I'm not far into this story, and I'll be happy to come back and uprade this rating later if warranted, but I had to stop for now and vent. Problem is, on a pure entertainment level, this is a 1 star game so far. I'm not sure how much further I'll make it.
Writing: It's so bad, my mind is glazed over, but I'll try to estimate what I've read so far: 60% mind-numbing inner monologues, 35% mind-numbing narration, 5% pretty decent dialogue.
Tags are so odd sometimes. The funniest game I ever played had no humor tag. This game does have a humor tag, and there's been absolutely nothing remotely funny about it so far. As I love to laugh, this has been disappointing.
Art: I quite like the UI. Also, the little sister is cute, and I like the look of the game in general. The problems: 1) She's literally the only onscreen character, 2) She's often not onscreen, 3) When she is onscreen, she tends to get only 1 or 2 renders per scene, 4) When nobody's onscreen, mochabyte often can't be bothered to even leave uninhabited scenery. Just blackness.
Other: Unusually good spelling, grammar, etc., and I haven't encountered any bugs so far. This is probably the best news about this game.