to be honest, i think the idea of AVNs is awesome, and the base concepts that some devs come up with have potential for a lot of entertainment. but youre right, johhny. the majority are written in a way that makes them VERY tough reads. and i agree that the writing in this game was passable, but disagree that the style change in writing and the girls personality's was slight. just my opinion. i also think the devs can turn this around and have it be as good as it started out, i wish them success either way. after all, maybe there are more people that liked the changes they made? i agree with you joshy92, im very much looking forward to the next chapter. cheers!