VN Ren'Py Midnight Terror [v1.3] [VisualNovels]

[abhishekadtiya2002@]

What are you doing? Are you trying to make money off someone else’s work?

Don't be a dick

 

[Brine_Basilisk]

I've been mostly enjoying this so far but jesus christ man some of the writing here...

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HUH!!!??

 

[tretch95]

I've been mostly enjoying this so far but jesus christ man some of the writing here...

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HUH!!!??

Well... the start of this VN was pretty good, but then it went downhill quickly into generic porn logic.

"Come here my son, let's fuck!" - end of current update, and probably short before VN ending (~10 mins of content?)



Also considering how trashy the two other games by this dev are, and that he's obviously just commissioning the artwork...

I guess this may one of those "even a blind squirrel finds a nut once in a while" type of things.

 

[Brine_Basilisk]

Well... the start of this VN was pretty good, but then it went downhill quickly into generic porn logic.

"Come here my son, let's fuck!" - end of current update, and probably short before VN ending (~10 mins of content?)



Also considering how trashy the two other games by this dev are, and that he's obviously just commissioning the artwork...

I guess this may one of those "even a blind squirrel finds a nut once in a while" type of things.

Yeah I agree, in general there are innumerable plot problems/misteps most noteably:

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I think some of this is fixable, but a lot of this seems to be too late. I really think the dev should slow down, focus on one project at a time and really polish it instead of rushing content out. Honestly I wouldn't hate the idea of him bring on a writer to assist since its clear his strengths are clearly in the visuals (which are fantastic, especially for my naturalistic tastes). This project has the potential to be phenonminal, but these structural problems really need to get ironed out for it to reach the next level.