VN - Ren'Py - Because I Love Her [Part 1 NTR Update] [The Typist]

Version 1.0

Story 1/5
Plot 0/5
Script 0/5
Character Development 0/5

Game offers tons of kinks and fetishes yet wont let you pick which ones you want and you dont. Despite saying some are "optional".
Its a 1 route game no matter the choices. Even if it doesnt give you the scenes, SCRIPT says youre down that route.

Its like "playing" a kinetic novel of a cuck's diary.
Male Protagonist? Female Protagonist?
You should stick to one protagonist, that way you can learn FLEXIBILITY of choices to live up to the expectations of the many kinks you were offering before the game starts.
Less choices, one kink. Cuckoldry.

Despite having a Harem as a plus, game failed on its main heroine.

Version 2.0

Story 2/5
Plot 2/5
Script 4/5
Character Development 0/5

The NTR is still the same. Sharing/Swinging.
No cheating. Its the same old cuckoldry from the first version.
No FLEXIBILITY.
Even if the cheating is somewhere near the future, it wont matter.
The Male Protagonist is totally a cuck based on the script.

Sorry but its really not my cup of tea.

Character Development is still nonexistent, unfortunately.
Female Protagonist completely changed on her own, real quick.
They say theyre not gonna remember a thing since theyre drunk, yet they did, VIVIDLY.
Worse of all, it changed them completely.

Im starting to think the game is just a quick fap for cucks.

Amazing upgrade on the renders though.
The script really improved too.

I understand I left the NTR option on ON but it would be nice if I got to pick if the MC likes it or not, because so far he seems to and if the GF wants to do something daring and/or with another stranger the MC has no say it it or replies with something vague like "I don't know, maybe"

Also, not a complaint but would be nice if there was some ACTUAL cheating like going behind each others back's and not telling the other party. But overall I like the design of characters, nice music, plot hits..most of the time.

TL;DR: Nice start, would appreciate more variation, mainly with what to see and not see.

Review of v2.0 Ch.2

A VN with very potential about a young couple who are together since highschool and is in player's hand the future of these relationship. With two chapters released so far, the story already make a good groundwork and build-up to open interesting and trilling paths for the two protagonist varing from pure monogamous love to sharing and others kinks like exhibitionism.

The writing is good with some few grammar mistakes, the pace and writing of lewd scenes is well-made with good dose of erotism. The renders and character models are beautifull, you can really fall in love for them. Especially for the female MC Claire and her sister Zoey.

Game also can be played in two distincts path: A NTR-enabled path and NTR-disabled path. So, if you like NTR/corruption, this game worth a try. And if you like romance/love, this game also worth a try.

I've been playing both version and I think they are great. Revamp version are much better in opinion, the quality of the render, beutiful character, story & other things give a huge positive boost, if you're somebody who like NTR or Swinging this is for you, and for vanilla fans... well yeah, there's vanilla route as well.

This is based on the revamp. Hopefully things are settled with the Typist because this is a significant improvement on story and direction. I like the idea that this brings as far as the players agency in the NTR level. You can ignore it, go in as a willing participant, or truly get cucked if that's your desire. Option are really what make this work and increase replay-ability. Looking forward to the future of this game.

The first version of the game was already very good even i had to install a lot of mods and patches which i found on different palces in the net to make every path work without errors.
But the version 2 now is really just amazing.. Te characters are great ,ade and look more beautyful. The scenes are hotter and trhe approach to different fetishes/paths is different and even better in my opinion.
Also the integrated gallery is a nice welcome feature .
I hope the dev will enjoy making and finishing this game and i am very excited to play future updates.

Tested v1.0

[This review contains spoilers]

So, this game has two great qualities:
- Renders. The women are absolutely gorgeous and super cute.
- Sharing/NTR. Most of the game here are one guy romancing all the women and it really closes the door to awesomeness (spit roast for example).

For the rest, it's actually pretty lame. At some point the story is going downhill fast, as if the dev started drinking alcohol. I stopped caring when they introduced "haunted house" and succubus.

Also, it's actually pretty hard to find any kind of immersion. Jenni, for example, saying she never dated anyone and no one had ever made a compliment about her appearance. Then, a few scene later, you see her in an extremely slutty outfit that doesn't match AT ALL the character that was introduced.

Same for the main girl. Introduction insists about the fact she is shy and pure, but turn into a slut at the first occasion.

Too bad, this game could have been a real gem.

Version 2.0 is a demo version of the rebooted game, it changed from "only NTR route" to "Where your choices will lead you route", and that's what changes a good game into an excellent one.
The game is very promising and TheTypist is a very talented artist.
I advise trying this game.

Fine graphics, story is interesting. Keep it that way. Keep it slow and sexy, dont rush. In further updates involve some incest. Could be more interesting.
In far away update you could input some pregnancy sex with swinging. Good job for now.

About the [v1.0]
I have not read the previous reviews, so I'm sorry if I don't write anything new..
I'm not saying it's a bad game. Personally I love the NTR stories the most, and the love routes in these kind of games I feel just wasting of time ...but even in NTR, there are expectations and boundaries..

This game starts off great, but what I liked best that the story was build up pretty well. I loved the way the game gradually introduces me into the world of NTR, and as I progressed, I increasingly felt this was going to be my favorite NTR story I had read so far.
...And then, came the cold shower....
Your little innocent shy girlfriend, who the previous day did not even know what infidelity means, suddenly finds herself in the middle of a porn movie shooting, as protagonist. It's true there are more endings besides this, but then somehow I lost my temper to try the other routes...
The first half of the story (at least my path) is a masterpiece, but what comes after is just a ridiculous bullshit for those, whose area of interest is just the porn and gangbang.

I hate giving a game less than 4 stars, but it was too much disappointment in the end.

I played it so you don't have to.
★ BECAUSE I LOVE HER REVIEW
I'm writing this review after playing Version: 1.0. Here's what I liked and did not like so far.
+ THE GOOD | +/- COULD BE BETTER | - THE BAD

+ VISUALS:
The only thing I liked about this game. The renders are well made.

+/- MUSIC & SOUND:
Inconsistent.

- THE STORY:
The same old cuck story that has been done a million times before. Story makes zero sense.
- WRITING:
Terrible writing and pacing.
- MC:
Looks: Average.
Personality: Soy personified.
- CHARACTERS:
One dimensional. The female characters are the very definition of bimbos.
- CHOICES?
Don’t seem to make much difference.
- THE SEX SCENES:
Fappability – 1/5 I was limp while playing this game.

VERDICT:
Don’t waste your time with this one.

Ok, first off. I really LOVED this game in the beginning, The women were hot and corrupting Claire was really great. The animation in the beginning was Ehhh, but really picked up mid game, especially when Thennnnn, the ending sequences happened. Girls that look like they were going to be LI's suddenly disappeared, never to be seen again and I realize this story revolved around cucking the boyfriend or not, to tease us with more women only to take them away, Shame, shame. on top of it all, the endings seemed REALLY rushed as if the Dev just really wanted to move on. Overall, I have to give this game a "right down the middle" ranking as parts of the game were extremely erotic but ultimately a bummer in the end. I will still check out more of this Dev's work as I imagine he can only get better.

I just started playing and the first in the face: 4th wall and Dev foreshadowing things and trying to tell me how i should play, literally.
Its kind of weird the dev speaking to the MC telling him things that he already knows for the sake of exposition.
I laugh when i read "good writing". How can this horrendous mess have good writing? Let me describe:

Claire in the first 24 hours of the game spends like 9 hours in the gym, she leaves in the afternoon, she comes home late, and she leaves in the morning for the gym. Its like there are no other places to be.

Then she goes to the showers, something may or may not happen, it doesnt matter, your choices are taken into consideration plotwise. Then she goes to some undergournd bar while MC is cuddling with Jenni.
For some other reason, she sucks a dick in some glory hole, and while she is on the floor, another dick cums on her?

At this point the MC appears out of nowhere. They have a discussion and she tells him stuff that maybe you didnt see happen, like the dream, and the scene in the showers. This shitfest is the opposite of good writing, is below mediocre. There may be somekey choices with big impact on the path development, but others are clearly irrelevant.

Claire is old school and pure and innocent, but in less than 48 ours she deepthroating a blackhorse dick.

So, once again we have one of those Exposition-NTR games where you read some background but you never see that character behaving on the terms of that said background and she instead goes straight to deepthroat some black dude.

Renders are noisy, so if you add the rushed "plot" with poor planning you can conclude that this game was planned in one afternoon, and maybe rendered in 1 week.

And this if you choose the mixed lust route, if you go full with love, im guessing there is not even game to be played, or maybe the fiance remains a whore despite your choices.

It is a terrible game and im not even considering my feelings about the game, cause i only feel that i lost 20 minutes of my disgraceful life to play this.

EDIT:
V2.0 is actually pretty pretty good, if the original game was like that it would be 4 stars, but the content in 2.0 is just a very small portion of the 1.0 version, so its not enough to put it into the rating. But as a disclaimer, in my opinion it aims high.

All this game has is looks. The plot is too quick, or rather everything happens too fast. Also, the dev tries to make us think there are two story branches - lust and love. Big lie, there's only lust. No matter what you choose, your girl always ends up sleeping around.

One of the best NTR games I have ever played. Really realistic storyline and nice writing! I enjoyed it alot and saw some similarities to real life events. Totally immersive and the developer gave the player the choice to choose his own paths

Game is a waste of time, If the dev had been transparent from the beginning... you know what, NO, even with that the game is still bad on a fundamental level, and here is why...

You can chose to abandon one of your planned routes if you want, as you didnt get the support you wanted form the game, thats totally acceptable, but to "cut content" out of the game ? that's just vile... the images were already done/made, who cares if the path leaded to a dead end ? that dead end was far more interesting than the actual endings the game got... WTF...

Story - 0/5 - The story is non-sensical... It's your typical cuck story, good looking couple that is perfect for each other, but somehow the 10 foot long dick boyfriend feels like a wimp in lion's clothing, and decides his girlfriend needs the dick of "better" men than he... enter your typical "BBC worship" garbage... and thats basically the plot of the game... white girl see's a big black guy for the first time, and wants to fuck nothing but dark meat forever more... Compelling as fuck !!

Grahpics - 4/5 - The dev has a talent for rendering, no one can deny that, his characters are very attractive, and the settings, lighting, and backgrounds are all at a pretty good polish level, no complaints here.

Characters 2/5 - The characters are all over the place... Claire goes from prudish GF to BBC loving slut overnight, not realistic, and downright stupid IMHO, the husband is your typical wimpy white boy, has a big dick, good looks, but has an inferiority complex the size of the Empire State Building... Jenni... was interesting... then she got forgotten cause she liked the MC, and we cant have that, if she was into black dicks, maybe she would have gotten more screentime... Rose also showed interest in the MC, so dev said "fuck her for not wanting Darryl or King".

Overall 1/5 - while if we took the added score it would have ranked higher, the fact that the story was abysmal, the endings downright lazy, rushed, and non congruent, it honestly deserves the 1 star... Add to that the fact that not only he stopped a route from the game, he also CUT the content out, making it not accessible on purpose, just cause in that route Claire likes dicks that arent black... it came across as a bit silly and a little racist to be honest.

P.S. I know for a fact I will be avoiding anything/everything from this dev from now on lol, still wish him the best, as I am sure some people are satisfied with his pretty renders, and BBC worship.

I've known this game since 2019, and I always felt that it wasn't that much of a content, but with this version... I really liked it. I can't help to want more ntr content of it but with what it have it is incredible, or at least I really like it. I always felt that I cannot give my opinion of a game since I am not paying for it. IF I had a bad experience with something and I DIDN'T pay for it, then I only keep my opinion for myself, but... I really, really liked this one. The models are amazing (or at least Claire model) and the art, at least of what i've seen, it's amazing. I give you my most sincerely "thanks" for made this, at least I like it. I will aware of other of your projects to enjoy (and sorry for my english if it isn't that good)

Characters don't match with the story.
-You can expect a pure person for someone from village life.
-Sex between them is overrated for our couple. They don't act like they are engaged but married for years.
-There is no love route. They try to be exhibitionists if you go that route. Also -love- route has NTR options.

Devil also joined the game herself after Chapter 7 lmao.

Dead end after dead end, the game immediately turns into treasure hunt for which path contains the most content. Sadly, no amount of good renders or story writing will make this game worth your time as it is.

Story/Writing - The story is nothing new. You start with a guy trying to spice up their love life and for some reason, his friend(a girl) lives with them and the soon-to-be wife is fine with it. It's no surprise if the story will spiral down into cheating and infidelity(which it did if you played the game) although the dev promises to put more content on other routes/paths. Lovers of ntr/cheating games will surely like this. It's true that while the premise is a copy of other games before it, it's mostly the amount of commitment the dev has into bringing an overused plot into life to make it a likeable game. However, the dev was not competent enough to further the story with various interesting side stories even after playing through the ntr path and instead casually puts a 'work in progress' just because. +1 star because i like ntr games but that's it :v

Gameplay - Have fun trying to figure which choice led to your dead end because it will happen a lot. Save here,l load there, this sums up all what little of gameplay it has to offer. I recommend using a walkthrough to figure out the path with most content to save time. Sorry, no points for this one

Renders/Art - Possibly the most redeeming feature of the game for others, but I for one only finds it average at best because the models used are present in games before it. 2.5 stars

1+0+2.5÷3 = 1.17 ~ 1 star
Look for other games worth your time and support.

I am updating my review after playing v1.0

First, I am not here to criticize or to shame anyone's fetish. I started playing this game primarily because of the good graphics and a decent amount of animations and some of the tags that got me interested, and if I am not mistaken, some of those were now removed ftom the list of genres. The story started out fine and caught my interest upon the introduction of the succubus character, with the choices that leads to either the love or lust routes. I played both routes until chapter 8 part 1 of 4, the love route almost does not have any content compared to the lust route, which just left me disappointed. The pace of the story is so fast. It would be better if the story showed the progression of how the characters developed in a realistic way or time frame. Then v1.0 came and everything just felt rushed, like the story writer seems to have ran out of ideas on how to further progress the story and just wanted to end it for whatever reason. The characters that were introduced prior to this update who could have made progress to the story were suddenly like they were never part of the story. The choices that the player makes at the later part of the game will all lead to the same ending which is Claire willingly fucking almost any man and the MC becoming a willing cuckold, with just a very slight change in dialogue for each ending and one with an additional conversation scene with Jenni. I lost interest of the story and I just skipped through the scenes just to satisfy my curiosity on how the story will end which turned out to be a huge boner killer and disappointment for me. In short, I came for the renders, stayed for the story and left dissapointed. This is just my 2 cents which I hope may help for the better of the game devs in case they decide to start a new project. Since I am playing it for free I guess us beggars can't be choosers. I'd give it 1 star but I'll make it 2 stars due to the good renders especially Claire.