Ren'Py - Dissonance [v1] [Glephy]

Nice game. Really kept me playing. If u're a fan of ntr i suggest this game. You can play on 2 modes one fully involves the messages and one give some of the girls POV's. Looking forward for the next update.

Writing is just a little bit above average.
The pacing is way off.. The design require's you to make several clicks to end the day.. this should be done automaticly. On top of that fade animations suck.
UI is terrible..
This wall of text is overwhelming. Would really benefit from sounds.
Art is really subpar.
Scrolling through forum post's suck.
Premise is quite good.
There is potential here.. Writing carries most of it...but taking it sooo slow.. this game just... desperetly needs someone with design and coding skills to execute this game better.