- Thread starter Bob69
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- Jul 4, 2019
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I normally avoid "real porn" VNs but this one has unusually good production values.
A little constructive criticism if I may:
The early focus on the MC's relationship is welcome and well-paced. Most similar efforts have either the wife or husband misbehaving egregiously after one scene together. I think I counted five or six before either really had an opportunity to go off the reservation.
That said, to my eye, being "confident" or "anxious" doesn't seem to have any real effect on the dialogue. While the MC can consistently make confident choices, in his headspace, he's still deeply suspicious and anxious.
Secondly, the wife's reaction to the
feels over the top considering the wife's similar behavior earlier in the story. Particularly if the MC is well-behaved in that situation. I've been married for over a decade, and my wife reacting like that to a misunderstanding would be a major crisis, causing me to re-evaluate the entire relationship.
While I can't account for confirmation bias, that was the only time I felt really yanked out of suspension of disbelief.
Appreciate the commitment to quality and pacing.
(Oh, also, I noticed the phone said "Wessages" instead of "Messages" at one point.)
A little constructive criticism if I may:
The early focus on the MC's relationship is welcome and well-paced. Most similar efforts have either the wife or husband misbehaving egregiously after one scene together. I think I counted five or six before either really had an opportunity to go off the reservation.
That said, to my eye, being "confident" or "anxious" doesn't seem to have any real effect on the dialogue. While the MC can consistently make confident choices, in his headspace, he's still deeply suspicious and anxious.
Secondly, the wife's reaction to the
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While I can't account for confirmation bias, that was the only time I felt really yanked out of suspension of disbelief.
Appreciate the commitment to quality and pacing.
(Oh, also, I noticed the phone said "Wessages" instead of "Messages" at one point.)
- Apr 4, 2022
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The dialogueis very different on the confident or anxious path. I did a side by side pt of the original and updated prologue and its very differnt. As for the wifes reaction - she thinks the husband didnt contact her intentionally and got really upset with him thinking he was being an asshole.
So far in every path there is no cheating by the wife, hell she doesnt even like her boss ..
- Jul 26, 2017
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He is insecure but if you look at the dinner with running into his wife's boss his confidence is shown well. Also in an insecure pt the couple have fewer sex events since he is so unsure of himself
- Dec 12, 2021
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The game would have a chance to become a good game if instead of inserting images and movies from porn films you would make your own images, with so many programs available to make images and animations even with the use of AI. I suggest you consider hiring a graphic designer who can help you with this if it's too much of a challenge for you, I think that even here on the forums if you advertise that you are looking for such a person there will be a few willing to help you and you can focus on dialogues and programming. at the moment my rating for this game is 3/10 
- Sep 29, 2017
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Its got potential. Get rid of the black screens that say 'some time later' etc. They're not needed.