VN Ren'Py Monkey [Demo] [Wooden Donkeys]

[Fantabulous]

I like the game so far. The writing is very good, the characters are believable and they also look natural, not the typical bimbos we see so often in AVNs. The story itself is interesting, the kids are as cute as they get and there are nice touches to find, even if the background story promises to be harsh. I'd say keep things this way.

A minor niggle: the executables for the Linux version are missing the executable flag, so they don't work out of the box.

 

[Vollezar]

What does the "monkey" refer to? The MC? Or the fact that he hasn't spanked his monkey in 15 years due to the depression of losing his family?

There is a clue in one of the scenes in the begining of the game. Before we go to the "present time".

 

[Vollezar]

I like the game so far. The writing is very good, the characters are believable and they also look natural, not the typical bimbos we see so often in AVNs. The story itself is interesting, the kids are as cute as they get and there are nice touches to find, even if the background story promises to be harsh. I'd say keep things this way.

A minor niggle: the executables for the Linux version are missing the executable flag, so they don't work out of the box.

Thanks for encouragement and pointing out a bug.

 

[Hollibolli]

Just a question, is this like the revenge for all killed off dad's in other VN's? I mean he lost his wife and kids in an accident? Damn this is brutal.
Good luck with your project.

 

[Canto Forte]

A retired "Negotiator" for a shadowy company.

But it's not a company one simply leaves. Especially when you are so good at what you do.

After the wild insuccess of Robbie Williams Moneky business movie parody ... we are left wondering, whst is next...

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[Hollibolli]

Well, i like what i see so far. Let's see where this is going.

 

[CamaroFan432]

I did play it. And the story so far is good. But maybe put that warning, that this won't be a harem game, not halfway through the demo, but at the beginning, so people are aware, that this is more like a "choose your LI" type of game. And maybe put it also in the dev notes for those folks, that are willing and able to read them. May keep you save from a bunch of headaches.

 

[Vollezar]

Just a question, is this like the revenge for all killed off dad's in other VN's? I mean he lost his wife and kids in an accident? Damn this is brutal.
Good luck with your project.

Never thought of it that way. I like it. I should have had added a high school aged son, who dies of the "blue ball syndrome" due to his father fucking all the high school cheerleaders in front of him, while telling the girls his son's dick hasn't gotten past the infant stage.

 

[NunyaBiz123]

I'm assuming that the reason you're calling it Monkey is because the company won't let him leave. And therefore, "dance monkey dance" line people say when you do things you don't want to do but don't have a choice and must for whatever reasons?

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

THX -

 

[Vollezar]

I'm assuming that the reason you're calling it Monkey is because the company won't let him leave. And therefore, "dance monkey dance" line people say when you do things you don't want to do but don't have a choice and must for whatever reasons?

Nope.
But that was pretty insightful.

 

[Canto Forte]

Monkey is what MC called his little daughter when he decided killing a bunch of nobodies and quitting his job was more important than having a family. Kill count: Death: family of MC to balance the scales. MC: Two absolute randos, but he had to piss Death off with them and get his own flesh and blood to be the price. Karma is a bitch in all parodies.

I'm assuming that the reason you're calling it Monkey is because the company won't let him leave. And therefore, "dance monkey dance" line people say when you do things you don't want to do but don't have a choice and must for whatever reasons?

But maybe put that warning, that this won't be a harem game, not halfway through the demo, but at the beginning, so people are aware, that this is more like a "choose your LI" type of game. And maybe put it also in the dev notes for those folks, that are willing and able to read them. May keep you save from a bunch of headaches.

Damn this is brutal.

 

[Vollezar]

Monkey is what MC called his little daughter when he decided killing a bunch of nobodies and quitting his job was more important than having a family: Kill count: Death: his family. MC: Two abslute randos, but he had to piss Death off with them and get his own flesh and blood be the price. Karma is a bitch in all perodies.

KIll count: (at least) 1, Before his family dies. That surely can't be a clue.

 

[Vollezar]

Posted this in our Discord. There will be more. This month I am going to be making some random 4Ks of these ladies for Patrons and I'll share some of them publicly. They aren't from the game, just some random ideas.

 

[shamtiiomi]

No.

so you make the most crazy beautiful redhead ...his dead wife? how i can play this kno0wing i will never have that dish...game looks good dev ..

 

[Vollezar]

so you make the most crazy beautiful redhead ...his dead wife? how i can play this kno0wing i will never have that dish...game looks good dev ..

She is an LI, not his dead wife.

 

[CurtimusPrime92]

will full development only start after One Lie is finished, or do you plan on splitting your time and effort between the two games?

 

[Vollezar]

will full development only start after One Lie is finished, or do you plan on splitting your time and effort between the two games?

Short answer, in parallel.

Long winded answer:

For now big concentration is on finishing One Lie. There are only two endings left to do.
I was working in parallel on both games, until about December, but I stopped working on this game because of the lack of funds.
I have started work on it again ( I just can't seem to let this one go). Right now I am rewritting some scenes in the Prologue and adding a bit more content to it. I am doing that while my PC is rendering for One Lie.
There will not be a whole lot of renders needed to do to finish the prologue. The scenes that are excluded from the demo are fairly short, and the extras I am adding are also small. I am hoping to do the scene setups and rendering on the days that I am not working on One Lie. So, hopefully, 2-4 months to finish it. The other issue is trying to find the money to pay someone to code it.

 

[Beerus]

Never thought of it that way. I like it. I should have had added a high school aged son, who dies of the "blue ball syndrome" due to his father fucking all the high school cheerleaders in front of him, while telling the girls his son's dick hasn't gotten past the infant stage.

Fresh 18 year old son, but due to the events of with the rest of the family, the dad sends the son across the country to live with a relative and is never heard from again

 

[xmilteach]

thx