VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Trip to Your Mom's [v0.6.0 Ep. 6] [DasMaster]

[Abhai]

The "Long Route 69"?

Good enough demo.

Could be a pretty good game, if developer remains focused on a few main routes, instead of wandering too much/too often into wastelands of patreons demands/fetishes...

 

[Mormont]

That's quite an informative first review

 

[taru]

how hardcore is the female domination?

 

[JohnJG]

Road Trips are fun and absolutely about the ‘Journey’ but there has to be a worthwhile payoff at the end.

Fingers crossed the story builds well and with good anticipation. It’s certainly got the right amount of potential for the Developer.

 

[DarthMelkor]

*sigh*

I am thankful for the people working on erotic games but come on, show a bit of originality. There must be 100 other games with similar story and theme. At least pretend to do something different. Please.

 

[Mitta073]

Mac version doesnt work. The game starts but you cannot do anything from the main screen.

Same problem here... any solutions?

 

[oidex]

I haven't had a laugh like that in a long time.
That is some god tier english right there.
Thank you for that, dev.

 

[fuckyouassholes]

will the MC be able to get close ... to his 'sister' ?

if you know what i mean ?

 

[bigmonster]

Looks good but I'll wait a few more updates before trying. I usually get hyped then disappoint myself from expecting too much.

 

[wawawawawawawawawa]

Mac version doesnt work. The game starts but you cannot do anything from the main screen.

Same here

 

[LionHeart131]

This is for the MAC version::: I don't know if this happened to any one else, but when I was in the scene with Mia about to have some fun the screen randomly shifted so that I only saw the top right third of what was happening in the scene. I could still read the text and click everything, but the images weren't showing in full.

 

[Jack-ish]

For some reason I'm getting the impression that it won't live up to expectations.

 

[Bolero]

*sigh*

I am thankful for the people working on erotic games but come on, show a bit of originality. There must be 100 other games with similar story and theme. At least pretend to do something different. Please.

True, but so many games have been released in the last 5 or so years that it is not easy to make something that has not been done yet.

 

[batman666]

Awesome renders. Really fun, entertaining. All the girls so far are somewhat hot, there's no NTR in sight and no boring grinding. The Engrish is rather bad but funny. I'll keep an eye on this.

 

[Trasher2018]

Ok first - the engine sucks ^^
No text speed setting, no dynamic window.

The english needs some serious work. You understand it - most of the time, but it is not fun to read.


There's a big problem with the personal pronouns in the game - the MC refers with "we" to himself, females often with "he". Or what means the expression "Places in bulk, what the hell?" ... I have really no idea :/

Seems to be a common problem for Russian > English translations (i think that untranslated word was Russian ^^)

The girls look nice and the idea with the roadtrip is quite unique and offers a lot of potential.

 

[pthug76]

*sigh*

I am thankful for the people working on erotic games but come on, show a bit of originality. There must be 100 other games with similar story and theme. At least pretend to do something different. Please.

Supply and demand my friend! Basic economics. The incest genre makes a lot of money if you haven't noticed.

 

[pthug76]

Sadly, brother "refused to go," so we are back in a ditch.

Chekhov's gun my dude. If the dev didn't mean to use the brother later on, he probably wouldn't bother mentioning his existence in the first place.

 

[SurprisedMoth]

Ok first - the engine sucks ^^
No text speed setting, no dynamic window.

The english needs some serious work. You understand it - most of the time, but it is not fun to read.
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There's a big problem with the personal pronouns in the game - the MC refers with "we" to himself, females often with "he". Or what means the expression "Places in bulk, what the hell?" ... I have really no idea :/

Seems to be a common problem for Russian > English translations (i think that untranslated word was Russian ^^)

The girls look nice and the idea with the roadtrip is quite unique and offers a lot of potential.

Yep, untranslated word is Russian. Means good, fine, ok.

 

[JustLittleTinyMe]

The game really needs someone to read all the dialog and fix the gramma errors. Almost every sentence, has broken English, mostly awkward words that don't fit into the context and gramma mistakes. I'm assuming that most of it is done through a rough Google Translate.
Aside from that, seems nice and will be interesting to see the game grow. Just a hint, don't make choices that won't matter or make a difference. I don't want to spoil, but at the table, getting those choices are super cool, but then they don't even matter cause whatever you chose get's changed anyway, which is a letdown.
EDIT: My suggestion in this situation would be a choice to either let the choice be changed or to talk them into accepting your choice instead.

 

[emmasteadman]

An interesting start, plenty of choices, though not a fan of the being dominated thing, but it's avoidable.