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I don't understand what you don't understand... it is pretty clear:
"Tell them..." (while the young couple are talking)
"Ask her..." (when there are only 2 people in the room: 1 girl and 1 man)
"Take a photo..." (while the photogapher have a camera in his hands...)
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- Jul 9, 2022
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Not a lot of content released thus far, but even so, this game holds promise. I enjoyed it. It's somewhat unique. The corruption of the gorgeous Katerina is well done. The long sex scene is hot (mostly stills with some minor animations), and the renders are good quality for the most part. Definitely an AVN to keep an eye on.
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That could be a good idea for the next episode with her in the future
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Thank you LoGyMW, I totally understand no problem. I am glad that you enjoy my main project at least
- Dec 28, 2017
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OK, this first chapter was a fun little romp.
The girl was visually appealling, the setting is super hot and I'm sure it will lead to even spicier situations.
However, I have 3 big negative remarks to make:
-Kat's evolution was moving at a reasonable pace until the moment he decided to get naked to encourage her to do the same, and she was OK with that. That made absolutely 0 sense taking into account all the previous interactions, including the previous choice right before that point.
- Please, forget about those sexual pseudo-animations that repeat for a few times or force you to click several times to move on. If you want to make looped-render animations, make them into an endless loop that plaus at a normal speed, and so that a single left click ends them.
- Finally and most importantly, please, cut down on the verbose descriptions during sex scenes. It is nice to get an insight into what the characters are feeling and thinking, but in my opinion you went overboard with that. It ends up being really repetitive and overwhelming.
The girl was visually appealling, the setting is super hot and I'm sure it will lead to even spicier situations.
However, I have 3 big negative remarks to make:
-Kat's evolution was moving at a reasonable pace until the moment he decided to get naked to encourage her to do the same, and she was OK with that. That made absolutely 0 sense taking into account all the previous interactions, including the previous choice right before that point.
- Please, forget about those sexual pseudo-animations that repeat for a few times or force you to click several times to move on. If you want to make looped-render animations, make them into an endless loop that plaus at a normal speed, and so that a single left click ends them.
- Finally and most importantly, please, cut down on the verbose descriptions during sex scenes. It is nice to get an insight into what the characters are feeling and thinking, but in my opinion you went overboard with that. It ends up being really repetitive and overwhelming.
- Jan 30, 2019
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Thanks a lot for your feedbacks!
I see what you mean for the naked part. I wanted to accelerate the pace at some point but maybe I could have been a bit less « bull ».
And in my mind she was aroused by him so that could explain her shift. Maybe I should explain more what’s going on with her thoughts at this moment…
I agree with your other 2 points. Though I find quite difficult the balance between saying enough things to describe the actions/thoughts and saying too much.
But I will definitely improve for the next chapter!