This is the first update I found to be pretty disappointing. They just fucked up the pacing. The route has lots of sex scenes, but they should have concentrated them more on the climax of the story. Instead what should have had the most steamy ending just ends in a blackscreen and totally anticlimactic way. I just wanted to worship a megalomaniac goddess for piets sake. I am pretty sure Sasha didn't have a lot to do with this one, the guy knows how to pace erotic fiction better than this, it's no rocket science.
Edit:
For the future I'd suggest the stories climax should be the erotic climax.
More dialogue during sex.
Take your time to deliver the final animations, those are the most important ones.
Maybe the partitioned updates were a mistake.