VN Ren'Py A Perfect Couple [v0.1] [Naughty Narrative]

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This has become so cliché and repetitive that it's nauseating
From just these few sentences, it's clear that this game is just a copy of other games, not a good game

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A phone-based game where the FMC has a very slut friend who recently found a boyfriend... wow, this is the thousandth time I've heard this
Creativity? Absolute zero.
 

anthony9915

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Plan for animations? I hate not seeing any of these phone NTR games have any animations...like common send a video of some stuff to him already lol
 
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I'm still trying to figure out the Android port (got a few more errors left)

In the meantime, I’ve finished setting up my Patreon page and (as per request) added a few more membership tiers for those who want to support me.

Thanks everyone for your feedback and trying out my game, I'm still learning so please bear with me!
 
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Allenebs

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Good luck to the dev.
And most importantly: ignore the same comments about AI/NTR/Phone. These people think that every new game/development attempt should open a new genre.
No, but maybe not do the exact same thing 30 out of the last 35 games uploaded are doing.
oooo man the readers are hungry for new games.. there are "5" pone games currently and only 2 that's good.. You the DEV will have stiff competition Good luck
Do you mean 5 that came out in the last week 3 days? There might be 5 with phone in the title, but a month ago there were that many new AI NTR games dropping every second day. Hell, there were a few devs that put out 3 different ones all at one time, which they clearly had no intention of continuing.

To the dev - My big problem when seeing something like this is it takes comparatively zero effort. You have a handful of renders, a couple hundred lines of dialogue, and yet your first update is still a couple of minutes long. I'm more than fed up with saying this - This was your one shot to make a memorable first impression. Sure, you're doing something with daz3d instead of AI, but the dialogue and plot are just as generic as every other one of these phone NTR games and this update ends in pretty much the exact same place every other one has as well. All of these games may as well be using AI scripts as well and, in that regard, you game just melds into the background.

You needed enough content with a high enough quality to set your game apart from the literal hundreds of these games that have popped up just in the last 3 months. You had all the time in the world to make sure you did that, but now you don't. It's out there and you're now on the clock and working from behind with, frankly, nothing to set yourself apart since you have a fraction of the renders.

Instead of another generic friend, why not have it be a jealous/vindictive sister? Either the wives or the husbands, it doesn't really matter. Maybe that sister wants the husband instead or maybe it's the husbands sister getting even for some perceived slight from when they were children.

Or if you're determined for it to be her friend, have it be her "gay" best friend. You could do a revenge story for the husband bullying him in school and, turns out, he wasn't gay and just wanted to corrupt what you loved most before taking her for himself or something. Instead you literally made something just short of being the absolute most derivative game on the market.
 
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Taptus

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Thank you so much! This is my very first game, and I had to learn both Ren'Py and DAZ3D, which wasn't easy for me.
Friend, what was the study of renpy? Just based on the code of your game, you just took 100% of the code of my game. Even the folder and photo names are the same: роликовые игры:
 
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Gonza31

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It looks promising, Although I see it similar to another game that I like a lot
The MC has to travel and the wife has a friend who's a bad influence...

I hope you can take it down a path that engages us.

I like the look of the wife and her friend. Thanks for sharing.
 

Ik.

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Hey everyone!

I present to you my very first game. This release is just the beginning, setting the stage for the story, characters, and future content. I'm already working on Version 0.2, so there's plenty more to come!

I’d love to hear your feedback so I can improve the game in future updates.

If you choose to support me, you'll have my endless gratitude!
are you sure you are not HarmonyGia from Patreon?
 

Eye-switcher

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@ Naughty Narrative You messed up the messaging, sometime the wife is sending texts on the right side in green and sometime on the left side in white, its confusing
 

HRH3411

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Hey everyone!

I present to you my very first game. This release is just the beginning, setting the stage for the story, characters, and future content. I'm already working on Version 0.2, so there's plenty more to come!

I’d love to hear your feedback so I can improve the game in future updates.

If you choose to support me, you'll have my endless gratitude!
I hope you are successful. And also remember to focus on Interracial, ntr and bbc. This genre you are playing is great for it
 

JenMistress

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So, I don't normally play these games that are limited to phone message play like this, but I saw that the Universal Mods worked with this, and seemed quite interesting, so went ahead and added it to the Games to Play List. Very interesting game, must say.

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Thank you so very much for this game, and curious to see more!!!
 
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