Great female MC, nice renders, the game succeeds on its fun waitressing minigame and gradually paced corruption. The huge issue is pacing, the intersection between "the story" and "the corruption." The MC risks being corrupted by the power of her sexuality, and risks being overpowered/exploited by the men she has been teasing for money. There's a dangerous edge to it.
So the waitressing game starts off hard and becomes easier as you level up. If you're willing to endure/encourage lewd behavior, you get more money and accelerate the skill tree progression. There's not a lot to do with money though, and even less to do with your dignity (because the game is still in early stages imo). There needs to be more incentive to perform (or an actual reason to be restrained and modest).
There needs to be gold sinks that give the player a genuine incentive to care about what happens. If she's clearing thousands of gold a night, why is she sleeping in a one room shack with no insulation? The game needs a reward cycle where she can buy nicer clothes for herself and her ward, rent a nicer home, buy nicer food, whatever. It doesn't need to be a mechanical change, but it should be something the player can SEE. Then these things come with a recurring cost that keeps her working the lucrative but corrupt job.
Stuff that I don't like-
the "story" is fucking broken. My waitress is blowing dudes under the table for tips, then goes home and acts like she's never left the convent before. It's bizarre and schizophrenic. There's not enough to do in the game world besides the minigame, and the minigame feels like a pocket universe that doesn't actually affect the "real world."
the sheer volume of butt stuff is completely over-the-top. within like 20 minutes of waitressing this chick has dudes shoving their fist up her ass, and she's like "it's a living " like some flintstones can opener. that's stupid. butt stuff beyond caressing her ass should probably be completely disabled until some checkpoint event where she is willing to wear a plug.
gay dudes do butt stuff all the time, but they have poppers to help. feels ridiculous in a bad way to have a prudish, hetero woman rolling with that much ass play, which becomes more insane when you play a "story" cut scene and she's thinking she's a virgin schoolteacher again
So the waitressing game starts off hard and becomes easier as you level up. If you're willing to endure/encourage lewd behavior, you get more money and accelerate the skill tree progression. There's not a lot to do with money though, and even less to do with your dignity (because the game is still in early stages imo). There needs to be more incentive to perform (or an actual reason to be restrained and modest).
There needs to be gold sinks that give the player a genuine incentive to care about what happens. If she's clearing thousands of gold a night, why is she sleeping in a one room shack with no insulation? The game needs a reward cycle where she can buy nicer clothes for herself and her ward, rent a nicer home, buy nicer food, whatever. It doesn't need to be a mechanical change, but it should be something the player can SEE. Then these things come with a recurring cost that keeps her working the lucrative but corrupt job.
Stuff that I don't like-
the "story" is fucking broken. My waitress is blowing dudes under the table for tips, then goes home and acts like she's never left the convent before. It's bizarre and schizophrenic. There's not enough to do in the game world besides the minigame, and the minigame feels like a pocket universe that doesn't actually affect the "real world."
the sheer volume of butt stuff is completely over-the-top. within like 20 minutes of waitressing this chick has dudes shoving their fist up her ass, and she's like "it's a living " like some flintstones can opener. that's stupid. butt stuff beyond caressing her ass should probably be completely disabled until some checkpoint event where she is willing to wear a plug.
gay dudes do butt stuff all the time, but they have poppers to help. feels ridiculous in a bad way to have a prudish, hetero woman rolling with that much ass play, which becomes more insane when you play a "story" cut scene and she's thinking she's a virgin schoolteacher again