VN Ren'Py Call of Nature [Chapter 1 P2 v0.3] [Hyperbolic Flower]

[Hyperbolic Flower]

That seems fine to me.

Then is Leo.
Well, I go to sleep, tomorrow I will be working in the first real sex scene (bad bitch though). Guys, be sure to have your good and bad points ready for the next update. Otherwise you will have to replay it all over to unclock scenes.

 

[LGM]

A fairly good start. Tenses are sometimes messed up, and the word "meet" is mistakenly used for locations.

Also, since they are pretty prolific in this game, I guess I have to point out that Sex dreams in games are bad.

I'll be sure to have another look in the future.

 

[srfsmrf_]

LGM Thanks, I did the proofreading here, although English isn't my primary language either. Still learning/improving every day though (at least, that's the idea ) I'll go through it once more, but feel free to point out the mistakes or suggestions for improvement.

Don't know if you've read this thread back a little, but there has been some talk/complaints about the dream stuff already. Personally I didn't have an issue with them here (game just started 'n such), but/and I'm positive real sex is on the horizon already, and dream stuff won't be a common thing or something.

 

[Hyperbolic Flower]

A fairly good start. Tenses are sometimes messed up, and the word "meet" is mistakenly used for locations.

Also, since they are pretty prolific in this game, I guess I have to point out that Sex dreams in games are bad.

I'll be sure to have another look in the future.

Thnks. Dreams (and fantasies) it's mostly something for the begining. To have content while the game develops relationships. There may be a couple more in the future but just a small fraction.
About the grammar, there may be some mistakes here and there but srfsmrf_ is doing a great job, specially considering that english is not even his primary language. He also does it voluntarily. Believe me, if it were me it would be a mine of grammar horrors.

 

[Trolazo]

needs a lot more of animations and better fps.

 

[MezzoKoto]

i like the game it has ikkitousen vibes to it now i got an idea have a mechanic in the game where the mc gets a power boost for fights if he has sex or other sexual thing hell you could make a spin off of this where you play as a girl and the same implies to get better at fights she has to get dicked down or get a guy or girl to cum just my two cents

 

[Hyperbolic Flower]

i like the game it has ikkitousen vibes to it now i got an idea have a mechanic in the game where the mc gets a power boost for fights if he has sex or other sexual thing hell you could make a spin off of this where you play as a girl and the same implies to get better at fights she has to get dicked down or get a guy or girl to cum just my two cents

You mean like Highschool Dxd where Issei gets a power boost touching Rias boobs?
I can work on some things with some resemblence.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Then is Leo.
Well, I go to sleep, tomorrow I will be working in the first real sex scene (bad bitch though). Guys, be sure to have your good and bad points ready for the next update. Otherwise you will have to replay it all over to unclock scenes.

It's a waste of effort arguing with Yog, he's VERY eccentric and almost impossible to please.
He shows up to almost every thread to argue about his impossible harem that must include all the girls, but not the ones he doesn't like, but them too because he doesn't want to choose between love interests.

I can sorta, kinda understand him. I too tend to avoid characters I don't like, but I'm not making it everyone's problem.

 

[Hyperbolic Flower]

I can sorta, kinda understand him. I too tend to avoid characters I don't like, but I'm not making it everyone's problem.

Thanks, I really apreciate your support. I think we made some progress, though. For sure I had way worst arguments both in the internet and here.
Well, we all have our fetish, right? I don't judge other people on theirs (unleass it's something really bad).
Me? I do like bad girls. I find them really hot, so my game will feature them. Good, kind, sweet girls as well. Some male dom, some romantic sweet sex, some female dom. There is variety.
But I do need to drove a line here: I will not litsen anybody coming here saying that the game sucks, the dev sucks or whatever. And I will no take out any content either.

 

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[Absolite22]

Fucking amazing, my total support on this one!

 

[MezzoKoto]

You mean like Highschool Dxd where Issei gets a power boost touching Rias boobs?
I can work on some things with some resemblence.

if you like high school dxd i highly recommend you watch the anime ikkitousen its kinda like dxd with fights that happen in high school with lewd stuff happening hell at some points there's lesbian sex init and big bouncy boobs everywhere

 

[Hyperbolic Flower]

if you like high school dxd i highly recommend you watch the anime ikkitousen its kinda like dxd with fights that happen in high school with lewd stuff happening hell at some points there's lesbian sex init and big bouncy boobs everywhere

Gonna check it later, thanks for the advice. Also, (one of my first works).

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Is there a WT showing the path that the choices follows? It would be handy.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

They should have a MultiMod, where it shows the path the choices follows and away to change the choices when we want to lol. I would follow the evil path but change it towards the good lol.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I really can't enjoy this game, i want to choose whatever choice I want but I don't want to corrupt or force anyone to do anything. They really need to add a mod where you can play as evil as you want but can change your choice levels.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I really can't enjoy this game, i want to choose whatever choice I want but I don't want to corrupt or force anyone to do anything. They really need to add a mod where you can play as evil as you want but can change your choice levels.

I like the good route, so I've gotten all the good points I can. I don't like the bad bitch LIs, so I'm good at avoiding giving them points.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I like the good route, so I've gotten all the good points I can. I don't like the bad bitch LIs, so I'm good at avoiding giving them points.

Do you still get to have sex with everyone?

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Do you still get to have sex with everyone?

For now there are no sex scenes beyond a couple of dreams.

In any case, I think the only possible sex scenes will be those that include the LIs of the route you are following (good or bad), I don't know if following a neutral route will allow you to have access to both or will close access to all or something in between (you will be able to access some of each side).

 

[Hyperbolic Flower]

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