Full disclosure: Despite the rating I actually think this VN is closer to 4 stars objectively speaking. But given how this is a dying genre it may as well be 5/5 and I do think it’s worth checking out even if it’s just for idle curiosity.
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ Presentation ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
People in the know refer to Mojika as an ‘Utsuge’ (depressing game), not to be confused with a ‘Nakige’ (which is also a depressing game except in a more sentimental, wholesome way) If I had to describe this story it would be something like a dark modern retelling of the ‘Ugly Duckling Story’. For the longest time I thought this VN would be untranslatable, it has a lot of text messages in single cgs, stylized graffiti, floating text separated from the usual dialogue box, etc. The VN is also uncensored albeit with a legal notice watermark in the corner (which you can remove with a patch).
A lot of effort was put in this on top of an already unique VN experience. Which I'll elaborate further down.
If the synopsis sounds mildly interesting to you I do highly recommend you check it out as blind as you can, however, do be wary that this is going to be a tough read depending on your sensibilities and tastes. Know that behind all the doom and gloom there is some light at the end of the tunnel.
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ Gameplay ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
On paper this plays like any other choice based VN with a common route and branching paths. The interesting part about this is how the game handles choices. Our MC is someone that is loathed by his peers for several reasons, he also has the dubious privilege of being able to read people’s minds by looking at their faces. Since he is heavily bullied and ostracized people think a lot of mean things when they see him so he ends up just staring at people’s shoes for a good chunk of the introductory section of the story, So the way you get to act upon anything is by looking up and reading people’s minds (this is not always the best choice as you’ll find out) In a way you navigate this game by putting yourself in the MCs place and figuring out when would be the best time to use your “powers” to your advantage.
My recommendation is to play along as far as you can and only look up a guide when you feel like the game is starting to spin its wheels. But if you pay attention, the path to the ‘True Route’ will be fairly obvious after playing through some of the routes.
★ ★ ★ ★ Sound ★ ★ ★ ★
The music is stellar (imo), but it does get very samey. I do enjoy this type of droning depressing music but I can see it being grating for some people after a while.
The sound effects are well executed and are a highlight, if I had one complaint here it would be that the voice acting performances can get way over the top and for me they started landing on comedy territory at times.
★ ★ ★ Writing ★ ★ ★
This sadly is the weakest part of the whole thing, not that it’s bad mind you (I genuinely think this VN is a solid 8/10), it has a lot of genuinely tense, gut wrenching, cathartic moments. And it’s interesting and fresh but then the story starts meandering on the same topics or the MC would start acting retarded, missing the big picture leading to unsatisfying outcomes. And then there’s some padding on plot points that seemingly go nowhere.
I would describe the writing as messy but it’s more like the story has these beads of intriguing/entertaining moments, connected by a long string of bland perfunctory babble. Still, I quite enjoyed it and reading the ‘True End’ was satisfying enough for me. Your mileage may vary depending on how you approach the story as you may get more or less out of it.
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ Visuals ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
The main artist is Hamashima Shigeo, if you are familiar with his works you would know that he is often associated with off the grid extreme eroge content (Guro, scat, etc.). Most of the art here is surprisingly normal tho, with a few exceptions. If someone told me this VN looked ugly I would agree, the colors look washed out and some of the girls have this plain Jane look to them which makes them appear “normal” but I think this is to the benefit of the whole package and adds to the overall experience, so when something beautiful pops out it’s really eye catching and it works the same way when the truly grotesque rears its head.
★ ★ ★ ★ Porn ★ ★ ★ ★
There’s a lot of porn, and it comes early, the porn doesn’t work if you only ctrl-skip and/or unlock the gallery. Context is very important here for setting up the mood and circumstances that led to every scene in the first place. It has a lot of things that you can’t find anywhere else (mind reading while sexing as a quick example), and to get the most out of it you’ll have to be a seasoned porn game enjoyer (That enjoys reading). In a way there’s something for everybody, For me? I enjoyed it because I like revenge hate fucking as a porn setting but I wasn’t too enthused when the MC did something mean to a girl that didn’t deserve it (as much). If you are more sadistic than me then you’ll have a blast with this for sure but do be mindful that it goes both ways sometimes
And if you are asking “Is there NTR in this?” The answer is, not really. But if NTR makes you shit your diaper you're better off skipping this regardless, in a way it goes further than that since bad, cruel things happen to most of the girls (and the MC for that matter), this is not for the soft hearted by any means. There’s just one scene with mild guro and there’s no scat.
-Final thoughts-
I wish more VNs like this were made nowadays, we are living in the twilight of a dying genre with low effort moeslop and ntrslop getting shit out every other day. If you enjoyed this VN you can get it cheap from Jast’s store. My main goal with this review was in part to bring attention to this in the hopes that we keep getting interesting visual novels in the future.