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how the ugly duckling turned into the big slut, the summary of the kinetic. Many Tags are missing, this is not correct dear Dev.
Dear clever-comment-genius, I'm not the one running this thread.... Ask « Sonu the pilot »…
 

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Ha ha ha !!!! some one leack the final chapter !!! The dev will comite murder again in his comunity if he have such thing !!!!!:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p
I'm giving it away for free on my site... What do I care if it's here or not?
You manage to make each of your comments dumber than the previous one. You amaze me, man!
 

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the developer should be angry with himself for not knowing how to make games, perhaps his supporters are the angriest ones, even this kinetic one, with the writing complete, actually leaves a doubt, hahahahah. but because they do things that aren't their thing.
In life, and here in particular, you're always someone's arsehole. And I have to say, I'm honoured to be the asshole of a guy like you. It's true, man: I feel grown up!
 

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well that was a big let down, one could call it a complete scene, episode or chapter I suppose, but certainly not a complete story. Was interesting when it started though, and not bad for kinetic.

someone mentioned it was the ugly duckling turning into a slut, but thats not right, its the ugly slut seducing her school girl crush.

the whole destiny bit doesnt track, having an affair with someone you wanted to bang back in school isnt destiny nor fate, its kinda what everyone who can finally get "the girl" or guy tends to do.

points of interest, why was the ugly lady helping the dude seduce the mc? makes no sense once there was no one to run intereference with. but she kept popping up anyway. its not like the MC needed help or encouragement, she was basically trying to fuck the dude the moment they reencountered, and was never going to tell him no.

too many things left unresolved to call it complete, whether thats bad writing, lack of creativity or they just stopped caring about it and wanted to move on. thats the way it seems at least
 
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Well considering the childish way of dealing with a discussion or criticism, I really have to think about being 12 or 13 years old, also because they make mistakes three games out of three, abandon one, don't finish another, and say that this one is complete, friend, from the heart, you deserve a lot of pity from us, because you can't understand how depressing your job is, change jobs, friend, hahahahahha
I love it when guys end their comments by laughing at their own (supposed) humour....
Honestly man, if my games are so depressing, go play somewhere else.
Come on, answer honestly: What are you doing here? Get depressed?
 

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honestly we are the ones who gave you our time to try this thing you created, so, you should be happy, that someone noticed, hahahahaha
Another comment that ends with "ahahah". I'm going to end up thinking you're Drakov-the-decerebrate's second account.
Guys trying out my game? Well, there are quite a few. But there's not a single guy out there, apart from Drakov, who demolishes them as stupidly as you do. Well, well...
By the way, you know that Drakov registered on my site a few months ago. He liked my games at the time...
 

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well that was a big let down, one could call it a complete scene, episode or chapter I suppose, but certainly not a complete story. Was interesting when it started though, and not bad for kinetic.

someone mentioned it was the ugly duckling turning into a slut, but thats not right, its the ugly slut seducing her school girl crush.

the whole destiny bit doesnt track, having an affair with someone you wanted to bang back in school isnt destiny nor fate, its kinda what everyone who can finally get "the girl" or guy tends to do.

points of interest, why was the ugly lady helping the dude seduce the mc? makes no sense once there was no one to run intereference with. but she kept popping up anyway. its not like the MC needed help or encouragement, she was basically trying to fuck the dude the moment they reencountered, and was never going to tell him no.

too many things left unresolved to call it complete, whether thats bad writing, lack of creativity or they just stopped caring about it and wanted to move on. thats the way it seems at least
I think the story continued like this:

The two eyes that looked at them were her husband's. All night, Ken sent Debbie messages, which were unread by her.
As they say in the game, Ken assumes that Debbie is sleeping, but suddenly at 4:30 Debbie reads the messages but doesn't reply to them, and Ken sees that and like any normal man realizes his loving wife was a bit "busy sleeping " with other man that night ,and decides to leave early from work to catch her in the act. I wouldn't be surprised if Ken first went to Wayne's house and already saw how his old colleague fucks his wife.

From here, it can continue in 2 ways: Either Ken doesn't say anything to Debbie and follows her to see what happens, if she meets Ken again, or Ken discovers that he has a cuckold fetish, and allows Debbie to have extramarital relations. I would like the first part more than the second.

But as I said before, DEV does not have the will to really finish a game, even one game.


PS :
But I can also say something positive about Dev:
I like how he changed the appearance of the characters and I like that he added animations!! It can be seen that he is trying to improve his Games.
Good luck in future
 
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Another comment that ends with "ahahah". I'm going to end up thinking you're Drakov-the-decerebrate's second account.
Guys trying out my game? Well, there are quite a few. But there's not a single guy out there, apart from Drakov, who demolishes them as stupidly as you do. Well, well...
By the way, you know that Drakov registered on my site a few months ago. He liked my games at the time...
It seems that you cannot think and understand more, without insulting other people who did not share your ideas. That's why I can't even be angry with a man like you!!! Someone told me one thing and I quote: "When you see that a man is limited in his thinking, don't try to make him think more, because you won't succeed and you waisting your time" .

PS: Unlike you, I don't have more accounts on this forum. I don't see the point of this. maybe if I was a "successful" DEV like you, I would have more accounts to use to praise my games. But since I don't make games, I don't need multiple accounts. This account is my only one account !!!
 

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It seems that you cannot think and understand more, without insulting other people who did not share your ideas. That's why I can't even be angry with a man like you!!! Someone told me one thing and I quote: "When you see that a man is limited in his thinking, don't try to make him think more, because you won't succeed and you waisting your time" .

PS: Unlike you, I don't have more accounts on this forum. I don't see the point of this. maybe if I was a "successful" DEV like you, I would have more accounts to use to praise my games. But since I don't make games, I don't need multiple accounts. This account is my only one account !!!
We have one thing in common: we only have one account here. This is the only one!
As for the rest, I only insult the brats who spend their time bashing other people's games or work. Those who have well-founded and constructive criticisms are never scorned: I accept them because they come from intelligent and sometimes even kind-hearted people. I'm not here to make friends, or even 'customers'; the smart ones have understood that. Not you, Drakov. You're always on the lookout for the slightest fact, comment or publication that might give you the opportunity to make a stupid comment that ends with an "ahahah".
If you really want to be the smart guy you seem to think you are, I'll take your word for it: follow your own quote and move on. Go play somewhere else and stop wasting your time with a Dev who only makes crap games that he doesn't even finish.
 
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We have one thing in common: we only have one account here. This is the only one!
As for the rest, I only insult the brats who spend their time bashing other people's games or work. Those who have well-founded and constructive criticisms are never scorned: I accept them because they come from intelligent and sometimes even kind-hearted people. I'm not here to make friends, or even 'customers'; the smart ones have understood that. Not you, Drakov. You're always on the lookout for the slightest fact, comment or publication that might give you the opportunity to make a stupid comment that ends with an "ahahah".
If you really want to be the smart guy you seem to think you are, I'll take your word for it: follow your own quote and move on. Go play somewhere else and stop wasting your time with a Dev who only makes crap games that he doesn't even finish.
First of all, I play the game I want, I don't need suggestions from you or anyone else which game to play and what not to play, and secondly, I see that you have something personal with me, only my name comes out from your mouth by the way, I think you've become a bit obsessed with my person ( dont fall in love , i like girls not boys ;);););) ). By the way, I think you saw (but you kept quiet and didn't say anything) I also said positive things about you, because I am a fair person and when I see something good, I admit it!!!

Ps: I will always comment, and I will not move on as you say. in that quote it was about something completely different, but I won't bother to explain it to you.

To have a good day .
 
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First of all, I play the game I want, I don't need suggestions from you or anyone else which game to play and what not to play, and secondly, I see that you have something personal with me, only my name comes out from your mouth by the way, I think you've become a bit obsessed with my person ( dont fall in love , i like girls not boys ;);););) ). By the way, I think you saw (but you kept quiet and didn't say anything) I also said positive things about you, because I am a fair person and when I see something good, I admit it!!!

Ps: I will always comment, and I will not move on as you say. in that quote it was about something completely different, but I won't bother to explain it to you.

To have a good day .
Q.E.D.
 
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To Teyrna's review:
Deep breath. Exhale all the way out. There, that's well! Is everything better now? :cool:
 

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My husbands boss reminds me of this
I thought twice...
Not only Debbie, but It could be worse as well, for the context. Even the DAZ characters used reminds me the husband.
That said, I don't want you to think I'm showing off. Everyone inspires everyone, nothing ever comes from nothing, that's normal and that's fine. My husband's boss isn't a copy of anything. The developer is one of the few I can appreciate here. I'd be extremely surprised if it were a kid telling a story like this and getting into a couple's relationship, especially the dialogue at the end. This is what I call an adult game.
The beginning is clumsy. That Vivian should let herself be fucked so quickly is undoubtedly a mistake. But who doesn't? And who am I to judge? I was especially disappointed that Christian didn't give Vivian a more substantial seduction as he showed her around the house on the evening of the dinner. Everything could have been more subtle and much more tense at that point. But then again, I'm uncomfortable criticizing, because I know how hard it is to do it all.
The developer was also clever in choosing the kinetic novel; those who don't like it should move on...
And then, both graphically and in the wordless narrative, it's almost perfect.
If I had to rate it, I'd give it 5 stars without any hesitation.
 
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My husbands boss reminds me of this
I think I've found a more obvious source of inspiration for MHB: a video by a guy called Cockman, he's on Patreon and has produced a video of the same name: "My Husband's boss". It's obviously less elaborate...
 
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