VN Ren'Py Girlfriend [v1.25] [EROTIC DROP]

[Eleanorduval]

If the criticism does not contain rudeness, the authors accept it without any problems. There are 108 pages in this thread, and you can find a huge number of posts with various suggestions and criticism. In real life, for such an appeal to a woman, which you allow yourself, they hit you in the face, and do not turn to the moderators.

yeah agree there is certain way to give his opinions

 

[runawayxd]

Android?

 

[Urfin jus]

u cleary don t know the forum rule,excessif debate about the game is sanctioned! u don t dictate dev how to work.No one put a gun on your head and force to play it.

It's better to be real than right.

 

[Urfin jus]

to add insult to injury, in the same scene we have a half incest, mother and daughter, this is a triple betrayal, betrayal on Mc, it is the two sluts betray FMC's father. perhaps one of the lowest points of the plot, is the dev tells us that he wants a loving path where they know what happens, if this is not ridiculous.

All anyone cares about is looks and body. The soul has become unnecessary garbage.

 

[verdun01]

The subplot has its own skip button, so just don't follow it and everything will run smoothly. Personally, I find it an interesting story in that it develops around the sin, embarrassment and mixed feelings of a woman. (The story is about a woman who, from being innocent, lets herself go to sin. ) I also need this story to detach some themes from day to day and from one situation to another.
As for Monique, we wanted you to become attached to the couple, but in the second season we will mainly focus on MC and FMC when they meet the characters, so you won't follow Monique and Michael's private lives anymore.
Thank you for your advice and if you have any other questions we'll be happy to answer them.

Regarding the subplot do you plan anymore content for the FMC to continue with her student Kyle.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

Regarding the subplot do you plan anymore content for the FMC to continue with her student Kyle.

In the true story, the protagonist will have a relationship with the student and other students.
But to see it you have to wait for the day to arrive (Monday).

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Would be nice to see a final solution in the upcoming Season 2 in hinsight of relationships. For e.g., if the FMC or MC refuse a person (for e.g. Brian, Ronny) for whatever reason, this person has to go for good and should never show his/her ass in this Game in any way. The sherry on to top would be if FMC or MC would be doing this with some kind of spoken impact like harsh words ("get lost"; "fuck off Asshole"; "geez..i am glad that we could get rid of him/her") and not some plain next render like nothing happend. A Couple has to talk it out in a slightly realistic way.

For e.g lets take the last phone call scene with Ronny. In the Game the FMC had a very disturbing reaction to the Phone Call. She said that she would call back later but on my Gamepath, she didn t really know this guy. She only saw him once for a few seconds and did NOT cheat on her bf. So, the normal reaction to the phone call should be like : What do you want? Why did you call me? I have a bf, leave me alone, never call me again and please delete my number. I don t know you at all. Get lost asshole and leave us alone!

Something like that. She would also tell her bf that some strange guy called her this day but she blocked his number after the call since she wouldn t wanna have anything to do with that guy (on the FAITHFUL way).

I know, its not perfect but such a behavior would be slightly more realistic.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Would be nice to see a final solution in the upcoming Season 2 in hinsight of relationships. For e.g., if the FMC or MC refuse a person (for e.g. Brian, Ronny) for whatever reason, this person has to go for good and should never show his/her ass in this Game in any way. The sherry on to top would be if FMC or MC would be doing this with some kind of spoken impact like harsh words ("get lost"; "fuck off Asshole"; "geez..i am glad that we could get rid of him/her") and not some plain next render like nothing happend. A Couple has to talk it out in a slightly realistic way.

For e.g lets take the last phone call scene with Ronny. In the Game the FMC had a very disturbing reaction to the Phone Call. She said that she would call back later but on my Gamepath, she didn t really know this guy. She only saw him once for a few seconds and did NOT cheat on her bf. So, the normal reaction to the phone call should be like : What do you want? Why did you call me? I have a bf, leave me alone, never call me again and please delete my number. I don t know you at all. Get lost asshole and leave us alone!

Something like that. She would also tell her bf that some strange guy called her this day but she blocked his number after the call since she wouldn t wanna have anything to do with that guy (on the FAITHFUL way).

I know, its not perfect but such a behavior would be slightly more realistic.

u play the harem path?

 

[DoLauSG]

The subplot has its own skip button, so just don't follow it and everything will run smoothly. Personally, I find it an interesting story in that it develops around the sin, embarrassment and mixed feelings of a woman. (The story is about a woman who, from being innocent, lets herself go to sin. ) I also need this story to detach some themes from day to day and from one situation to another.
As for Monique, we wanted you to become attached to the couple, but in the second season we will mainly focus on MC and FMC when they meet the characters, so you won't follow Monique and Michael's private lives anymore.
Thank you for your advice and if you have any other questions we'll be happy to answer them.

Are you creator of this game?
Why do you choose to skip the event of fmc with her mother in hotel with brain and in the morning you put this?

It didn't make any sense if you ask me...
It's suppose to skip the sex scene in the hotel? or it's the bug of the game and it skip automatly?
You can't put this if nothing happens that night in hotel....it create confusion and it look bad, it feel that something missing...

 

[luxury1970]

Would be nice to see a final solution in the upcoming Season 2 in hinsight of relationships. For e.g., if the FMC or MC refuse a person (for e.g. Brian, Ronny) for whatever reason, this person has to go for good and should never show his/her ass in this Game in any way. The sherry on to top would be if FMC or MC would be doing this with some kind of spoken impact like harsh words ("get lost"; "fuck off Asshole"; "geez..i am glad that we could get rid of him/her") and not some plain next render like nothing happend. A Couple has to talk it out in a slightly realistic way.

For e.g lets take the last phone call scene with Ronny. In the Game the FMC had a very disturbing reaction to the Phone Call. She said that she would call back later but on my Gamepath, she didn t really know this guy. She only saw him once for a few seconds and did NOT cheat on her bf. So, the normal reaction to the phone call should be like : What do you want? Why did you call me? I have a bf, leave me alone, never call me again and please delete my number. I don t know you at all. Get lost asshole and leave us alone!

Something like that. She would also tell her bf that some strange guy called her this day but she blocked his number after the call since she wouldn t wanna have anything to do with that guy (on the FAITHFUL way).

I know, its not perfect but such a behavior would be slightly more realistic.

Thanks to the support of some friends, we’ll definitely be able to make it happen. For us, this is a crucial solution because it will allow you to experience the paths in a definitive way: if you avoid one, it will stay out of your journey; if you choose to follow it, you'll be fully immersed without distractions, keeping your focus on the actions that truly matter to you. This will make everything feel more authentic and engaging.

So yes, I confirm that we are working on a second season that is even more realistic and exciting!

 

[Dessolos]

Would be nice to see a final solution in the upcoming Season 2 in hinsight of relationships. For e.g., if the FMC or MC refuse a person (for e.g. Brian, Ronny) for whatever reason, this person has to go for good and should never show his/her ass in this Game in any way. The sherry on to top would be if FMC or MC would be doing this with some kind of spoken impact like harsh words ("get lost"; "fuck off Asshole"; "geez..i am glad that we could get rid of him/her") and not some plain next render like nothing happend. A Couple has to talk it out in a slightly realistic way.

For e.g lets take the last phone call scene with Ronny. In the Game the FMC had a very disturbing reaction to the Phone Call. She said that she would call back later but on my Gamepath, she didn t really know this guy. She only saw him once for a few seconds and did NOT cheat on her bf. So, the normal reaction to the phone call should be like : What do you want? Why did you call me? I have a bf, leave me alone, never call me again and please delete my number. I don t know you at all. Get lost asshole and leave us alone!

Something like that. She would also tell her bf that some strange guy called her this day but she blocked his number after the call since she wouldn t wanna have anything to do with that guy (on the FAITHFUL way).

I know, its not perfect but such a behavior would be slightly more realistic.

idk I never liked the idea of a character going away from good just because you are not on their path or shut them down. I do think when you do so their screen time should be limited for sure like only when it's for story reasons , at a party stuff like that. But going away for good essentially deleting them from the story nah I don't like plus to me it feels a little disrespectful to do or want that from a character a dev created. Exception would be if they are nothing more than a minor side character than yeah I don't mind it then cause why bloat a game with side characters.

 

[luxury1970]

Are you creator of this game?
Why do you choose to skip the event of fmc with her mother in hotel with brain and in the morning you put this?
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It didn't make any sense if you ask me...
It's suppose to skip the sex scene in the hotel? or it's the bug of the game and it skip automatly?
You can't put this if nothing happens that night in hotel....it create confusion and it look bad, it feel that something missing...

We had intended to show the images through a story.
Katrin explains to MC what happened that evening so we'll separate the two paths: did betrayal occur or not.
The betrayal will become for MC (Pure Netorare) and will follow a precise path of this fetish.
Since there will be erotic moments when Katrin tells MC what happened, to do this I also have to develop the other section (that is, the one about the relationship between the two of them).

 

[-FibaG-]

only one thing could save the story, an MC who tells the girl's bitch to fuck off, the only right thing after all this mess

To be honest atm this game have some big plot holes problems...possible because is so many characters that is involve in the story...

 

[Eleanorduval]

We had intended to show the images through a story.
Katrin explains to MC what happened that evening so we'll separate the two paths: did betrayal occur or not.
The betrayal will become for MC (Pure Netorare) and will follow a precise path of this fetish.
Since there will be erotic moments when Katrin tells MC what happened, to do this I also have to develop the other section (that is, the one about the relationship between the two of them).

i know it,some path are inter-connected.Great u will continue developping mc and relationship in the second season

 

[Eleanorduval]

idk I never liked the idea of a character going away from good just because you are not on their path or shut them down. I do think when you do so their screen time should be limited for sure like only when it's for story reasons , at a party stuff like that. But going away for good essentially deleting them from the story nah I don't like plus to me it feels a little disrespectful to do or want that from a character a dev created. Exception would be if they are nothing more than a minor side character than yeah I don't mind it then cause why bloat a game with side characters.

brian aren t crucial as u think,even sophia and zaira are more important than him

 

[DoLauSG]

We had intended to show the images through a story.
Katrin explains to MC what happened that evening so we'll separate the two paths: did betrayal occur or not.
The betrayal will become for MC (Pure Netorare) and will follow a precise path of this fetish.
Since there will be erotic moments when Katrin tells MC what happened, to do this I also have to develop the other section (that is, the one about the relationship between the two of them).

Lucrezia&Augusto
In my game I avoid katrin path, but I agree to fmc to help her mother to realise that brain is a pig and she tell him that she would seduce brian to make this happen. also I agree that mc would fuck both of them(katrin and fmc) and possible with mark help path with ntrs in the future.

Now for my point of view you can either make fmc fall in love to brian and put ntr or sharing paths later when she confess to mc...and explain to him what happen in the hotel and mc will choose to share her with brian&katrin or make it cuckold route or stick to the original plan and get rid of Brian as she planned...and make it some sharing route with katrin and fmc + mark in the future?

but that not explain why you choose to no show the events in that night because from the start we're in the fmc point of view so you need to show the events what happen there...you can make a option to put some mystery if you want from mc point of view and choose to not show what happen in the hotel but later fmc explain to mc what happens...but you can't just show some events in that hotel then suddenly skip it when sex scene action would need to be happen for plot to continue.

Atm your game have some plot holes and needed to be fixed some route to make sense for player....please consider this what I tell above...I want this game to be a good success game...don't rush the routes, concentrate to the mc and fmc...make the subplot of lisa story always secondary.

Personally your game is pretty complex to many characters to many routes that need at some point to interject with each other to make a sense to the plot and I know some errors can happen.
I just wish you don't burn up and continue the main plot and that is mc and fmc.

I also agree to -FibaG- the (netorase mark path feel more cuckold(netorare) than sharing) put in the future option to watch or join the fun(example to choose if mc, mark and fmc sleep together in the bed after sex or to make sex morning with both males with her) when I read that mc will give up so easy the fmc to other guys it's BIG TURN OFF for ME it's not anymore a love between them it's just stupid obsession of cuckolding and just watch like a clown when fmc do whatever she wants...make sharing more available in your game.
If the mc want to share her with others make possible that mc would join the fun and most important to have a consensus between them.

 

[Dessolos]

brian aren t crucial as u think,even sophia and zaira are more important than him

I never said anything about Brain I was speaking in general terms and that is my opinion on any AVN not just this one

 

[Eleanorduval]

I never said anything about Brain I was speaking in general terms and that is my opinion on any AVN not just this one

well the dev usualy deleted character,just to introduce new ones i guess

 

[Eleanorduval]

Lucrezia&Augusto
In my game I avoid katrin path, but I agree to fmc to help her mother to realise that brain is a pig and she tell him that she would seduce brian to make this happen. also I agree that mc would fuck both of them(katrin and fmc) and possible with mark help path with ntrs in the future.

Now for my point of view you can either make fmc fall in love to brian and put ntr or sharing paths later when she confess to mc...and explain to him what happen in the hotel and mc will choose to share her with brian&katrin or make it cuckold route or stick to the original plan and get rid of Brian as she planned...and make it some sharing route with katrin and fmc + mark in the future?

but that not explain why you choose to no show the events in that night because from the start we're in the fmc point of view so you need to show the events what happen there...you can make a option to put some mystery if you want from mc point of view and choose to not show what happen in the hotel but later fmc explain to mc what happens...but you can't just show some events in that hotel then suddenly skip it when sex scene action would need to be happen for plot to continue.

Atm your game have some plot holes and needed to be fixed some route to make sense for player....please consider this what I tell above...I want this game to be a good success game...don't rush the routes, concentrate to the mc and fmc...make the subplot of lisa story always secondary.

Personally your game is pretty complex to many characters to many routes that need at some point to interject with each other to make a sense to the plot and I know some errors can happen.
I just wish you don't burn up and continue the main plot and that is mc and fmc.

I also agree to -FibaG- the (netorase mark path feel more cuckold(netorare) than sharing) put in the future option to watch or join the fun(example to choose if mc, mark and fmc sleep together in the bed after sex or to make sex morning with both males with her) when I read that mc will give up so easy the fmc to other guys it's BIG TURN OFF for ME it's not anymore a love between them it's just stupid obsession of cuckolding and just watch like a clown when fmc do whatever she wants...make sharing more available in your game.
If the mc want to share her with others make possible that mc would join the fun and most important to have a consensus between them.

I m pretty fine about what dev did in season 1,they just need to fix bug.A dev know always from the begin which direction to take,a lot of modification from intial plot will slow down the update and increase dev work

 

[SPH96]

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