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This could have been interesting, but all of the content is forced, and all with characters I have no interest in.
- Aug 11, 2023
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What the hell is this? Fetish RNG?
Can you or can you not become a martial arts GOD in this game?! CROUCHING TIGER DRAGON PALM STRIKE!
But on a serious note, will there be anything like stats building in this because it just kind of feels like it'd go with the theme. I've also been reading too many things like that lately and that's the first thing that comes to mind.
But on a serious note, will there be anything like stats building in this because it just kind of feels like it'd go with the theme. I've also been reading too many things like that lately and that's the first thing that comes to mind.
- Jan 22, 2020
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I enjoyed this, it was well written. Interesting setup, I like that there's more to it than the dude just going back to have a more successful love-life. Lily is my favourite, Dina probably second. Layla and Wendy are alright too (the latter maybe just for faux-incest points).
Font is too small and I don't like that different characters use different fonts when speaking. This also causes problems when using the accessibility settings to change all the fonts to the same, more easily readable, one as the default ones are naturally different sizes so have been coded in to be bigger or smaller to compensate - which then creates disparity if they're switched to all the same font.
Font is too small and I don't like that different characters use different fonts when speaking. This also causes problems when using the accessibility settings to change all the fonts to the same, more easily readable, one as the default ones are naturally different sizes so have been coded in to be bigger or smaller to compensate - which then creates disparity if they're switched to all the same font.
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- Oct 1, 2019
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Word of advice, at least give us the climax from the sexy time scene before saying the To Be Continued. 
But seriously, was short, but still very interesting first part of the first chapter. And other than being cut short at the end, did enjoy this. Thank you so very much for this!!!
But seriously, was short, but still very interesting first part of the first chapter. And other than being cut short at the end, did enjoy this. Thank you so very much for this!!!Good game. Just keep the interface simple... speech bubbles are for comics
- May 6, 2017
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The art is good, the girls are great and the story is pretty well-written with the right amount of suspense so far. I couldn't put it better myself. I don't mind the different characters using different fonts thing (got used to it after 10-15 minutes) but some fonts are way too small. That's what's making it look bad.
As for the girls, Lily > older Wendy > Flora > everyone else so far.
- Feb 20, 2021
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Yes, you made a game in 3 languages, and not everyone shares the story lingo with mats, and not everyone will like it, and I look at the whole game and come to the idea that this game was made by a 17-18 year old teenager who can only communicate with mats and making such a game I even as something offended for the game
- Nov 1, 2020
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Hmm, when I played in Russian it was fine and had a normal amount of swear words and mats .... Maybe the developer just doesn't know a lot of swear words or mats in English.
- Oct 31, 2019
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Made one font for all characters, different fonts will now only be on names. It will probably stay that way in future updates. It's hard to adjust the font size in renpy, as on my computer everything looks great with this size, but on another it might be different.
Here's the patch:
Here's the patch:
- Apr 28, 2020
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Played this for the first time yesterday and I really enjoyed it. I saw the teaser image of grace and was drawn in. The story is interesting the ladies are lovely and I can't wait for more. I really hope this is not a coma, dream or something along those lines in the end. I really want to see the MC right a wrong for sure, and have some fun along the way.
Good luck in the project I will be waiting for more.
Good luck in the project I will be waiting for more.
- Jun 1, 2022
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Decent start I am liking the story and the characters quite a lot it has potential my only criticism are two things
1 This game definitely needs someone to check and improve the writing I know the devs first language isn't English and that's fine but at least have someone check so sentences and words make sense like the part where the teacher talks about books drowning was weird as hell until I noticed she meant to say they got soaked and wet.
2 I don't really like the comedy bits in serious main story scenes, I thought it was weird and made no sense the scene if you pick the option to talk to the drug addicts where the MC sits them down like its some sort of rehab event and does the comedy bit and suddenly they are reformed after that scene I thought the game was going to say that the MC imagined it all in his head or something, but no the story just continues like that actually just happen thought it sort of breaks the immersion and takes away from the seriousness of the whole thing while on the other hand I enjoyed the comedy bits that where done outside of the serious main story moments when its just MC bantering with his friends.
I personally think its just a matter of timing and knowing when its the right moment to include the comedy bits and when it fits in the game.
Other than that I am keeping my eye out for this one I love time travel stories and redoing your life sort of redemption stories so I'm looking forward for more of this one since I do believe it has potential and a lot of room for improvement.
1 This game definitely needs someone to check and improve the writing I know the devs first language isn't English and that's fine but at least have someone check so sentences and words make sense like the part where the teacher talks about books drowning was weird as hell until I noticed she meant to say they got soaked and wet.
2 I don't really like the comedy bits in serious main story scenes, I thought it was weird and made no sense the scene if you pick the option to talk to the drug addicts where the MC sits them down like its some sort of rehab event and does the comedy bit and suddenly they are reformed after that scene I thought the game was going to say that the MC imagined it all in his head or something, but no the story just continues like that actually just happen thought it sort of breaks the immersion and takes away from the seriousness of the whole thing while on the other hand I enjoyed the comedy bits that where done outside of the serious main story moments when its just MC bantering with his friends.
I personally think its just a matter of timing and knowing when its the right moment to include the comedy bits and when it fits in the game.
Other than that I am keeping my eye out for this one I love time travel stories and redoing your life sort of redemption stories so I'm looking forward for more of this one since I do believe it has potential and a lot of room for improvement.
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what the heck are mats? is that a new slang term i am out of the loop on?
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