RPGM - Completed - Fate Grand NTR [Final] [PinkDream]

Writing: 4/10
Imagery: 5/10
Gameplay: 3/10
Kinks: 4/10
Overall: 4/10

Immersion broken.

You know how Master would totally use his command spells to force Mash to suck off a black guy for reputation? Yeah, me neither. No clue what the dev was thinking here, but they clearly have zero play time in FGO if this is the conclusion they came to.

There are dozens of better ways to have gone about this.

Master is unconscious, and so Mash has to act on her own but finds without her senpai backup she can't go very far. So she makes a temporary pack with another man to earn enough mana to accomplish her goals, but the supply is very limited, unless, she takes some directly from the source.

Or

Master is awake and turns down the "help" of NTR guy, but Mash sees no other way so she goes behind Master's back to make a deal with NTR guy. Slowly being corrupted little by little, but thinks it's ok because it's all to help Master.

See, came up with those two on the fly, it's not hard.

But this? A massive wet fart.

Boring story? Okay sure. Gudao dumb as a brick? Why not. Likes to get cucked? Good for him. I'm here for the NTR and sex. There are quite a bit but... it all sucks dood. It's like such low effort garbage. I don't know how hard it is to model in Koikatsu party but I've seen plenty with animations. This doesn't have any at all.

Sex poses suck. Text/Dialogue, worse than mediocre. Dumb Gudao couldn't even do a sleep fk on Mash when she's literally sleep/resting from all the work she had to do with another man.

Pure waste of time. At least I finished this entire thing in less than 30 minutes and move on with my life.

I'm a fan of NTR and FGO so I could get some enjoyment from this "game". But it really is lackluster. It has no choice or mechanical depth, the plot is barebones and does nothing to make you care about the characters, even if you are already familiar with them from their source material. Such a shame. The only other good point for me is how pathetic is the MC (forcing the girls to fuck others, masturbating all the time and perving on Mash while she sleeps). But you have no agency and the game suffers from it.

The game is really short (less than 30 min) and doesn't waste your time, so that's good. I would only tell fans of FGO and NTR to check it, the rest would probably waste their time with this. I'm giving it 2 starts because I'm really biased.

I would not call it actually a good game, but it's clearly too underrated right now. I have seen so many games that are way worse than this one and they still got better reviews from player for some reason.
This game is essentially a very short collection of erotic ntr scenes. Some of them are actually pretty nice. Kudos to author for exploring things that most ntr game creators shy away from.
Essentially, you just open the game, quickly go through all the scenes without any bs like killing mobs or walking around the map, and go forward with your day. I very appreciate games that don't force you to waste time on pointless fillers.
The models could look better, the events could be longer, the story could be more reasonable, mc could be more adequate, girls could be more realistic, plot could be more thought-through, etc... But still, there are some good moments here and there and you don't have to waste hours to find them.
There is a recollection room when you finish the game with all the events to rewatch is you are interested in that.
Author could take this experience and create a better game next time, hope he does that.

This game has a lot of problems, and I don't think the Dev can fix them without starting over.
First thing is that the pacing is just way too fast. As soon as you arrive, you use your command seals on Mash to order her to have sex with other guys for respect. Like, you aren't even allowed to try other options. I get unavoidable NTR, but that's usually because the other guys are pushing in. You just don't do anything all day.

The main character sits in his room, sleeps, and jacks off. If there's nothing you can affect, there's no reason for this game to have, like, game elements. Why do we have a map, let alone one this fucking big to walk around if it's not used for anything? Like, pick up a job or something else to earn Respect while your girls run off.

Hell, I think that would be a better premise. You work hard day after day to try and get respect, but it's like a trickle, so your girls volunteer to try and get 'more', which leads to them getting corrupted and fucked. And we could even have scene variation based on what job you do around the way too expansive map.

Yeah, this map is too fucking big. It's just dead time to walk around and shit. This isn't being sold on Steam. Why are we padding out the runtime? This is a porn game, not some kind of architecture simulator.

The art is... okay. Ironically, despite being literally ordered unbreakably to obey and have sex, only now, on like, v5 do we have the first actual penetration.

I don't know if the dev reads this stuff, but I kinda wish they would. At the same time, that would lead to this project getting completely cancelled and scrapped, so may as well finish this and try to take this into account for a remake later down the line.

Probably the best looking 3D Fate parody, I'll give it that. Other than that, it's not walk heavy for an rpgm game, as there is teleport points basically every where. That's it though. Currently not worth playing but if the story and writing is reworked it'd be great. We definitely need a good 3D Fate game here.

I like Fate. There's a lot of potential with Fate hentai, NTR or not. Tons of girls and lots of different scenarios you can put them in.

As it is right now, this game does not have potential. It feels like a standard cash grab.

The Gameplay
Wake up, go to right room, watch NTR scene. There's nothing interesting or engaging about this. There are no choices to make or obstacles. This is essentially a kinetic novel in RPGM engine

The Plot
Pretty bad and nonexistent. Regarding the NTR. you willingly cuck yourself and say "Oh no. I didn't want this to happen" and you continually force it to happen. It's bad writing even by NTR standards.

The Hentai
Seriously, just find a video or something if you want porn. This isn't worth it in its current state and probably won't be in the next several releases (if it gets them)

Side note: The dev abandons a lot of the games they build. If this game is still getting updates in a year, I'm more than willing to come back and see if anything changes

I cling to hope that we will one day have a decent fanmade Fate hentai game but this isn't it

Just like any game that uses Koikatsu stuff as medium for the CG and H-Scene, its really mid.
The story is basically non existent, none, zero. Just the typical "Fast Food" NTR with no actual Corruption where the girls slowly but surely fall for the other guy(s).
Also this "game" is still in a really really early stages or even still in the pitching idea stage, again if what you after were story, stay away

This game have a strong "won't get update for the next year then get abandoned, because the dev just release a new title" vibes.

If what you after is the Characters then i suggest to just play Koikatsu instead, there are a whole lot of scene and also character's card being shared by the community

Don't bother playing it, wait for when they get more to watch.
Its not a game

For a while its just... You wake up, walk across a massive room and initiate a small scene then you walk back to your bed sleep. talk to the girl, then walk to the other side of the room was a small scene, and so on.
After like 6 of these walks across a large room you have to go buy some condoms and you actually get a sex scene .
Lots of pointless walking, its like the guy that made this thinks that large empty environments you have to walk through makes it a game.
On top of all the walking not much happens, you walk around a ton for two blowjob scenes.

This game is only better than others in the ntr genre since it actually has ntr in it. Which is the only reason this game doesn't get a lower score. The bar for ntr games is that low.