Well the characters are still there, they just gotten an new background, and the first demo had a better setup for netorase, now it just a puzzle of first demo text with new demo text and rushed things without a flow into it, which will make the netorase not good either.Personally, it would be better for me if he left it as it is and focused on NETORASE.I think it won't require the developer to come up with a complex scenario with lots of characters.
- Thread starter Bob69
- Start date
- Nov 17, 2021
- 846
- 1,300
I really don't understand why not just copy the idea of MRL (a guy and his girlfriend move to another city and start a new life) For NETORASE, this is a great story and not complicated.
I think there already several of that kind out there, so don't think it would any better to add another to it. But eventualy oversaturation might make all stories of the same setup boring I geuss. This guy had a great start, just the people complaining kinda panicked him into rework and deliver a bad solution, should have kept the first demo and added new stuff to it to lead it to netorase and netorare like he has planned now.
- Nov 17, 2021
- 846
- 1,300
There is no such story as Moonripple Lake. I don't understand why it's not used. This is a real chance for the author. The developer rather copies 2 other similar NETORASE games .
What I mean is the theme of moving from old place to new place, but most are about move from small town to big city and dabble into the netorase, while Moonripple Lake is unique it move from big city to a smaller town instead. Which was a great approach, and it is a real gem, shouldn't though be copied. The ones i was talking about are Girlfriend, Exploring the Big Apple, Moving in with my future wife and Welcome to Port Haven... There was two others but can't recall their name right now, but all about same theme moving to a new place and exploring their new found kink.
- Nov 17, 2021
- 846
- 1,300
These are the kinds of moves that are good for a novice developer. You don't need to introduce a lot of characters right away, and you can fully focus on the boyfriend-girlfriend relationship.
- Apr 21, 2019
- 306
- 411
I liked this prologue, it's definitely not a 1/5, people are just negative towards AI from the get go. Saying "I just don’t see this game going anywhere" in review in the first pretty short version is mental illness.
- Jan 11, 2025
- 11
- 22
Thank you a lot!
Now that I re-read it I find the flow issues that you mention. Also the mistakes I let pass when redoing some scenes.
I'll fix those mistakes and work on the flow of the game for the next chapter. I don't see me going back to the first version but my idea is to bring all those characters and more to the story, focusing through the point of view of Liam.
Great game! I hope to see more of it in the future
- Jul 21, 2018
- 52
- 376
Don't worry, it's ok to have bad opinions. Enlighten me where the generic tits out scene 1 party sluts slop fuck fiesta with 6 fingers right in your face is going?
- Apr 21, 2019
- 306
- 411
The question sounds too retarded for me to answer. If you're getting so triggered by 6 fingers CG, try going outside and touch some grass.
Exhibitionism route can be fun. I hope the 2nd option leads to NTRS (it fits better) or at least there will be a choice between NTR and NTRS later in the game.
Last edited:
- Nov 17, 2021
- 846
- 1,300
I would like to clarify. At the end of the game there are 2 routes is it Netorase or just NTR?
- Jan 11, 2025
- 11
- 22
- Nov 17, 2021
- 846
- 1,300
Very glad. I love NTS. I would like to ask you one more question. Why do you like close-ups so much? Maybe add a little less of them . It just looks unusual. It's like I'm in a crowded car. Faces and stuff right in my face .
Dev, replace the images with ones from the game on this forum. The images here make it look super generic!! the game is way higher quality than this forum shows, want you to thrive.
You should leave a good review on the game, it'll help the game get better recognition.
- Aug 6, 2021
- 106
- 142
This game is promising, I look forward to the next chapter.
- Jun 30, 2024
- 295
- 601
I get so quickly bored of kinetic novels, and while this game too had some scenes/characters that do not interest me at all, I still found myself actually reading most of the dialogue in this game. The author writes well enough that a conversation seems natural enough to be believable, but without too much fluff that makes me reach for the Skip button.
The Red Headed Love Interest, Ava, is very cute and attractive. MCs friend seems like a nice dude and is quite different from MC while still having common interests and activities. Maya I'm not so interested in, as she's just too obviously slutty, but I understand her function in the story. Some of the friends at the club seemed interesting, especially the shy one.
The one single choice in this first prologue release interests me a lot though! What a cliffhanger!
Also, I'm disappointed the MCs friend (was it Jason?) not once looked directly at us saying "This hashtag is about to get heated!".
The Red Headed Love Interest, Ava, is very cute and attractive. MCs friend seems like a nice dude and is quite different from MC while still having common interests and activities. Maya I'm not so interested in, as she's just too obviously slutty, but I understand her function in the story. Some of the friends at the club seemed interesting, especially the shy one.
The one single choice in this first prologue release interests me a lot though! What a cliffhanger!
Also, I'm disappointed the MCs friend (was it Jason?) not once looked directly at us saying "This hashtag is about to get heated!".
Last edited: