I have to say, I really liked it..., mostly. A couple of things bothered me. First, no way in hell is MC 19, heh! Second, I feel like I just came back from three dot hell! But! The story is cute, a little funny and has potential, even though it's not the type tale that normally interests me. The renders are very good and the animations are excellent. The facial expressions for Skarlet and Axle are fantastic! Now, I realize this wasn't meant to be a shota story, but the MC is definitely very young...
So, I made some adjustments and then decided to share. Just for fun, here is an edited script that replaces three dot hell with actual punctuation. It's a novel idea, I know.

I also inserted an option to adjust the MC's age.

Again, just for fun...
Just drop 01.rpy into the game folder and confirm to overwrite.