VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Exploring the Big Apple [Ep.7] [Dimajio333]

EP4.

I'm a big fan of NTR/Corruption/Sharing/Cuckold stories. And this Dev is really talented with his stories and games. I loved 'Pineapple Express' and 'Exploring The Big Apple' might even be on course to top that.

Nice renders. Hot female MC. Really good writing. And I love the two character perspective of the same day.

All 3 branches(Cuckold, Sharing and Cheating) although quite similar and repetitive in some aspects, are really beginning to branch out into their own excellent and hot storylines now in Episode 4. So I can't wait for Ep5 and beyond, and will be keeping my eye on all this talented Devs future projects.

One of the best game I have played so far.
Really nice renders, I like when the plot is slow and its well driven here.
Maybe introduce some blonde character in the futur ? Please keep it slow
Good job

Review Version : Ep. 4

For a NTR / sharing game this game impressed me and was more enjoyable than things I did not like but I do have some mixed feeling on this game at the same time

The Good

The relationship between the MC and his wife

The branching - This game has pretty good branching for a NTR / sharing focus game. The NTR has 3 separate subs paths depending on your choices. Cuckhold , sharing but slowly together as a team / with consent , full on sharing ( tho this path can also be considered cheating to some)

The context of the scenes I find kind of hot even if the scene themself it's all that hot but this dev does a good job building it up through context.


The Bad

While you are given the option 1 or 2 MC point of view. I find the 2 MC point of view a bit to repetitive.

So far the game kind of feels empty it mostly revolves around 3 characters but I assume that is going to change in the next few updates

The cheating options. The 2 scenes I consider cheating it kind of just happens and I did not expect those choices to lead to it. Would be better if scenes that could be considered cheating made a bit more clear. One was easily able to backtrack and pick the other choice the other the choices was alot further back.

The Okay

This isn't bad for me personally as I really like it but it can be depending on the person. But right now most of the NTR scenes are long distance which I find kind of hot if im being honest. Since the wife does tell the MC about them. But if you want or need the MC to be involved it might be bad for you

Overall a really good sharing game so far and can't wait for more it is alomost on the same level as my favorites within this genre but a little improvements here and there could be one of my favorites.

I feel compelled to write this now after a new release just occurred, with a few other reviewers being critical.

I very much enjoyed the latest release, and am surprised to see cold reactions.

Artwork: Best it's ever been in this dev's history. Skilled use of DoF is starting to become a regular thing, most renders are pretty to look at, and the wife's model is quite attractive.

GUI/UX: Standard renpy experience, nothing special but nothing bad - has clear indicators for things like corruption level. I enjoyed the inclusion of the spy pictures on the laptop, something players looking for an "in the dark" mc playthrough will like even more.

Music: Good, stays consistent with this dev's past habits of emotional piano bgm and occassional sound effects for interjections or lewd scenes.

Dialogue/story: While the initial premise setup may cause a few raised eyebrows, it's certainly not outside of what's reasonable for the porn game world; believable enough in its own right. Past that, I thought the writing was solid, there's no engrish, it's all very clear to understand. The wife's narrations were also well done, and didn't feel cheeky or tropey to me.

Mechanics: This is where the game really shines IMO. At the time of writing, there are four fully fleshed-out paths, all with subvariants all containing unique dialogue and renders. Rarely do we see games with multiple paths appealing to often divergent interests all get equal attention.

The only kind of player I wouldn't recommend this to is someone sensitive towards a roommate male hitting on their wife (but nothing more). For anyone else, I would strongly recommend playing it.

As artwork and game mechanics are by far the two most important aspects of a daz renpy game, 5 stars from me.

It started promising and it rapidly going down the hill.

The characters are well described and the art is fine quality.

The plot is ok, nothing crazy sophisticated but credible.

What is wrong?!? Well the thing that almost all those adult games developers get wrong. The sex.

Sex scene introduced so far are one ok (just ok) and the other sex scene is merely a checkbox exercise. Filling the games with sex scenes that last 5 images is really poor delivery and it doesn't dignify the concept of adult game.

Lisa game for example nailed what sex scene should look like. That is the standard I look as comparison

Here's an example how to not make a porn game. Plot is utterly ridiculous, dialogues are awful and renders while decent on the surface are mediocre at best due to bad posing and lack of animations. It seems like we're watching some mannequins having sex. The corruption is also done amateurishly, with no believability. Very low effort game.

a bad copy of many games produced by this DEV, the characters always act in a very boring way, poor visual expressions of the faces, without interest, bare and basic graphics, an announced corruption, a porn video in the form of a comic. no real point of novelty or change of pace.

Played a bit but....

None of this makes any sense at all. Seriously, a young married couple would never sleep next to a lecherous photographer they don't even know. I realize that realism is not necessarily to be expected, but why does it have to be so clumsy? I don't like that kind of style at all.

Just finished playing this, really enjoyed it. Lovely renders with none of that annoying animation, where the characters look odd during sex. A simple story told well, with nice pacing/development. Gave me "dry throat" a few times, which is always the sign of great work. The young couple/older man dynamic is done well in this, in that is doesn't do it at the expense of another man. This is about a couple exploring their emotional capacity to handle sexual taboo, which clearly interests them both. It's a big thumbs up from me.

Well, what can I say - this is a homer....out of the park, if you're an NTR lover.
I know a lot of you are not, so please don't diss this if NTR is not your vibe, just move on.
For those of you who like this genre, then this is a great story of wife slowly corrupted into a horny slut. What more can I say?
The renders are great.
The story is really good (and from an obviously native english speaker)
No really good animation, but nevertheless, the mostly "stills" does a great job of visualizing the story.
The dual perspective, is a nice feature which stretches out the story, but mostly in a good way (with minimal dialogue skipping).

All in all - a solid 5 of 5!!

I would like to share my impressions of the visual novel that I recently passed. The plot of the game turned out to be quite fascinating and unpredictable. I liked how events unfolded and how they influenced the outcome of the story. I was especially pleased with the presence of two branches of the main character's development. It allowed me to choose my path and see different endings. It was interesting to watch how my decisions affect the course of events.

This visual novel fascinated me with its beautiful main character and fascinating plot. It not only pleases the eye, but also makes you worry about the fate of the characters. I'm looking forward to continuing!

the game is cool, the plot is also a top, the heroine is sexy there are two branches and you can watch what happens in the game from two persons the branch of corruption is cool, not in a hurry and everything is as it should be, but I also like the branch of a modest girl, but I also wanted a little resolution there was but it was all with her guys and another character looking at it from an angle and so I really liked the game

The gameplay in this game turned out to be very good, the plot is fascinating, and the heroine is beautiful and charismatic. The author coped with the task perfectly, allowing players to play as two characters, which makes the game soulful and exciting. The game world is pleasant, and the text of the plot is read with great pleasure. Overall, the game turned out to be very atmospheric and leaves a positive impression.

Great adult game with a really beautiful & sexy female MC. I am following the dev for some time and I have to say that his prev games - sharing my fiance & pineapple express- had inadequate rendering but the writing was relatively good and they were completed. The transformation in this game is impressive. Render quality is excellent and the writing is highly erotic. I believe the dev should extend this game more than his prev ones as its potentials are very high.

This one is starting pretty nicely for several reasons. First off, I like the second man, which usually is written as a stupid ape because that's what's supposed to be "alpha male" and instead here he's an interesting character, a bit more on the softer side, and I enjoy it. The writing itself is in general pretty good, with both MC and FMC being well developed and fleshed out, even if a bit of porn logic is applied to make the story move forward at a decent pace. I like playing first with the husband, and making the decisions with him, and then seeing it all play out with the wife after. But it is true that choices here don't matter. You can choose to resist, but it's an NTR game so in the end, all you seem to do is lose content since things don't happen. So, in the end, it's just more worthwhile to go fully into the cuck side of things, which I don't usually enjoy but since we're switching character pov I find it is quite well done here.

Render quality is very high, and even some shots have a pretty interesting artistic effort playing with angles, lighting and so on. Animations do need a little more work and are undoubtedly scarce. There is music, but I turned it off so can't talk about it. A couple sound effects, like some voices occasionally, but I don't think those are really worth it since it's not really voice acting, just a girl saying things like "oh god" when being surprised. And some sound effects, which especially the camera sound, are an interesting addition as it is an important part of the story. And only one bug so far, and a very minor one at that with one image missing.

So, all in all, defenitely worth it and if it keeps advancing this way it'll be a very good game. I do miss the lack of importance of choices, but that does make for a more coherent story, maybe should have gone for kinetic novel though.

Very good, this guy's games are always improving! This game has a future and I really liked it, I love games with slow progress like this, it makes everything better, I'm already looking forward to the next update!

loves this last update! this has to be one of the devs that improved the most over time, he went for ok games to have a fun time here and there, to legit beautiful art games, good writing, diff paths, etc. Every game keeps getting better

I'm becoming a Dimajio333 big fan . Pineapple express, Lost in paradise, Sharing my Fiancée or Permission are, all of them, in my top ten games involving sharing or ntr.
Exploring the big apple is also aiming to become a top game.
Gorgeous girls, a great story and that needle that all NTR lovers look for, inserted with the precision of an acupuncturist.
My delights to the dev.
Though, i'd like a path with an MC dom . At least not humiliated been in charge and respected by the men around.
I know this is subjective, but is recurring with the dev.

The story is very nicely written and hopefully there will be smooth transitions later on and not immediately a portion of sex like the heroine is a slut. The images and text are very good. Let's see what happens next!