VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Anya's POV] [CircleGames]

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Dmitr said:
We talked about the fact that such a long wait is not justified, now I want to express my opinion about the plot and the narrative, if in chapter 4 for Vi there were too many changes, she too quickly switched to the lustful side of her nature, then fortunately chapter 5 did not give quick jumps in lust in the plot after chapter 4, the plot is very organic and rich, not counting the scene with Sonya and her stepmother, as if it was either superfluous or did not fit into the atmosphere of the narrative, because there was no continuation of their branch in chapter 5, it was possible to move it to 6 and refine the plot, or show at least some continuation in chapter 5, regarding the scenes in the club, they look very organic, I'm glad that the developer did not rush things with Vi, and dragged out the plot with her, the plot is really exciting, I played in one breath, maybe this played a cruel joke on me, the plot flew by in an instant , but as I wrote earlier, the wait is not worth the effort, such a plot should come out once every 1.5 months at most, it felt like if such a plot came out once a month, the project would be priceless, I would continue to support the developer without sparing my money, I think I'm not the only one. But for now, this is starting to look like a regular milking machine like the game Innocent Witches, where there are many promises and little action, but as for the animations, the developer is great, he really gave something new, but it still doesn't justify such a long wait!
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I eagerly await the games that you and others who call this milking have coming out. Because if you think it's milking, you must think it's easy to do.
 
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am i crazy, or did this game used to have choices? i think remember being able to select certain dialogue options before, albeit few and far between
 
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Great game, top 3 on this flavor for me atm. Beautiful art, good writing, improving every update with some details that for me are perfect, glad to see the dev doing good. Keep up the good work :)
 
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Chelsea:p said:
The game is not bad. The problem is that there are no choices.
This always discourages me but I keep playing because of Anya, she is the only one who shows true love for Eric but that cuckold is too blind to realize it. She will be corrupted because she is a kinetic choice unfortunately and because of Mc too:cry:
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In fact, even a simple choice of YES or NO would be enough!
1. YES - escalate the situation further = HJ.
2. NO - everything will be just teasing, no more.
 
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blubbervink said:
Its not the choice thats the problem, its what comes after.

Y'all have no idea what you are talking about.
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:rolleyes: what comes after:
"1. YES - escalate the situation further = HJ.
2. NO - everything will be just teasing, no more."


This is just an example and so on throughout the entire game, YES or NO - that’s all.
 
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ItsNotUs said:
:rolleyes: what comes after:
"1. YES - escalate the situation further = HJ.
2. NO - everything will be just teasing, no more."


This is just an example and so on throughout the entire game, YES or NO - that’s all.
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Alright. Let me explain why this is problematic. Try to follow.

Lets take the choice of having Vi give Sai that handjob.

If you choose yes, it happens and you get the handjob scene.
if you choose no, it does not happen and it goes to a teasing scene.

This is already 2 different scenes that need to be written and drawn/created. Creating double the work.

Now any escalation that comes after need to keep your choice in mind.

Meaning that if you choose yes, you get the option for a blowjob scene but you can also say no to this for more teasing.
If you choose No before, it wouldnt make sense to suddenly go to a blowjob thats an escalation that doesnt make sense, therefore you will need a handjob scene first, theoretically of course. To wich, again, you can say Yes or no.
This will quadrupel the work. And keep in mind you will need to write scenes that reflect your choices from before. If you said no to all scenes and only kept teasing it wouldnt make sense to have Vi be able to get into a gangbang thats the same scene if you had said yes to all previous options. You will need new dialogue, scenes everything.

I know a yes or no choice seem simple, but it is not.
Would the game be better if it had options where you could choose the outcome? Sure. I wont disagree. But dont come here and say that a yes or no choice is simple. Because again, its what comes after.
 
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ItsNotUs said:
:rolleyes: what comes after:
"1. YES - escalate the situation further = HJ.
2. NO - everything will be just teasing, no more."


This is just an example and so on throughout the entire game, YES or NO - that’s all.
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I agree with Blubbervink, It nice to have choices and pathing, but indeed to make a pathing game, for each path you need to make more scenes, different outcomes, more work for the developer. But not all VN should be like that, this vn is made like a book with images, when a writer writes a book, you not going to tell him either, i rather wanted you made me choices if I wanted to see that murder happen, or that the characters wife would sleep with him, or that I could choose to be rich instead of a poor street vendor.
 
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blubbervink said:
Alright. Let me explain why this is problematic. Try to follow.

Lets take the choice of having Vi give Sai that handjob.

If you choose yes, it happens and you get the handjob scene.
if you choose no, it does not happen and it goes to a teasing scene.

This is already 2 different scenes that need to be written and drawn/created. Creating double the work.

Now any escalation that comes after need to keep your choice in mind.

Meaning that if you choose yes, you get the option for a blowjob scene but you can also say no to this for more teasing.
If you choose No before, it wouldnt make sense to suddenly go to a blowjob thats an escalation that doesnt make sense, therefore you will need a handjob scene first, theoretically of course. To wich, again, you can say Yes or no.
This will quadrupel the work. And keep in mind you will need to write scenes that reflect your choices from before. If you said no to all scenes and only kept teasing it wouldnt make sense to have Vi be able to get into a gangbang thats the same scene if you had said yes to all previous options. You will need new dialogue, scenes everything.

I know a yes or no choice seem simple, but it is not.
Would the game be better if it had options where you could choose the outcome? Sure. I wont disagree. But dont come here and say that a yes or no choice is simple. Because again, its what comes after.
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Firaxius said:
I agree with Blubbervink, It nice to have choices and pathing, but indeed to make a pathing game, for each path you need to make more scenes, different outcomes, more work for the developer. But not all VN should be like that, this vn is made like a book with images, when a writer writes a book, you not going to tell him either, i rather wanted you made me choices if I wanted to see that murder happen, or that the characters wife would sleep with him, or that I could choose to be rich instead of a poor street vendor.
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There is no problem here, i agree that a little more work needs to be done.
I'm not suggesting, but - the text base is settled in the same way as in many similar projects, just in the NO option - the VI is removed and only Ari remains and etc!
This is the easiest way to make a choice, that’s all!

Using the example of the "MoonR." - MC and his girlfreand go for a booz for party, whether in a bar or on the street with homeless man, there are options to choose from, they affect what happens in these scenes, but they do not affect future content since the base is the same!


A simple choice of YES NO will not hard affect the development time, but need to work on some scenes, also change some texts - it’s not difficult - it’s like working with layers - you have a base and the layers can be hidden making the scene varied!
 
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