VN Ren'Py Altered [v0.4] [Mr.J]

[Danv]

drastically needs proofreading
punctuation all over the place, shit ton of uncapitalized names, misspellings here there, "thoughts" formatting is inconsistent as fuck (italicization, name labels and "thoughts" prefix - sometimes it's there, sometimes it's not... cuz doing separate character define to display thoughts and sparing everyone headache is for plebs, right?)
all of it is not just bad by itself - it makes whole game look cheap(er) and half-assed

 

[Enigemm]

Played the updated version of the game and would like to submit three bugs I found along with a set of improvements to the grammar and spelling. I rather not post to such an open thread as lately, I find too much negative criticism that doesn't help the developer in any way whatsoever. Just some folks who don't even pay for the game yet take it upon themselves to bitch and moan about what is or isn't there. I believe in criticism, especially if it it entitled.
I've checked on the main page but do not see a discord link there so I'm not sure if you run a server. If you do, PM me and I'll give you my contact details that I can submit what errors I've found playing the latest version.

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

Played the updated version of the game and would like to submit three bugs I found along with a set of improvements to the grammar and spelling. I rather not post to such an open thread as lately, I find too much negative criticism that doesn't help the developer in any way whatsoever. Just some folks who don't even pay for the game yet take it upon themselves to bitch and moan about what is or isn't there. I believe in criticism, especially if it it entitled.
I've checked on the main page but do not see a discord link there so I'm not sure if you run a server. If you do, PM me and I'll give you my contact details that I can submit what errors I've found playing the latest version.

I don't really use any type of online social media, I'll shoot you a pm and you can send it through there if you'd like.
Thanks for taking the time to do this, I really appreciate it.

 

[MadMoonMan69]

I have to thank you for a great game! I am about to replay it for the 4th time. Do you have any sort of schedule for update release? Gettin' a bit anxious for a new fix!

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

I have to thank you for a great game! I am about to replay it for the 4th time. Do you have any sort of schedule for update release? Gettin' a bit anxious for a new fix!

I'm glad you're really enjoying the story. Unfortunately, I don't have any type of release schedule. I'll usually make a post when I'm closer to being done with the update, but as of now it will still take a bit longer.(Not too long hopefully)
Thanks for the support it really helps!