Sorry I'll be harsh, but the text need a loooot of work.
So much so that my eyes hurt and I had to stop playing.
Furthermore, I don't understand why ask to define the roles of the different characters at the beginning if it's for "step-mom" here and "landlady" there?!?
Sorry again for the dev, I imagine it's not easy to receive criticism like that. But without a lot of work on the text, this game will only attract those interested only in a quick wank on beautiful models. Then they will forget about it until the next update.
I don't really know about other players but, for me, in "
visual novel" the "
novel" is at least as important if not more than the "
visual".
If the story isn't interesting or if it's poorly written, it doesn't matter if the graphics are "perfect", I just won't be able to enjoy the story so it's a complete waste of my time.
I hope the dev can correct this defect because the story seems interesting and the graphics are indeed very beautiful.
Good luck for the future
KissKissStudio .