Honest attempt...your framing for a cowboy shot needs refinement because you have a cut-off on her left fingers. And you should have set her hair better or make them look more open like a wind was blowing then...I like the bikini choice on the wearable assets!
More attention to hands micro-posing. You nailed her right hand and mouth but failed on her left thumb and his right hand on her head...on the first picture!
Yep...I mean it's not so good as a choice her left hand with her thumb hidden...why not lower her hand under his balls as if she is holding his balls. And his hand is "afraid" of making contact with her ponytail because you cannot deal with her hair poking through? Zoom on instead of making thinking faces...and you'll be a better artist for that...
I believe I have from your first post...didn't you notice? I reward first always then make remarks...
Now that is way better...you took my advice and went for a bolder choice...Bravo!
His left hand either hide it as if its behind or pose it better! Nice! You're getting better! Bold move place it on her ass!
I think we met before when I was AlexDreamlight and I shared with you a link for cinematographer's playground...Yes? This was my first post as AlexDreamlight...
Obviously, because I was completely lazy and it was very late when I made this render, I just adjusted the light. I didn't put much emphasis on the poseA pose gone bad? or like we do "air guitar solos" she's "air hand jobbing" a second imaginary cock?MAKE AIR NOT WAR...YEAH
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Thanks... Maybe I (we? I mean the folks here) could count on one more render, in the same scenery and with the same actors? Let's say this time with Don standing near the bed, naked and with still semi-erect dick, looking at Sophia in a messy bed. Sophia... could be half-naked, apparently just after sex, maybe with a faraway look, suggesting that she is still slightly unconscious.
maybe like this?Thanks... Maybe I (we? I mean the folks here) could count on one more render, in the same scenery and with the same actors? Let's say this time with Don standing near the bed, naked and with still semi-erect dick, looking at Sophia in a messy bed. Sophia... could be half-naked, apparently just after sex, maybe with a faraway look, suggesting that she is still slightly unconscious.
Of course, I have some 'post-processing' in mind
Your scenes with Sophia and Sam were top notch. Beautifully directed and edited. So Hawt! Congrats!
