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Beast Within

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dam you seem upset lol , i was just asking why the scenes got removed and this was my hypothesis, i dont feel like its ntr either but maybe some do. and me complaining about "finding faults in the game or complain pointlessly over minor or unnecessary scene", the theme changed yeah ok that is minor, the "maternal figure" was obviously going to get some content and focus as the game was before and the dev shifted for X reason and im sad about it because i "cared" but hey its fine just not sure im going to follow this and also was curious why it got removed.
because nobody cared about it.

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kibaris

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It's me or there is some problem with Zoe writting? Mc and her were supposed to be childhood friend and very close , and they act like it after their reunion, and nothing bad with that, but the begining of the story is hard to explain then because :

For someone that supposedly miss so much her friend after a few years without seeing him, she didnt even bother to talk to him during her whole vacation, even though she live close to his house, like she couldnt even spare a a few minutes just to say hello and greet an old friend?
And if mc didnt run into her accidentaly, she would have left without even saying a word to him since she returned to the city the day after that, something that is hard to explain, unless she had forgot about him , which doesnt seem to be the case.

It seem realy out of character, because she seem like a nice girl and seem to genuily miss him,which is why i mention it.

Also we have a little error with her age, Tony said that she's two year older than them ( mc and Tony are 21 and Adam 22, so she should be 23-24, but the bio say 22)
 

Danv

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decided to give this one a shot... what the fuck with this "fetch water from the river" and "chop wood for bathhouse" bullshit? they live in a modern house, with electricity, plumbing and complete kitchen set - why they act like it's fucking log cabin in a middle of nowhere?

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Marvoch

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Aug 24, 2023
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It's me or there is some problem with Zoe writting? Mc and her were supposed to be childhood friend and very close , and they act like it after their reunion, and nothing bad with that, but the begining of the story is hard to explain then because :

For someone that supposedly miss so much her friend after a few years without seeing him, she didnt even bother to talk to him during her whole vacation, even though she live close to his house, like she couldnt even spare a a few minutes just to say hello and greet an old friend?
And if mc didnt run into her accidentaly, she would have left without even saying a word to him since she returned to the city the day after that, something that is hard to explain, unless she had forgot about him , which doesnt seem to be the case.

It seem realy out of character, because she seem like a nice girl and seem to genuily miss him,which is why i mention it.

Also we have a little error with her age, Tony said that she's two year older than them ( mc and Tony are 21 and Adam 22, so she should be 23-24, but the bio say 22)
Yeah, I agree. She seems to not care one bit about the MC. She didn’t try to contact him at all during the two years she was in the city (yet now that she’s at the farm, she messages her friends back in town every day). She didn’t even make an effort to reach out, and their meeting was purely accidental.

I’m not sure if she’s out of character due to bad writing or if she’s just a fake—someone who doesn’t want to say no because she feels guilty but isn’t really interested in maintaining contact.

Since she seems to be part of the harem, I’d be inclined to chalk it up to bad writing. But then again, that feels like a pretty big mistake to make, so it could also be the second one.

In any case, I found her a bit hard to swallow as a character due to the above.
 
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Marvoch

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One thing is certain. Regardless of any potential writing issues with Zoe (who, in any case, exhibits a rather erratic behavior even later on—you can tell she cares about the protagonist, but at the same time, she doesn’t seem particularly proactive, either as a friend or otherwise, in reaching out), the author is clearly having a blast with this game, and that enthusiasm is contagious.

Even though there isn’t much of a story at the moment, the sheer passion behind it keeps you fully engaged. I just hope the developer brings Tony and Adam back into the story because they’re absolutely hilarious, and the game lost two fantastic characters when they stayed in the village.
 

FatYoda

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Are there consequences to fucking everything that moves or not? I'm cleaning up my "games" drive and im trying to decide whether to shove it in the harem folder or not. Whether it's a traditional harem or not, if there's no consequences to it to fucking around it's going there.
 
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