VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Slut Phone [v0.23] [Aason]

[Underpass24]

im not gonna lie. It was pretty bad. concept is ok, but the whole thing with the dad is a shitstorm of bad. "for years ive been restraining myself from raping you" thats waaaaaaay outta line, any sane person would have straight up screenshotted and called the cops. there was no tact on the father's side, he just went hamfisted into the blackmail route.

The concept is fine but currently it feels like someone tossed this together in a single afternoon after a long day at work

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

*sigh* This game is way too new to be getting review bombed like this
It's a demo why are we pulling out the 1 and 2* reviews already?
Especially since it seems like the reviewers problems are on the content matter instead of the content. You don't like rape or blackmail that's fine, I don't usually but even when I like it I have problems with it but that's not the basis for a review.

 

[JadeKitten]

Interesting concept but the writing is a huge turn off. The 2 star review nails it.

 

[Pilluah]

Well i actually like this demo. Its definetly just a demo and not a game yet, but i hope one day it will become a good one.

 

[Dom1anon]

If this works nicely, I could export the concept.

Very based, Aason.

 

[Aason]

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[Luckzor]

Liked the concept, I just found that the conversation with the father was a little forced and everything is happening super fast. And considering that the sister has the option to call 911 when she found out that her brother raped her, why that option wouldn't be when the father explicity says that he always wanted to rape her? That doesn't bother me, but I think is pretty rushed how the father start to blackmail her in the first conversation. But if you know what you want to do, and you are sure that the story won't last just an hour or so, it will be great.

 

[rokutz1990]

Aaron, keep up the concept and do you, it's a good start and definately following as you progress and learn more with your development

 

[wazaa]

From my point of view: it only will took several sentences from his brother and his father to go to the police. So really, no real story here.

 

[quiboune]

Like I said in my other comment, this kind of storytelling has a huge potential. It's not being used properly here but the potential exists nonetheless. If the author wants some inspiration or direction, or if someone else wants to check out a similar game, look up Bowser X Peach: Superstar Sexting. It's abandoned and very unfinished, but still a great game even so.

 

[Candy1970]

I'm sorry, but the way this is portrayed is absolutely nonsensical. Not only does she have evidence to have both her dad and brother thrown in jail on her phone, away from them, she cowers like that over the phone instead of screenshotting it and sending it to both her mom and the police? Story so far is both boring and bad, hopefully you can make it better. Best of luck!

obviously you never watched Jerry Springer there are some very fucked up families out there ......this would be a tame episode

 

[menatv]

A bit dark, but that's fine. Really liked the concept. Really, really short. But then again we were warned about that.

Definitely in to see where this is going. Thanks!

 

[venkydudes]

thats a good start, nice story

 

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[GameleaksStudio]

Sounds fun, with a somewhat incestuous theme. I'll download!

 

[The 1★ Dude]

I still cannot figure out, who exactly supposed to be a virgin in this game?

 

[Jememoi]

I still cannot figure out, who exactly supposed to be a virgin in this game?

The dad.... I guess...

 

[assurdo]

as an actual release i think there's not that much content, feels like more a demo than anything. the act that the only choice in this version is irrelevant also make it feel more like a demo. the "call 911" option could've been a "nuclear-provisory-end", where police arrest the brother and you are thrown back to the title screen (the playtime is really low so restatarting wouldn't be a problem also it kinda gives more of a meaning to the choice you made). and yeah, the father's blackmail feels really forced. . just my 2 cents, nothing more. the game itself is interesting an i wished there was more, hope to see this game updated and not abandoned

 

[MrBoboFace]

Looks like a good start. Might be interesting to have different branching paths, and I can see how this could be a fun little game!

 

[MrLakes1579]

Is it wrong I want to see a game like this built to play like Sara Is Missing