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Here is my very first report, don't be too mocking
Very nice. But with street shoes on the bed? No no no!
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I think you did well. You even made sure she looks at the camera by moving the eyes (a rookie mistake is to leave the eyes at default). Don't know why I would be mocking
Here are some small tweaks you could do to improve your image:
- The angle of her head is a little weird somehow in relation to the camera. changing the head could make her intent clearer. (why is she on the bed? Does she like that or not? is she indifferent?) answering those question makes it easier to pose her. (If you are still unsure just act it out. How would you relay that feeling)
- You can turn on the depth of field in the camera settings to lift her out of the background (only started with that myself just recently)
- You can experiment with the focal length in the camera settings (amount of zoom). going for a wide angle compared to a tele lens produces vastly different images (need to experiment with that myself as well) I'm not saying this will improve the image but it's worth a try.
- You now went with a balanced lighting in the scene. You could experiment with some dramatic lighting to support the scene. (weird angle, different colour etc.) Not an improvement per say but it is fun to try.
- She sits very high on the bed. She has no weight. You could lower her a little so she sinks a little into the bed. Though you would need to adjust the bed itself as well to make sure the fingers, knees and shoes don't just disappear. And I can't say I can always be bothered to do that.
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Off to a good start. You were careful (and natural) with collision; where there was a lot of potential to (technically) interrupt - you made it work as an advantage instead; deftly arranging things to avoid that issue completely. Nice framing, lighting, a slight differential between the two models to make them complimentary. Plenty organic and not at all too flat.
Well done! Off and running!
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Hmm, interesting how that sturdy belt not only enhances her tug-able frame but ties into the painting as well, eh? Any chance that happened on purpose? Nice.
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For the record, that’s real fine work on the pussy in particular (no pun intended). Not just complimentary to the rest of her sublimely sensual form but notably detailed (given the tools available in Daz). Also did not fall prey to “perfection” there (as an artist) and I can appreciate that sensibility.
Shoe_Lac3 is definitely on my list of looking-forward-to’s. Keep up to fine work!
PS What happened to the ‘servers’ behind her? Are we meant to see this as a moment of imagination, perhaps?
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Your not alone in that worldLMAO, yup! I totally understand! I am bad for going off on a tangent, rendering a scene and then realize it has absolutely NOTHING to do with what I set out to create! LOL
That's how the creative process works sometimes though. Love your work anyhow.
I think you did well. You even made sure she looks at the camera by moving the eyes (a rookie mistake is to leave the eyes at default). Don't know why I would be mocking
Here are some small tweaks you could do to improve your image:
Some larger/more difficult tweaks would be:
- The angle of her head is a little weird somehow in relation to the camera. changing the head could make her intent clearer. (why is she on the bed? Does she like that or not? is she indifferent?) answering those question makes it easier to pose her. (If you are still unsure just act it out. How would you relay that feeling)
- You can turn on the depth of field in the camera settings to lift her out of the background (only started with that myself just recently)
- You can experiment with the focal length in the camera settings (amount of zoom). going for a wide angle compared to a tele lens produces vastly different images (need to experiment with that myself as well) I'm not saying this will improve the image but it's worth a try.
- You now went with a balanced lighting in the scene. You could experiment with some dramatic lighting to support the scene. (weird angle, different colour etc.) Not an improvement per say but it is fun to try.
- She sits very high on the bed. She has no weight. You could lower her a little so she sinks a little into the bed. Though you would need to adjust the bed itself as well to make sure the fingers, knees and shoes don't just disappear. And I can't say I can always be bothered to do that.
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Thanks for the tips, I'm going to apply them all, I'm going to do another render in the evening, it takes me 45 minutes - 1 hour if I require certain things, but for the next render I'll take the time to have everything applied correctly using your tips!
I played with the depth of field but I didn't get the effect I was expecting (I had no blur behind the character) these are still parameters I don't master well for the moment, I need to work on this with the light management for the outdoor environments.
I'll be careful next time!Very nice. But with street shoes on the bed? No no no!