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ifss

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It looks and feels great - very artistic. I have two feedback which might notch it up just a bit:
  1. Show the MC's face. The camera angle is pointing at his neck and shoulder - its awkward. And, the MC's face is needed to know emotion.
  2. All the girls need to emote more. They look stoic a bit too much - eyes, facial expression important during speech text.
 

BigDaddyDom

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It looks and feels great - very artistic. I have two feedback which might notch it up just a bit:
  1. Show the MC's face. The camera angle is pointing at his neck and shoulder - its awkward. And, the MC's face is needed to know emotion
They probably intentionally did that though as part of the immersion experience, so all players can identify with the MC
 

Canto Forte

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After all this time working hard on this project,
we finally got to share it with all of you.
This is a very exciting moment for us.

Here's the first chapter of the game, we hope you like it :)
 

Talmadge

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May 7, 2018
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After all this time working hard on this project,
we finally got to share it with all of you.
This is a very exciting moment for us.

Here's the first chapter of the game, we hope you like it :)
That's great. These Dev's are both really good. Just one thing. Where's the DL? Just on the Patreon page? OR are you going to share it on here?
 

Stephanie98

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kaley gurl it looks like 16 years old to me even if the dev stated she is 20 y old, i have classmate looked just like her but with amber eyes