What is your favorite character so far?

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  • Sierra

  • Shego

  • Momo

  • Giulia

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Okay, this is just how I interpret this, but she says the BECAUSE she wants to broach the open relationship thing. She is saying that she DOESN'T want to lie, so she is bringing it up like this. She's just understanding she's going to want sex, he's going to want to have sex, and rather than lie about whats GOING to happen, she wants it all on the table. This isn't really a "doesn't make sense" line.

I'll try to say it again simpler: She's accepted she and him are going to want sex and get it. So she doesn't want to ever lie about it. So she's broaching the subject while prefacing it with she doesn't want to lie in the future.

edit: Just so you know, I've had this sort of talk in the past. The alternative to opening the relationship if the player wouldn't agree is to just break up. She doesn't want that, so hence this talk
So just to clarify I have no issue with the open relationship and I don't actually think she's going to cheat all I'm saying is to have that line before they actually agree to the open relationship is odd , yes she is saying that she doesn't want to lie and I get that the part I'm getting at is that she explicitly says while I'm sleeping with other men so at this stage she has said she's going to sleep with other men , not that it might happen or could happen she out and out says it will happen which I why I suggested to either move the line itself to after they agree to the open relationship or adjust the wording off

It's not to adjust or change the story at all it's just an odd way/time to say it before they actually agree to open the relationship
 
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ok, i'm getting frustrated. Ive downloaded this from every single source now and replayed it. My game continues to end right after the first sexting conversation with Anna at the end of Day 1. I have never played this before so there is no previous save for me to have loaded. i was starting to think that was the end of content...despite it saying it's the end of 0.1. But now someone mentioned NTS dreams, and no one has even slept in my game. WTF is wrong with my game? :mad:
Is it the sexting session where she's in Italy if so that's where mine ended
 

Sorreah

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So just to clarify I have no issue with the open relationship and I don't actually think she's going to cheat all I'm saying is to have that line before they actually agree to the open relationship is odd , yes she is saying that she doesn't want to lie and I get that the part I'm getting at is that she explicitly says while I'm sleeping with other men so at this stage she has said she's going to sleep with other men , not that it might happen or could happen she out and out says it will happen which I why I suggested to either move the line itself to after they agree to the open relationship or adjust the wording off

It's not to adjust or change the story at all it's just an odd way/time to say it before they actually agree to open the relationship
I mean...I tried to explain it, but that was my point; It's not weird because she KNOWS its going to happen, they are going to have sex in the future. You do seem to understand I also was saying its not might or could, it WILL happen, so she's broaching the subject now about how she doesn't want to lie.

I thought I was being clear on that, but I guess not? I think its worded just fine as it is though. She knows she's going to have sex and just flat out having that discussion now. Like I said, she doesn't want to lie, and if the MC has a problem with her sleeping around, it probably means the end of the relationship. So this is how it leads into an open relationship instead.

edit: maybe my POV is skewed because I've been in several long distance relationships. The way shes talking about it and communicating makes perfect sense to me. The only thing I guess I'd say that is wonky is that she clearly knows the best way to approach this kind of change in the relationship as opposed to someone who has never done it before, which is odd.
 
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FatYoda

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I mean...I tried to explain it, but that was my point; It's not weird because she KNOWS its going to happen, they are going to have sex in the future. You do seem to understand I also was saying its not might or could, it WILL happen, so she's broaching the subject now about how she doesn't want to lie.

I thought I was being clear on that, but I guess not? I think its worded just fine as it is though. She knows she's going to have sex and just flat out having that discussion now. Like I said, she doesn't want to lie, and if the MC has a problem with her sleeping around, it probably means the end of the relationship. So this is how it leads into an open relationship instead.

edit: maybe my POV is skewed because I've been in several long distance relationships. The way shes talking about it and communicating makes perfect sense to me. The only thing I guess I'd say that is wonky is that she clearly knows the best way to approach this kind of change in the relationship as opposed to someone who has never done it before, which is odd.
the dev has already stated that that was not the intended meaning.
 
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FatYoda

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Post #231 says "When Alex and Anna have that conversation, Anna is not telling Alex that she will definitely cheat on him, but she is afraid that if she ever did something like that, it would ruin the relationship she cherishes with Alex. Her goal is not to force Alex by blackmailing him with the threat "I (Anna) will sleep with many men anyway," but rather to reason together about how to make the most of their long-distance relationship, which cannot foresee any physical interactions in any way." SO it does appear he needs to change the wording to "if" rather than "while".

She isn't intended to be saying she would sleep around no matter what...or that he would, she's supposed to be saying she doesn't want it to destroy them if it does.

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Fitharia

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ok, I didn't see it that way before you pointed it out, but i guess yeah it could be taken like that.

Edit: So i went back to the scene and re-read the whole conversation rather than one line without context and I still don't feel like that's what is meant. But if Dev wanted to fix it all they would have to do is change the word "while" to "if".
I don't think it matter that much, it normal that people in a long distance relation might end up with others, but in her case she want their relation stay strong, so she is just honest with him that the possibility is large she end up having fun with other guys to satisfy her needs and want he can too, without they have to be cheating, so saying while or if doesn't make a big difference, "while" only tells it 100% sure she will and "if" is more off like 50% chance she will.
 
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FatYoda

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Didn't know, so okay; I guess I interpreted it wrong so I'll just have to wait until he corrects the line I guess.
I remember when i read it i thought the same thing...but then i read the next few lines and figured i was misinterpreting it.
 

Omega Games

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It's PC, and I never played before so no loaded save. The file i launch from says 0.21
Edit: oh, and i DL'd from the gofile link.
Edit2: also, adn this may not be relevant. But I chose not to view Luna Trap content and at no point did it seem like i had been seen, but when i get back from the mall She comes in and acts like we saw each other.
Edit 3: I was gonna shut it down for the "night" here anyway cause it's 5am. I'll check back and hope for a solution tomorrow.
Sorry, Man! I haven’t updated the text of that string. Actually, if you’ve seen the image suggesting you check out my Patreon, you’ve reached the end of the content for this version.
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Very good second update, ofcourse you still have to fix alot typos, but least the sentences are decent. But if you adress to a women, you use she, her. If you adress to men you use he, him and not the reversed. I dig Anna in first place, but since she is gone and going have her own fun too, the girls I love most so far is tsundere Molly and slutty hot pink Sierra, so going have fun with those 2 hotties playing with the mc's pole.
Thank you so much for the compliment! It’s been a very busy period at work, and unfortunately, I’ve had very little time to proofread everything. But starting Monday, I’ll find someone to help me catch typos before the official releases. The he/she - him/him issues are due to the translations from Italian to English. I tried to correct many of them this afternoon, but I still need to do a full revision.
Thanks again for the feedback! I can give you a little teaser:
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cormac69

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I think the translator you're using is saying little one' instead of baby. A girl calling her boyfriend 'little one' is very odd term of endearment for a man and off putting, especially since he's quite large and muscular. Getting a proofreader would be great idea. The story is quite good and I love the art. Peace. Edit * Oh, I also see where there's many times where Him is used as a pronoun when it should be Her. Getting Him and Her mixed up is also annoying. ;)
 
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Omega Games

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Hi :) what program use for create this AI image?
I'm using a Stable Diffusion (ComfyUI) with a great mix of Checkpoints and Loras :)

This game looks pretty good and seems to have great potential.
We need a possibility to reduce opacity of the text box (removing black screen) in the preferences.
Is there any plan to have animated content in the future or will it be mostly fix images ?
Thanks for the feedback! :) I’ve noted your suggestion and will do my best to add an alternative box in future updates. I plan to create animations, but at the moment, I don’t have any time to work on them. So they might be included in the next update, or they might not, but they will definitely come in the future!

Any plans for NTR?
There will be a NTR Route in the future, i just need more time to build the story before doing that path :3

ok, I didn't see it that way before you pointed it out, but i guess yeah it could be taken like that.
Edit: So i went back to the scene and re-read the whole conversation rather than one line without context and I still don't feel like that's what is meant. But if Dev wanted to fix it all they would have to do is change the word "while" to "if".
You are 100% Right. In my native language the string was correct but in english an "IF" is better than a "WHILE", so i will correct that. Thanks again for the feedback :)

Well, bit of a bare update, to be honest, considering pretty much all of the action was in dreams, but I guess it is just the second update and it's still setting things up. I also hope the game'll put more focus on the girlfriend, because I think (hope?) that that's the main idea here, and it's already quite heavily skewed towards MC and him doing things with a number of girls.
Also, I don't know how realistic this is to implement (i.e. especially how to make it make sense), but I think the Lust requirements for dialogue should be a...little bit more lax. Currently, it is very easy to go through the game with all the Lust options being greyed out, because you didn't pick the specific choices on all of the 4 different screens that need to be picked to have enough Lust (and I did a decent bit of loading and skipping forward to unlock them). Like, if you could hit 3 out of the 4 (especially when the 3 are much more obvious in their intent of the MC lusting after something, while the 4th may be a bit nebulous) and still unlock it, then that would probably feel a bit better. Just food for thought.
In general, still like the art and the story being set up. Hopefully it gets going a bit sooner rather than later!
This update was challenging to set up: I wanted to give more depth to the characters that will populate the game. In the previous version, Anna and Sierra took up a lot of space, so this time, it was the other girls’ turn!
Anna’s absence was intentional—I wanted the player to feel like Alex: lost and somewhat dissatisfied with the situation (even though he’s surrounded by beautiful girls). The emotional tension builds up through a sexting session and the anticipation of seeing each other again, but with the awareness that Anna is meeting new people, just like Alex is. It will be up to the player to decide which path to take!
As for the point system, I’m considering being a bit less strict in the next updates, but I still want to make some scenes harder to unlock than others. I grew up on Dark Souls—without a bit of challenge, the game wouldn’t be as engaging!
 

FatYoda

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My apologies Omega, I'm playing "the keymaster" right now and that was obviously supposed to go there. downside of having multiple tabs and conversations going i guess.
 
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