VN Ren'Py How to Fix the Future [v0.3.2] [mr.moonmi]

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lionarslan

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I played this game, return to the topic to say my mind and honest opinion to the dev, wrote some pages... And it seems dev is not here. So my desire to say things about the game is gone.
I played in Russian and it looks like it's not a translation but original text. Although that phrase from changelog made me wonder...
- Fixed typos in both EN and RU versions
If that was with typos fixed then what was before that? I have a vivid imagination but I cannot imagine it.
'Cause dev team are awesome in render making and storytelling, game has a focus on story, characters are really persons, not some dolls for MC to fuck with only difference in renders, every character has it's own story. But. At the same time. Almost all characters swears as drunken sailors, it doesn't matter is there a reason for swearing or not. And another thing makes me wonder: how can such a good storyteller be so bad in Russian?

And yeah, Ragvard is a horrible word. For a sum or reasons.
 
Kellermann

Kellermann

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Really enjoy the setting and the premise here. The visuals are obviously very well done. It is clear they have taken some design cues from COBD, but that not necessarily a bad thing. I am always looking for a sci-fi fantasy game to fill the void of Mass Effect. I just wish this didn't have so much exposition. I understand that some lore building is required in the beginning, but I am deep into story now and I am still getting walls of text explaining the world and current events. Show (even in written medium), don't tell is the way to go. So far we spend more time just sitting and talking about the game world instead of actually participating in it. Hopefully, things soon transition to the real meat ( :oops: ) of the story. The little bit of agent training I've gotten so far has been quite good though.

Haven't seen too much of the lewd stuff becuase of my choices. Liu looks creepy to me so I avoid her (Daz still hasn't quite figured out how to make naturalistic Asian women that don't look like those unsettling Japanese humanoid robots. The base asian models have to be adjusted so they don't look like undead dolls). I'm not that interested in the dom/sub lifestyle so that hampers content with Octavia. Cathy and Olga seem cool and things were progressing well on the ginger front until I temp messed up my chances by telling her the truth. :cautious:
 
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Kellermann

Kellermann

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mr.moonmi said:
Yeah, I guess you're right. I also think I spent too much time explaining things. Just was worried that some people might not understand something, I guess. There are already much less of this stuff in the last update(as well as MC's thoughts). But sometimes it's easier to just write a small dialogue than spent several days rendering scenes to show it. I'd better focus on girls rather than on some unimportant stuff which can be explained in a dialogue.
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I don't think you need to change your style based on fan comments like mine. I just have some personal preferences in storytelling but they certainly are not universal. I probably should have said IMHO so it didn't sound like demand, sorry about that. I didn't know there was dev interaction on the thread, so I wasn't expecting it to be considered. Anyway, I enjoyed the game (still have a little more to go) and thought it is an interesting premise. Keep up the good work.
 
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Rchuck

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Nice job. I have played this game and i like from what I see.. Dev pleaes, make more scenes in training. Good work
 
SoulSwipre

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Daisy looks stunning but I'm not interested in Trans-content. And after I chose the no trans option, MC literally turns into a trans hater, not a fan of that. Any reason why there's no option to turn off trans content and let Daisy be a girl from the beginning?
 
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SoulSwipre said:
Daisy looks stunning but I'm not interested in Trans-content. And after I chose the no trans option, MC literally turns into a trans hater, not a fan of that. Any reason why there's no option to turn off trans content and let Daisy be a girl from the beginning?
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Think you might have reacted a bit too strong in the shower scene, take the other choice and next you can select "it's just not your thing" or something similar, you will not act like a trans hater and can have normal conversations with her later. Any choice for getting involved with her remains open (like asking her for a date or not) and it should be easy enough to not get into any trans scenes with her by not asking her for a date.... (she remains trans, you just don't need to get involved to that level)

As for implementing the choice of Daisy being trans or a regular girl? Her background story will need 2 versions and ofcourse atleast some of the sex scenes will need 2 versions, not impossible but will also depend on how big her part in the story is, a main girl might see alot more scenes then a side character.... Guess a decision like that is for the dev to make...
 
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vogelbeest said:
Think you might have reacted a bit too strong in the shower scene, take the other choice and next you can select "it's just not your thing" or something similar, you will not act like a trans hater and can have normal conversations with her later. Any choice for getting involved with her remains open (like asking her for a date or not) and it should be easy enough to not get into any trans scenes with her by not asking her for a date.... (she remains trans, you just don't need to get involved to that level)

As for implementing the choice of Daisy being trans or a regular girl? Her background story will need 2 versions and ofcourse atleast some of the sex scenes will need 2 versions, not impossible but will also depend on how big her part in the story is, a main girl might see alot more scenes then a side character.... Guess a decision like that is for the dev to make...
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Ahh, I see. Well I was following the mod, which had the option for no trans content. So didn't pay too much attention to what was the actual options.

I mean, yeah, the option of being trans obviously good for people who are into that, but most games do have that option. But I see what u mean by how big her part in the story is. It would suck if she's one of the main LI and I don't get content with her just because she's trans.
 
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SoulSwipre said:
but most games do have that option.
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Most games certainly not. Some games at most, the most famous one is WVM. But not a lot have the option to make a trans girl into normal girl because it's simply more work, when a player can just ignore the trans character. Or even ignore the game if you're a trans hater, there are tags to warn about the content.
 
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