VN Ren'Py Dreamland [v0.4.0p] [Dokiden]

[ItsNotUs]

Bro, the writing is awful. The stunning renders led me to hope it was going to be enjoyable at the beginning, much less so after wading though the story.

I don't know, you probably haven't seen an awful writing!

A simple story about teenagers in the soul of 2000s movies. Spring break, romance, sex, drama, choice dilemma, mixed with parts of horror and mystery (thriller) - everything is very simple and therefore it is played easily and pleasantly!

Maybe you are also a fan of a deep plot where after several years of development the main only characters hold hands, but at the same time doubt whether it is too early! xD

 

[Krytax123]

I don't know, you probably haven't seen an awful writing!

A simple story about teenagers in the soul of 2000s movies. Spring break, romance, sex, drama, choice dilemma, mixed with parts of horror and mystery (thriller) - everything is very simple and therefore it is played easily and pleasantly!

Maybe you are also a fan of a deep plot where after several years of development the main only characters hold hands, but at the same time doubt whether it is too early! xD

Yeez bro, the whole story is a nonsensical mess, its not "easy and pleasent" its dumb and annoying and is simply saved by the amazing and outstanding quality of renders and character designs.

Give this dev a writer and he could become one of the greatest but as it is, its kinda wasting amazing visual talent for a below mediocre random story and kinda unlikeable characters

The story is even way worse compared to usual slasher or 2000er teenager movie stories or at least among the bad ones lol

 

[ItsNotUs]

Yeez bro, the whole story is a nonsensical mess, its not "easy and pleasent" its dumb and annoying and is simply saved by the amazing and outstanding quality of renders and character designs.

Give this dev a writer and he could becomes one of the greatest but as it is, its kinda wasting amazing visual talent for a below mediocre random story and kinda unlikeable characters

The story is even way worse compared to usual slasher or 2000er teenager movie stories or at least among the bad ones lol

I don't understand what's written wrong! Don't like toilet humor?
Give me an example!

 

[hoshin0119]

Its base

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, i don't know what the dev mixed it with, if you suddenly find it, write.

Is this the same daz3d model as Jill from Being a DIK?

 

[ItsNotUs]

Is this the same daz3d model as Jill from Being a DIK?

I haven't played Being a DIK, i don't know Jill.

 

[luqui_eldiablo]

Yeez bro, the whole story is a nonsensical mess, its not "easy and pleasent" its dumb and annoying and is simply saved by the amazing and outstanding quality of renders and character designs.

Give this dev a writer and he could becomes one of the greatest but as it is, its kinda wasting amazing visual talent for a below mediocre random story and kinda unlikeable characters

The story is even way worse compared to usual slasher or 2000er teenager movie stories or at least among the bad ones lol

I liked it. It might not be Being a DIK, but it's good.
You know, there are other games if you prefer.

 

[B1ank1]

Its base

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, i don't know what the dev mixed it with, if you suddenly find it, write.

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Boss man do you perhaps know Danielle model assets iv been looking for it for a week now i still cant find it

 

[ItsNotUs]

Boss man do you perhaps know Danielle model assets iv been looking for it for a week now i still cant find it

No, i don’t know what model she has, but she and Summer have the same base.

 

[Maviarab]

I don't know, you probably haven't seen an awful writing!

A simple story about teenagers in the soul of 2000s movies. Spring break, romance, sex, drama, choice dilemma, mixed with parts of horror and mystery (thriller) - everything is very simple and therefore it is played easily and pleasantly!

Maybe you are also a fan of a deep plot where after several years of development the main only characters hold hands, but at the same time doubt whether it is too early! xD

Yeez bro, the whole story is a nonsensical mess, its not "easy and pleasent" its dumb and annoying and is simply saved by the amazing and outstanding quality of renders and character designs.

Give this dev a writer and he could becomes one of the greatest but as it is, its kinda wasting amazing visual talent for a below mediocre random story and kinda unlikeable characters

The story is even way worse compared to usual slasher or 2000er teenager movie stories or at least among the bad ones lol

Actually based around the 80's type movies...not 2000's. You both miss the name of the park/lake they were at? There's more eggs if you look hard for them.

As for the writing, no worse than anything else...and if anyone thinks one of the No1 AVN's from a certain pink pyromaniac actually has/is good writing or plot...you really should get out more lol. This is no worse.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Actually based around the 80's type movies...not 2000's. You both miss the name of the park/lake they were at? There's more eggs if you look hard for them.

As for the writing, no worse than anything else...and if anyone thinks one of the No1 AVN's from a certain pink pyromaniac actually has/is good writing or plot...you really should get out more lol. This is no worse.

I'm not saying that this is the best VN, i'm saying that it's good - it has a beautiful picture and a simple plot with moments of humor, horror and etc. You can relax in this game!

 

[laizin]

Originally,I thought summer heat had a bad writing for sure,bore and plain,but after playing this....
I found the winner!

 

[Br0mig0]

Man theres some hard critics to this one, if you play it with one hand its not bad