Your Discord invite is not working, going to give this game a go and see how it goes, it looks interesting.
- Thread starter KissKissStudio
- Start date
- Jun 16, 2018
- 273
- 404
Working still fine. Found one sentence that didn't use the correct name. (after first meeting with Megan). Second is after bath scene. Plus a weird picture reference.
Last edited:
Hmm, I never played the game but looking at the dialogue box, I can't help but feel like it could look 10x times better.
It could have like a cloudy effect all around (kind of like how that bit on the top left looks? top left border of the dialogue box) get what I mean? it just feels like the rest of the dialogue border should have that design.
lol the sentence was big picture work but prob the coder changed it by accident with ctrl f
Last edited:
- Aug 9, 2022
- 147
- 264
Hello, good morning/afternoon or evening, I am currently playing your game (where do they go to the company so that the "mom" starts working), I am just writing to tell you an idea of mine, why instead of killing or letting you keep the monster , because we don't make her ours, (let her fall in love with us or corrupt her) and let her be our spy but without Megan suspecting (of course we have to change some things but it's just my idea) and thus do with all the people that Mónica has (women) and if there are men (let them help us too and protect our women) until all the people who are with Monica are on our side and in the end we defeat her and make her ours too and that is where love comes in or corruption
1-love: with enough love and energy that we will have throughout the game we make our harem so that the girls love each other and our protagonist.
2-Corruption: we corrupt them so much that in the end we turn them into sexual slaves or whatever you like.
That's an idea that occurred to me while playing the game, if you want to change or add more things, I'll be more than happy.
At the end of the day it's your game
1-love: with enough love and energy that we will have throughout the game we make our harem so that the girls love each other and our protagonist.
2-Corruption: we corrupt them so much that in the end we turn them into sexual slaves or whatever you like.
That's an idea that occurred to me while playing the game, if you want to change or add more things, I'll be more than happy.
At the end of the day it's your game
- May 20, 2024
- 173
- 196
Words? Tell that to the patreon who bans for words. These words completely ruin the whole interest, and it is impossible to just ignore them, as it is a key detail.
The game could have been made without constantly repeating phrases like 'we're not blood relatives...'. Just set up relationships where the standard ones are tenant, landlady, etc. And that's it, that's enough, patreon doesn't care what kind of relationship the players will set.
Seriously, what's with all the devs in the habit of making inc games on patreon? Okay on patreon, there are many smart devs who do it right, without stupid lines like 'we're not blood related', and there are such devs who create shit-step-inc games, where almost in every line characters repeat 'we're not blood related'. It's like the developer is screaming to Patreon, 'See, it's not incest, please don't ban me.'
I'm just so incredibly tired of this crap...
Last edited:
Go make a game on subscriber star and loose 90% of your patrons. Dude stop talking from your perspective. You are neither a supporter or would be a supporter on subscriberstar. Just sit there and jack your shit off without your shitty one sided opinion
- Jul 25, 2017
- 14,040
- 18,500
lol I see a hot blonde on the banner image I check to see if Milton749 has played this game and look what I find
I'm totally gonna play this game at some point just for the blonde
The rendering is the best part of this game but the actual game is taking a long time to finish and any momentum of the story, which is decent enough, loses it because of the time between updates. I would accept the wait if it had content, a great example of a game here is Being a DIK which is going 5 years now being on the site since 2019 great renders as well, and a great game the difference between this game and Being a DIK is the CONTENT. Chapter 1 focuses on world-building, establishing narrative, and characters. Chapter 2 expands on the narrative and characters such as the main girls by making branches for each girl which down the story the player will need to make a big choice, chapter 3 deals with the choices the player made from those chapters. There is FOCUS on each chapter. Another example is Superhuman. Great story and consistently good updates. Each update ends with setting up the next update that way the player is engaged and wanting for the next update. The game going on for 3 years and has more content and engagement than this game which has better art but lacks variety unlike Superhuman which has the same premise, the MC having superpowers. A third example and a big one since it just finished is a game from 2019, City of Broken Dreamers. Unique art, unique atmosphere, unique characters, and good story has more content and has finish in five years to what this game hasn't even finished from part 10 it seems and in each parts there isn't much content unlike with CBD. And it seems the creator is moving to another project which will take more FOCUS away from this thus derailing whatever wait and/or anticipation for the next update.
Also can we just stop with the Landlady and acquaintance and just state it as it is.Hell just go with stepcest all the way cause the dialog already implies and its less CRINGE
Also can we just stop with the Landlady and acquaintance and just state it as it is.Hell just go with stepcest all the way cause the dialog already implies and its less CRINGE
Because most dev think incest kink brings them money and have to workaround due to patreon. If they just use peoples name and gives hints it would be good enough but most dev likes to use the "landlady" , "room mate" term for it. It awkward as hell to read. It's bad practice and most dev like to copy paste the idea without giving it much thought. Also most dev are usually good at one area either writing or renders but seldom both, so it could be that too.
TLDR - Dev's that uses those terms are just lazy to write a better story since it's the hardest part and sticking to a working formula is an easier way out.
Last edited:
Please we need android version of this magnificent game in near future
- Dec 23, 2019
- 1,247
- 854
I started this from day one again and haven't gotten too far, seeing a few continuity errors and dialog discrepancies.
They just drove for hours to reach a property they own (In the middle of nowhere?), where even the reception is nonexistent, yet Emily gets ready to go clubbing and returns hammered no less.
Emily wakes up the MC, and talks to him for a while, mentioning she is going to University and that the MC needs to go and see their parental figure.
We talk to said parental figure, to the point where the Parental figure asks the MC to wake up Chloe...the same Chloe who asked where her heels were with the name tag of Emily (The render is Chloe, the name tag associated is Emily)?
I recall many more upcoming gems that I get to look forward to, as I am sure are still in this.
One confusing thing is they will talk about the COMPANY...that makes BUSINESS.
Nothing specific, like maybe textile production, or insurance broker, a law firm, maybe an electronics manufacturer??
Further down the line, we get someone to GIVE us their company... which also makes business because this also makes sense.
Someone builds a company from the ground up, devotes their life to making it succeed, then just, oh sure no problem here are the keys, do you want fries with that?
I figured the Dev had an editor go through this by now, to catch the inconsistencies in the scenes, and delivery of the lines, since the dialog used to be abysmal, now it flows like English should, but maybe it was just a brief one-and-done sort of deal for just the dialog translation alone.
They just drove for hours to reach a property they own (In the middle of nowhere?), where even the reception is nonexistent, yet Emily gets ready to go clubbing and returns hammered no less.
Emily wakes up the MC, and talks to him for a while, mentioning she is going to University and that the MC needs to go and see their parental figure.
We talk to said parental figure, to the point where the Parental figure asks the MC to wake up Chloe...the same Chloe who asked where her heels were with the name tag of Emily (The render is Chloe, the name tag associated is Emily)?
I recall many more upcoming gems that I get to look forward to, as I am sure are still in this.
One confusing thing is they will talk about the COMPANY...that makes BUSINESS.
Nothing specific, like maybe textile production, or insurance broker, a law firm, maybe an electronics manufacturer??
Further down the line, we get someone to GIVE us their company... which also makes business because this also makes sense.
Someone builds a company from the ground up, devotes their life to making it succeed, then just, oh sure no problem here are the keys, do you want fries with that?
I figured the Dev had an editor go through this by now, to catch the inconsistencies in the scenes, and delivery of the lines, since the dialog used to be abysmal, now it flows like English should, but maybe it was just a brief one-and-done sort of deal for just the dialog translation alone.