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Is this Game broken or something??? Because it starts in the middle of....what?? No Intro...no Choices??? Is this a joke?? 
- Jan 3, 2018
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Nice game, though a bit of a letdown that there's still no continuation of the kidnapping arc.
From a kink perspective, those first few frames were the best part so far
From a kink perspective, those first few frames were the best part so far
- May 6, 2019
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Man.... this is some harsh shit. I think I am about 3 minutes in and already thinking I should just delete. English is... rough. It's like... they have the right words, but not always in the right order. And sometimes the words sound correct, but they are just a similar sounding word. And it sounds like the author learned what English they know from reading crime reports or watching crime shows. Very robotic.
Jennifer got into the shower
Jennifer cleaned
Jennifer left the shower
Also, author switches from "Jennifer" or "She" to "I" a lot.
Jennifer got undressed
I got into the shower
I'm looking for the "I" (make mc?) that just climbed into the shower with her and I see nobody. Confused, because I thought this was a FeMC game... then when nobody appears I realize dev just switched to "I".
Also,
MC "I was kidnapped, held at gunpoint!"
Neighbor "You should go to church and confess your sins"
I know it is sinful to be a girl that gets kidnapped, but c'mon... let the girl have a day or two to get over her very sinful kidnapping before she confesses to it.
Robbers are named "robber2" and "robber". They are called "perp" half of the time (this is from the MC's perspective, and she is not a cop, so why is she calling them perp before the cops even show up?). The female cop is called "Police". Sexy name. Makes me wanna tap that bish.
Cop drives her home, she asks him to come in because she needs something and he does. She goes straight to the shower, then comes out asking if he will stay the night.... Um... ok? Sure. He agrees.... Um.... ok? Sure. She wakes up to a fantasy dream of being raped then murdered and screams, so he comes to hold her then stay in the room with her. I see nothing weird about this story at all. Not like it was written by a 14 year old.
So I come here to post my bitching... and the first page of posts is pretty much telling me this is trash and I should delete it before I get to the first sex scene (or grope scene?). I mean... she was already raped in her dream in the first 3 minutes. I guess ive seen all of the important shit already.
Although to be fair, what did I expect with a title of "Jennifer Life" in the game. It should have been very clear before even finishing the download that this was not written by someone with a firm handle on the English language.
Jennifer got into the shower
Jennifer cleaned
Jennifer left the shower
Also, author switches from "Jennifer" or "She" to "I" a lot.
Jennifer got undressed
I got into the shower
I'm looking for the "I" (make mc?) that just climbed into the shower with her and I see nobody. Confused, because I thought this was a FeMC game... then when nobody appears I realize dev just switched to "I".
Also,
MC "I was kidnapped, held at gunpoint!"
Neighbor "You should go to church and confess your sins"
I know it is sinful to be a girl that gets kidnapped, but c'mon... let the girl have a day or two to get over her very sinful kidnapping before she confesses to it.
Robbers are named "robber2" and "robber". They are called "perp" half of the time (this is from the MC's perspective, and she is not a cop, so why is she calling them perp before the cops even show up?). The female cop is called "Police". Sexy name. Makes me wanna tap that bish.
Cop drives her home, she asks him to come in because she needs something and he does. She goes straight to the shower, then comes out asking if he will stay the night.... Um... ok? Sure. He agrees.... Um.... ok? Sure. She wakes up to a fantasy dream of being raped then murdered and screams, so he comes to hold her then stay in the room with her. I see nothing weird about this story at all. Not like it was written by a 14 year old.
So I come here to post my bitching... and the first page of posts is pretty much telling me this is trash and I should delete it before I get to the first sex scene (or grope scene?). I mean... she was already raped in her dream in the first 3 minutes. I guess ive seen all of the important shit already.
Although to be fair, what did I expect with a title of "Jennifer Life" in the game. It should have been very clear before even finishing the download that this was not written by someone with a firm handle on the English language.
- Nov 7, 2017
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