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Ok, thanks for answer. This is not game for me, if that's the case. I like to choose with whom MC will have sex. But good luck in further development.
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- Nov 15, 2022
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I mean, what does it mean? Is it a good ending, or a bad ending if the FMC ends up pregnant? Why is that "ending" (path) separate?
I see what you mean. My plan is to have a playable epilogue for each ending, that's why I made them separate. It's not in the good/bad category, it's just different
- Feb 21, 2021
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Nice game, interesting story.
I really liked the initial look with pantyhose, I hope that in the continuation of the story the author will propose it again.
I really liked the initial look with pantyhose, I hope that in the continuation of the story the author will propose it again.
- Jun 3, 2020
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PleasurePixels, what a gem of a game you got started here. Yana is a smokin' hot cutie. I love that she has the courage to do what is necessary to protect her grandma. Even if it means sacrificing her morals. How low will you allow her to go?, because I'll be right there with you. I love strong, determined hot female protags. Just don't forget that she will do all this, and become what she must, for grandma, and get rich in the process.
One thing you really need is a stats counter. To log her corruption, sex stats and money earned.
- Jun 9, 2017
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Thank you so much for the nice review and feedback. Stats are already tracked in the code but I didn't get the chance to work on the UI for them. They will come in later releases when there will be more choices and story to unfold.
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Well, that was an interesting start. Only thing in future releases, might be a good idea to put a warning when the update is finishing up, so have time to save the game. Luckily, with all the numerous paths, I had several saves so just went to the most recent and loaded it from there to go to the end of this update. Otherwise, very curious where this goes. Can't say that I am familiar with the source material, so going into this completely blind, but I did enjoy this start. Thank you so very much for this!!!
- May 28, 2023
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UI feedback, I wish there was a larger font for the text box.
It's a bit odd that the static buttons that you see in every Renpy game are really large but the actual text you have to read for the story is small by comparison with no way to adjust this.
Also the game doesn't tell you what any of the stats mean at the start of the game and that could be improved.
It's a bit odd that the static buttons that you see in every Renpy game are really large but the actual text you have to read for the story is small by comparison with no way to adjust this.
Also the game doesn't tell you what any of the stats mean at the start of the game and that could be improved.
Thank you for the feedback, I will do that with the next release
Thank you for the feedback, I will try and add an option to adjust text size with the next release.
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looks promising so far, it would be good to add some good guy as well, not only greedy fucks
- May 29, 2024
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Short but sweet. Nice start, good looking characters. Some of the dialogue could be tweaked a little, but so far, so good.
Hi, Android version is coming at the end of the month with the Chapter 1 release. I already made some modifications and upgrades to the Prologue (the version of the game that you can find in this thread) so basically this version does not exist anymore
Isn't enough here atm for me to form an opinion.
I don't want an answer from you. If I have access to your game, I want it to be able to answer more than 95% of the questions I could ask you. I want you to be absorbing praise and reflecting on the feedback you're receiving right now. At most, I want you answering questions about renders per day, the intended size of your updates and questions like the one you received about animations. That way any conversations you have with the community you're building around your game is productive. When you're repeatedly stating that line I quoted, our interactions with each other quickly lose all value. When that happens, that's a really good way to lose motivation.
Your MC's motivation is relatable, but too generic. GoFundMe is full of tens of thousands of people in the same situation. If you ask the MC why she's doing this for her grandma, we need to feel compelled to help her in a way similar to her granddaughter. Instead, I'm wondering why in the fuck she's helping her grandma at all. In your one interaction with her, she insults and demeans you. She has money to give to your sister, but you're the one paying for her meds? Nah, grandma doesn't deserve our empathy, game over. That's how this should play out. Whether your wrote this or someone else did, THAT has to get fixed.
This is a problem bc, right now, that's all there is to this. One sentence describing the plot of what is supposed to be an entire book. I should come away wanting more, but in this case the question is, more of what? I'm a huge fan of the premise, but I need a lot more than a plot description out of the initial release. What in the game atm should bring me back for future updates? You're promising to deliver on things that other games currently do, but you didn't actually show that YOU ARE capable of delivering. I don't just mean sex, not a single character is given enough time for me to become invested in them. Why should I invest myself in any way in your game either along side or instead of those other games doing what you promise your game will?
I don't want an answer from you. If I have access to your game, I want it to be able to answer more than 95% of the questions I could ask you. I want you to be absorbing praise and reflecting on the feedback you're receiving right now. At most, I want you answering questions about renders per day, the intended size of your updates and questions like the one you received about animations. That way any conversations you have with the community you're building around your game is productive. When you're repeatedly stating that line I quoted, our interactions with each other quickly lose all value. When that happens, that's a really good way to lose motivation.
Your MC's motivation is relatable, but too generic. GoFundMe is full of tens of thousands of people in the same situation. If you ask the MC why she's doing this for her grandma, we need to feel compelled to help her in a way similar to her granddaughter. Instead, I'm wondering why in the fuck she's helping her grandma at all. In your one interaction with her, she insults and demeans you. She has money to give to your sister, but you're the one paying for her meds? Nah, grandma doesn't deserve our empathy, game over. That's how this should play out. Whether your wrote this or someone else did, THAT has to get fixed.