It's hard to say but I like this game? I'm normally not a fan of AI, but… this has some life in it? It's weird. Only thing I can ask of
narlicious is to correct a few typos:
"I do remember it quite fondy."
*fondly
"I was busy I forgot!"
missing comma after "busy"
"the dog's reacts"
*dog
The reacts doesn't belong to the dog
"properly tie his bitch"
*knot
Tie is to to form into a knot (like of rope)
"her jaws slack and sore"
*jaw
A person doesn't have multiple jaws
"she starts to feel a veritable flood of cool, gooey sap erupts out of those"
*erupt
"accompanied by a shooshing sound from the older woman"
*shushing
"smiling and fully aware that she is in a way putting on a show"
*she is, in a way, putting
"More Mina!"
*More, Mina!
Unless you're adding more of Mina
"then her nipple she lets out"
*nipple, she
There's a number more that I can list, but putting the text into a grammar checker like
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