Just played through the new update and generally really liked it. A few issues I spotted as I played through, though:
1. Melissa talking to Vicky at start, Vicky asks how much they owe the loan shark, Melissa says "Trhee million"
2. Mary brings Vicky to spare room, Vicky says, "I'm a horrible stepdaughter, aren't I?" (ignoring set roles)
3. Vicky jerking herself off next to Mary, "What a bloody stepdaughter I am" (ignoring set roles)
4. Vicky after cumming, "I hope Mary doesn't notice" (ignoring set roles)
5. Vicky trying to reason with Janet, Janet says, "We could sell your remains on the black market. Your friends too." (She then mentions Mary and Catherine specifically. Shouldn't it be family?)
6. Talking to Melissa after her photoshoot, Vicky says, "And I'm your stepsister. I'll knock his teeth out if he tries to push you around." (ignoring set roles)
7. Finishing massage, Melissa says, "What an amazing stepsister you are, Vicky..." (ignoring set roles)
8. Melissa is sometimes invisible on her bed when you visit her room from the map, though her outline is highlighted when you run your cursor over her; you can even interact with her
Ultimately, I understand you wanting to skirt around Patreon's moronic TOS, but as others were mentioning, step stuff doesn't really fly anymore. Plus, a big focus of your game is somnophilia, which has gotten other creators slapped by Patron in the past (Summertime Saga had to do a bunch of rewrites and scene revisions for example). As it is, all it would take is one corny-ass Patreon mod to stumble upon your page and play through your game before they'd likely shut you down. If I were you, I'd migrate over to Subscribe Star or find another platform less puritanical than Patreon. Hope you keep up the good work, but i don't think Patreon is much good for any creator making anything spicier than "under-the-covers missionary between a husband and wife with the lights off for the purpose of reproduction". Not anymore.
1. Melissa talking to Vicky at start, Vicky asks how much they owe the loan shark, Melissa says "Trhee million"
2. Mary brings Vicky to spare room, Vicky says, "I'm a horrible stepdaughter, aren't I?" (ignoring set roles)
3. Vicky jerking herself off next to Mary, "What a bloody stepdaughter I am" (ignoring set roles)
4. Vicky after cumming, "I hope Mary doesn't notice" (ignoring set roles)
5. Vicky trying to reason with Janet, Janet says, "We could sell your remains on the black market. Your friends too." (She then mentions Mary and Catherine specifically. Shouldn't it be family?)
6. Talking to Melissa after her photoshoot, Vicky says, "And I'm your stepsister. I'll knock his teeth out if he tries to push you around." (ignoring set roles)
7. Finishing massage, Melissa says, "What an amazing stepsister you are, Vicky..." (ignoring set roles)
8. Melissa is sometimes invisible on her bed when you visit her room from the map, though her outline is highlighted when you run your cursor over her; you can even interact with her
Ultimately, I understand you wanting to skirt around Patreon's moronic TOS, but as others were mentioning, step stuff doesn't really fly anymore. Plus, a big focus of your game is somnophilia, which has gotten other creators slapped by Patron in the past (Summertime Saga had to do a bunch of rewrites and scene revisions for example). As it is, all it would take is one corny-ass Patreon mod to stumble upon your page and play through your game before they'd likely shut you down. If I were you, I'd migrate over to Subscribe Star or find another platform less puritanical than Patreon. Hope you keep up the good work, but i don't think Patreon is much good for any creator making anything spicier than "under-the-covers missionary between a husband and wife with the lights off for the purpose of reproduction". Not anymore.
