VN Ren'Py Abandoned Locked Away [Ep. 3p2] [Bitter Strawman]

[Canto Forte]

Or you can dress one as centurion with some obvious signs on the skirt and one as cleopatra.
Have players choose ... "do you want her to dominate you => centurion" or ...
"do you want her to cuddle you => Antonio .. Fa Fredo!"

 

[Bitter Strawman]

Or you can dress one as centurion with some obvious signs on the skirt and one as cleopatra.
Have players choose ... "do you want her to dominate you => centurion" or ...
"do you want her to cuddle you => Antonio .. Fa Fredo!"

You are Tinto Brass fan, aren't you?

 

[omega_rugal]

thank you for the response -_-

 

[Bitter Strawman]

thank you for the response -_-

I'm sorry, I didn't get it. If I understood your question - there is only small scene on reception where you can see Vicky in heels. Other scenes don't show her feet at all.

 

[omega_rugal]

-_-

 

[anne O'nymous]

I searched in the thread and found nothing... Can I really be the only one who, since he's leaded by G-Man, want to rename the MC into Gordon Freeman ?

Hell, he even still have this habit to readjust his tie before talking.

 

[Bitter Strawman]

I searched in the thread and found nothing... Can I really be the only one who, since he's leaded by G-Man, want to rename the MC into Gordon Freeman ?

Hell, he even still have this habit to readjust his tie before talking.

He has too many dialogue lines for that.

 

[XJ347]

Opinions are opinions... Others will disagree with me and that's ok.

• Player named character. Normally makes for a generic game.
• Faceless main character. Once again generic.
• Player has amnesia... This once again goes to a generic game because there is no background to role play from. It's assumed you are role playing yourself. Some will like that, but I do not.
• Plot is interesting. It's pretty unique for a porn game. I like it.
• Writing on the other hand is average. Has a few errors, and dialogue feels slightly unnatural. "He was bypassing" Should be -> "He was passing by"
• Images are above average, but nothing special.
• Different body shapes, and even ethnicity. I appreciate this!
• Character models are hit and miss IMO. Kazumi's hair just looks wrong to me. Like they tried to make her look Asian but it just looks slightly off, as an example.
• Fluid animations. This is actually impressive. They are above average, but not amazing.

This is pretty good. The missing punctuation can be fix with time. The story is interesting, I want to know more.
4/5

 

[Bitter Strawman]

Opinions are opinions... Others will disagree with me and that's ok.

• Player named character. Normally makes for a generic game.
• Faceless main character. Once again generic.
• Player has amnesia... This once again goes to a generic game because there is no background to role play from. It's assumed you are role playing yourself. Some will like that, but I do not.
• Plot is interesting. It's pretty unique for a porn game. I like it.
• Writing on the other hand is average. Has a few errors, and dialogue feels slightly unnatural. "He was bypassing" Should be -> "He was passing by"
• Images are above average, but nothing special.
• Different body shapes, and even ethnicity. I appreciate this!
• Character models are hit and miss IMO. Kazumi's hair just looks wrong to me. Like they tried to make her look Asian but it just looks slightly off, as an example.
• Fluid animations. This is actually impressive. They are above average, but not amazing.

This is pretty good. The missing punctuation can be fix with time. The story is interesting, I want to know more.
4/5

Every opinion counts.

 

[Peter Dragon]

All In all I think it is a good game so far. Yes there are some grammar errors. That is to be expected. I really like the story so far. Found minor flaws in the artworks. Some line where should not of been, and such. But the renders are very good. All in all I think you are doing very well!!! Keep up the good work!

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Interesting story and many diferent paths and endings.
No stats the walkthrough is helpful but not very like who is the snitch part.
I believe is the one who is snitching on others while being interrogated...Get it? Got it?....Good.
When is the next version?

 

[Bitter Strawman]

When is the next version?

I plan till the end of this month.

 

[Luncor]

I will watch this game. it has too much potential. Keep it up

 

[GreyJim]

I searched in the thread and found nothing... Can I really be the only one who, since he's leaded by G-Man, want to rename the MC into Gordon Freeman ?

Haha... I did exactly that - went back to the beginning and renamed my character.
It was too good to pass up!

 

[UncleVT]

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I should have given her darker eyes.

 

[respectmyautorithy]

Is there really a futa trans character here? Great game btw

 

[Bitter Strawman]

Is there really a futa trans character here? Great game btw

Yes.

 

[timepants]

Is there really a futa trans character here? Great game btw

She's pretty hot too.

 

[UncleVT]

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The best thing in short updates - you can post render peeks more often.

 

[UncleVT]

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Short summary

• episode 3 will be released in 2 parts. 1 part is planned for early October and 1 for late October
• planned amount of images - 200-250 per part, 400-500 for whole episode
• 1 lewd scene in part 1 and 1 in part 2
• so far rendered - 70 + 16 frames for ep1 intro rerendered and rewritten for more reasonable MC motivation
  
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