I think it's a relatively believable setup with a surprisingly fleshed-out significant other. He's not an idiot or a pussy, and he has his own things going on. And the artwork is very good. There's also a lot of story being communicated through imagery, for once.
However, it seems like the action is moving unexpectedly fast. I've grown accustomed to more build-up, more pursuit, and a longer runway for the deterioration of the pre-existing relationship. We barely know who Jack is or what makes the MC tick, and they're already getting right into it. Perhaps this VN is intended to be short?
I'm giving this one the benefit of the doubt -- four stars for now. But if what we're seeing in this initial release is already the main event and not a prologue, I'm not sure where the story or the action is supposed to go from here.
However, it seems like the action is moving unexpectedly fast. I've grown accustomed to more build-up, more pursuit, and a longer runway for the deterioration of the pre-existing relationship. We barely know who Jack is or what makes the MC tick, and they're already getting right into it. Perhaps this VN is intended to be short?
I'm giving this one the benefit of the doubt -- four stars for now. But if what we're seeing in this initial release is already the main event and not a prologue, I'm not sure where the story or the action is supposed to go from here.