Ren'Py Lara's Anal Adventure [v0.1] [Donnarian]

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FookU2

FookU2

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Some constructive feedback would be to just not use AI. At least in my eyes, it ruins a game or VN. I usually hit the ignore button on these and move on, but it's Lara, and I figured I would at least check the thread to see. But, no...that is not Lara. The AI failed.
Personally, I would rather see basic, commonly used renders from somewhere else than to see AI destroy the image of a character that could otherwise be good.
My 2 cents...take it with a grain of salt, I guess.
 
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CutieLvr

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Donnarian, what an excellent start. Lara is such a hottie and a slut and a cutie. Everything I love. I would marry her in a heartbeat. Would love to see a stats counter on her, her sex acts, corruption decline, and money earned if she becomes a prostitute. But, my big, big question is: Are there plans to include animation? I certainly hope so. Good luck with your game. Looking forward to the next version. Glad that you made the hard tags optional, a lot of these yo-yo's can't handle a little "step out of your comfort zone and have a little fun", fun. I hope you are strong enough to handle the flak, because I can see the shots are already incoming.
 
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donnarian

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anminter17 said:
This game shouldn't need to be a flop, an anal focused game with Lara as mc? That's a banger by definition. Sure, AI images could be refined a bit but for a first try i say that those aren't really too bad and honestly i think that except some really obvious errors that other users have already posted here those are sufficient for now, focus on new content while you gain more knowledge and then come back and "remaster" this first release(s) once you have got better. Even in the actual state those are still good enough to interest people.

What i still think that's not good for making people interested are half of the preview images. They are really too extreme for the average audience and since you really tought about them making bestiality and scat off by default it's quite hard to understand why those are still there. Most people will just close instantly the page once they see them. Imho you should just remove them and just underline in the description that the game has quite a lot of scat content for people who are into the genre but is turned off by default. Maybe (but you should check if this is allowed by the site rules) you can host some of the scat previews elsewhere and link those images in the game description under a spoiler tag, that would work too, just avoid to post these along the "less extreme" ones because those are also used to generate the game preview in the last updates page and when you have such a specific fetish in your game it will easily scare off potential playes/supporters even before they enter in this thread to read about the game.

That said i won't press on the matter anymore, as i stated before those are just my two cents about the matter but the game is yours and you should act as you think is better. I dared to make another post following your polite reply but i don't want to act or seem too pushy. I just want to see more Lara games being succesful projects and i hope yours will be too, that's all.
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Hi, thank you. I'm always happy to read polite and factual feedback
 
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swiver

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anminter17 said:
- If this game is an heavy scat focused game makes really no sense to put this as an avoidable fetish in tags. Maybe i can avoid it but how much content will be left in the game? - If this game is an heavy anal focused game with optional scat content (as tags suggest) is absolutely crazy to put these screenshots in the first page, they will just scare off people that aren't into scat content.
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It's one idea, but another is that's he's going for a variety of stuff and happens to cater to scat-enthusiasts. Even should it be a an extremist-niche-VN it doesn't have to be served all or none. There's watersports, enema, extreme anal, beastiality, all of which are generally extreme, underserved but by no means necessarily for the same audience...

dev donno know if your invitation for advice is open and you're willing/free to put the time in (hope so as I like the general direction), but the dev's of several AI-art-based games are rather open about their process and seem to have been helpful to newcomers both publicly and privately.

I tag them but I don't want to presume... the VNs you likely well know, Shadows of Ambition, My New Girlfriend, Mila AI,... Addont discusses training his lora most while the others have mentioned the post AI photo-editing more often.

I know you're playing deathmetal while their songs barely gotta a growl but still...

btw, i still haven''t had a chance to play thru, but i'm wondering if there's any level of non-consensual?
 
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I for the most part love the AI Generated images, (I mean sure some of them are off, but hey! Were not all amazing artist's, but we have Idea's.
AI art give many who are willing to work at it a chance to do a game the way they like it.)

I think that is great. I know just how hard it is to try and make something that everyone likes.

Thank you so much for all your hard work, and diligent research that allows you to do this.
 
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Letestdu44

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An exception has occurred ^^

While running game code:
File "game/script_stable_of_pleasure.rpy", line 37, in script
show expression f"inv_{discovered_item.name}_big" at truecenter with dissolve
File "game/script_stable_of_pleasure.rpy", line 37, in <module>
show expression f"inv_{discovered_item.name}_big" at truecenter with dissolve
AttributeError: 'NoneType' object has no attribute 'name'
 
donnarian

donnarian

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Letestdu44 said:
An exception has occurred ^^

While running game code:
File "game/script_stable_of_pleasure.rpy", line 37, in script
show expression f"inv_{discovered_item.name}_big" at truecenter with dissolve
File "game/script_stable_of_pleasure.rpy", line 37, in <module>
show expression f"inv_{discovered_item.name}_big" at truecenter with dissolve
AttributeError: 'NoneType' object has no attribute 'name'
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Thanks for the heads-up. I've updated the version to 0.1a, known bugs are fixed here.
 
Bohauo

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hello.
So i got the 5 locations unlocked, dose the content end there or am i missing something?
it say i need to visit all location before i can "explore the surroundings" but i have visited all places i think...

I missed the "ocean" location...
Sorry mybad!
 
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