Try to work with lights on renders. For me personally its a bit too dark, yet looks solid. Thumbs up for future updates from Storytellers Crew 
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- Mar 10, 2017
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Look harder. or ask for help. English not being your native language is pretty much you and every developer currently working on games. There is a smaller percentage who are native English speakers than not.
Not trying to be harsh, but when your trying to get this out for money you need to make a good showing. The art is one part, but its generic daz and we see a lot of it. The story is going to make or break you on a Renpy game.
Wow, instead of correcting him, you are making fun of him. By the way it is 'English' not english. Now beat that, grammer nazi!
- Dec 30, 2017
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It's all right.
I was waiting for just such a feedback. I was interested in reviews about three things: pictures, translation and the story itself.
The pictures of negative reviews are not many yet. Means most users
Before the release, I did not know how bad the machine translation would be. From the comments, I realized that the next version without a professional translation should not be spread.
I was waiting for just such a feedback. I was interested in reviews about three things: pictures, translation and the story itself.
The pictures of negative reviews are not many yet. Means most users
Before the release, I did not know how bad the machine translation would be. From the comments, I realized that the next version without a professional translation should not be spread.
- May 11, 2017
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Welp thats google translete for yaI play eve online and where i live there are a lot of Russians, i know all about how bad Google translate can be.
Amazing! The men look normal! Not crazy buff or ridiculously skinny shrimp fry. Maybe it's just the games I've played lately but this is unusual for these web game projects. I approve, it's easier to live vicariously through a guy when I'm not wondering why I have noodle arms or look like I got stung on my muscles by a bunch of angry bees.
- Sep 21, 2017
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the models are okay I guess, not a bad start for a demo.:biggrin: keep up the good work. BUT after playing this game, I felt what its like to have a menstrual period, the translation was pretty hemorrhaging to read. :tf:
BUT after playing this game, I felt what its like to have a menstrual period, the translation was pretty hemorrhaging to read. :tf:
- Sep 27, 2017
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models & scenes are good, lighting needs some more work
the story ... errr ... someone needs to seriously improve translate.google.com.
fuck google !!!
this might have been a good game but even after re-reading each line 3 times i still have no clue wth is going on.
the story ... errr ... someone needs to seriously improve translate.google.com.
fuck google !!!
this might have been a good game but even after re-reading each line 3 times i still have no clue wth is going on.
- Dec 30, 2017
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I already wrote that the next version will only be with a professional translation.
I do not have English-speaking friends who could appreciate the quality of Google translation. So I laid out the game in this translation, not thinking that it is so bad. I did not want to mock the players, forcing you to read bad text.
I will correct my mistakes.
- Dec 30, 2017
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Thanks for the info! I'll fix it. Now I'll finish the translation and update all the links!
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