Writing needs worked on and made more neutral or look for the name variable we set them too. Even if you set the relations correct,
a lot of times they talk as if they aren't. His dad, his son, etc. Should be just dad, or our dad, and use mc's name instead of his son. They don't even use the relation name you give them. MC still calls "mom" by her 1st name a lot of times. 2 more examples below of script issues. If you're going to have options to set relations, at least use them
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