VN Ren'Py A Touch of Magic [v0.1] [First Sin, JAD]

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Reniere

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ik that but i want to put the relations in a way that make sense
Well in the start when your suppose to name yourself. The last name is the same last name as theres.
Meaning mom dad sister and brother :WeSmart:
 

Reniere

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Currently finishing the renders for Chapter 3. A lot of Chapter 4 Part 1 is done too, many renders finished in advance, so the update gap between chapters will be really small. This week I'll release the final previews for the scenes that had a remake in Chapter 1 and the new content with Chapter 3. I plan to release the update next weekend and if everything keeps going smoothly, Chapter 4 Part 1 will be out shortly after.
PS: Chapter 4 will be huge and filled with content!

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Reniere

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Just a quick news report so you don't stay in the dark. I was able to mess around with some render configs for Giovanni's model, he was making scenes heavy, now scenes with him are rendering faster. The other issue was the NPC's, I want to have at least a few around the scenes to show Lunaregno's variety of life and species, since I won't be able to render big detailed characters like Giovanni and Juliana in the same scene with a bunch of other models, I'm using a few other methods like camera angles, layered renders + photoshop and more. Right now I'm working to finish the Lunaregno and Secret Stripper's Club part since they will have many background NPCs. Besides that, Chapter 4 Part 1 is very ahead regarding renders, like, 40% done.

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Enigemm

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Had this game on the "to play" list but didn't find the time. Finally downloaded today. I'm confused. I've read through the thread and seems like there's a rework in progress. I've played the version linked to on the first page which says updated December 24th. Is this before or after the re-work? Reason for asking is simply because some of the reworked images show up what I downloaded where as, some didn't. I played on PC in case someone would want to inquire further. There's no Discord server linked on the thread start page. Didn't check the Patreon page to look for any links there, though as I found quite a few errors and discrepancies I'd like to highlight. Hence, I'm not sure if I should point them out now as I am not even sure if what's linked is the reworked version.

Other than that, it's an intriguing story. There's promise amidst the family drama with dad and brother, interesting relationship between MC and sister and the fact that the person whom he's protecting is similar to him but few know. I've noticed badges popping up with notes such as "secret", not sure what those do. Wouldn't mind an explanation. There's much to explore and I do believe the developer has quite a monumental task in fleshing out the complexity of a story he's undertaking. I wish you luck there.
 

Black Orchid

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Had this game on the "to play" list but didn't find the time. Finally downloaded today. I'm confused. I've read through the thread and seems like there's a rework in progress. I've played the version linked to on the first page which says updated December 24th. Is this before or after the re-work? Reason for asking is simply because some of the reworked images show up what I downloaded where as, some didn't. I played on PC in case someone would want to inquire further. There's no Discord server linked on the thread start page. Didn't check the Patreon page to look for any links there, though as I found quite a few errors and discrepancies I'd like to highlight. Hence, I'm not sure if I should point them out now as I am not even sure if what's linked is the reworked version.

Other than that, it's an intriguing story. There's promise amidst the family drama with dad and brother, interesting relationship between MC and sister and the fact that the person whom he's protecting is similar to him but few know. I've noticed badges popping up with notes such as "secret", not sure what those do. Wouldn't mind an explanation. There's much to explore and I do believe the developer has quite a monumental task in fleshing out the complexity of a story he's undertaking. I wish you luck there.
i think the story was changed from what i remember, the previous release was way more polished and had a slightly different story to this one. some variables are also are broken so the game flows incorrectly. the engrish also ramped up with this release.
 

Enigemm

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i think the story was changed from what i remember, the previous release was way more polished and had a slightly different story to this one. some variables are also are broken so the game flows incorrectly. the engrish also ramped up with this release.
Thanks for the reply. If this is the re-worked version, then there's a need for quality testing. I spotted one programming error, mixed speakers (in other words, the wrong speaker is pointed out) and confusion among the characters whether it's supposed to be a he spoken of or a she. I've got them put together in the folder but does the developer even check this thread? Quite a few unknowns I must say. Like I noted in my previous post, there's a lot to shoot for in this novel. It's a good story with a lot of promise. Just do not want to waste time trying to help a budding developer but posted in the wrong medium and setting.
 

Black Orchid

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Thanks for the reply. If this is the re-worked version, then there's a need for quality testing. I spotted one programming error, mixed speakers (in other words, the wrong speaker is pointed out) and confusion among the characters whether it's supposed to be a he spoken of or a she. I've got them put together in the folder but does the developer even check this thread? Quite a few unknowns I must say. Like I noted in my previous post, there's a lot to shoot for in this novel. It's a good story with a lot of promise. Just do not want to waste time trying to help a budding developer but posted in the wrong medium and setting.
he used to be active on f95 when he was doing his previous 3 games which he all abandoned, you can scroll up and read my post about that.
 
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