VN - Ren'Py - It's a Bit Sudden, but Now I Have a Brown Elven Girlfriend [v0.01] [S3 Digital]

review for v0.01

short but comfy.
elf gf a cute, writing was funny, and cringe at times, but it's not something to take serious, so it's fine and does it job.
for a side project, made for the dev to practice things it's pretty decent.

I didn't want to leave such a negative review for an initial release, but someone has to address the elephant in the room.
The 'plot' of this is so immature and so hastily written; The game (as it plays now at v0.01) is five minutes of trite narrative, something you can't even really call exposition because it barely explains anything, and then a five minute overly idealistic sex scene between practical strangers, because we've barely been introduced to them.

I could perhaps forgive a fledgling game dev for something like this in their first attempt, hoping for feedback, but this developer has several other games completed. This is insulting.

I may come back far later to see how this has come, and at that point I may change or remove my review, but right now people should avoid this.