games are incomplete because many devs thinks this is a get rich quick and just wants to milk simps or kink VNs thinking they can retire from it. Imagine working on a game for a few years, not even completing the first game, milking patrons for hundreds of thousands only to say, "hey guys, i decided to retire or go MIA" ie thanks for the free money idiots, i've made enough to quit.

 

[APC-123]

You worked hard on how to paywalling your game on Patreon while using cheap AI art that was left untouched and below average writing skills.

People nowadays make effort on how to lock their contents on Patreon instead of making effort on creating good content that wasn't delayed on purpose or left to die after drying their usefully idiot supporters.

 

[APC-123]

Fully complete the game and if the art and story is good, i'll consider purchasing the FULL game, until then im sitting this one out as majority of the games are incomplete because many devs thinks this is a get rich quick and just wants to milk simps or kink VNs thinking they can retire from it. Imagine working on a game for a few years, not even completing the first game, milking patrons for hundreds of thousands only to say, "hey guys, i decided to retire or go MIA" ie thanks for the free money idiots, i've made enough to quit.

That's 99% of 'developers' that paywalled their content on Patreon. Some of them even more scummy releasing 30+ days periodically just to milk en dry like a dumb cow. What's the point of creating higher tier when the highest tier still need to wait 30+ days for new release

 

[RottenPlum]

Now it's just exe so you can't check paywalled pics

 

[Varryan]

Now it's just exe so you can't check paywalled pics

If you want the paywalled pics you can basically just google "black guy snowbunny (ai)"